thisThe first tringy. The first try.

I'm not sure if this is what you meant but I'm guessing it is!

hi hHi! How are you? Hi! How are you?

Capitalise the beginning of your sentences! "Hi" and "How are you?" should be two different sentences, or you could say "Hi, how are you?".

I live in Jordan. I haveam 43 years old. I live in Jordan. I am 43 years old.

If you want this to be one sentence, you can say, "I live in Jordan and I'm 43 years old." When stating your age, say "I am", don't use the verb 'have'.

I sell toys in my shoping . I need to improve my language English t. Thank you. I sell toys in my shop. I need to improve my English. Thank you.

"Shopping" is a verb! A shop is the place. When you use 'need', place 'to' before what you need to do! Saying just "English" is enough! If you are gonna say 'language', put it after 'English', so 'the English language'.