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I found a waffle in the kitchen after dinner.
The waffle was tempting me, like it was saying " Eat me", so I couldn't take my eyes off it.
I tend to gain weight when I eat waffles, so I didn't want to have it.
But it was tempting me so much, I ended up eating it.


抗えなかった
晩御飯を食べた後、台所でワッフルを見つけました。
ワッフルが「私を食べて」と言っているみたいに誘惑してきて、目が離せませんでした。
私は食べると太りやすいので食べたくなかったのですが、ものすごく誘惑してくるので、ついに食べてしまいました。

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Couldn’t Resist

Couldn’t Resist

I found a waffle in the kitchen after dinner.

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LeahLeah

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Couldn’t Resist


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I found a waffle in the kitchen after dinner.


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The waffle was tempting me, like it was saying " Eat me", so I couldn't take my eyes off it.


The waffle was tempting me, like it was saying " Eat me", so. So, I couldn't take my eyes off of it. The waffle was tempting me, like it was saying " Eat me". So, I couldn't take my eyes off of it.

What you wrote was fine, but I think this has a bit of a better flow.

I tend to gain weight when I eat waffles, so I didn't want to have it.


I tend to gain weight when I eat waffles, so. So, I didn't want to haveeat it. I tend to gain weight when I eat waffles. So, I didn't want to eat it.

Again, what you said was fine.

But it was tempting me so much, I ended up eating it.


But it was tempting me so much, that I ended up eating it. But it was tempting me so much, that I ended up eating it.

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