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我的生日

我的生日是五月十五日。我已经多次庆祝生日,但我仍然爱着我的生日。一切都是绿色的,外面有很多花。去年是我的生日星期五的,这是庆祝我生日的完美日子。我通常邀请很多家人和很多朋友庆祝我的生日,可是去年是冠状病毒来的。我的妈妈没有能来,我的岳父母也没有能来。我没有能邀请很多人。我邀请了妹妹和我的朋友以及他们的家人。星期四晚上,妹妹给我打电话。她说她的小儿子生病了,他们不能来。我好难过,这么糟糕的生日!
早上我女儿来到我们的卧室。我的丈夫和女儿唱歌我“生日快乐”!因为我有空闲的一天,我没需要上班。爸爸妈妈给我打电话。我岳父母给我打电话。我的朋友在Facebook上写生日快乐。我喜欢生日礼物,可是今天我决定自己买礼物。我上星期买的黑色钢琴在客厅。我从早餐开始,然后弹钢琴。我去超市买食物。我做了很多食物:沙拉,肉菜,蛋糕。我女儿从学校回家,帮我做饭。我丈夫给我送了漂亮的花。晚上我的朋友和她的家人一起来了。我们吃了非常好吃的晚饭,喝了好喝的酒。我们聊了几个小时,跳舞。生日快乐!


My birthday

My birthday is on the 15th of May。 I have celebrated my birthday many times, but I still love my birthday. May is a spring month and the weather is warm. Everything is green and there are lots of flowers outside. Last year my birthday was on Friday, the perfect day to celebrate your birthday. Normally I invite the whole family and many friends to celebrate my birthday, but last year the covid was here. My mom could not come, my parents-in-law could not come. I could not invite many people. I invited my sister and my friend with the families. Thursday evening my sister called me and told that her little son got sick and they cannot come. I got very upset, such a bad birthday!
In the morning my daughters came to our bedroom. My husband and daughters sang for me “Happy birthday”! As I took a free day, I did not need to go to work. My mom and dad called me. My parents-in-law called me. My friends congratulated me on the Facebook. I love birthday presents, but this year I decided to buy a present for myself. The black piano I bought last week was placed in the living room. I started my morning with breakfast, and then I played piano. Then I went to the supermarket to buy food. I cooked a lot of food: salads, meet, cake. My daughter came from school and helped me with the cooking. My husband bought me beautiful flowers. In the evening my friend came with her family. We ate delicious dinner, drank good wine. We talked for a few hours and we danced. It was a nice birthday!

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我的生日

我的生日是五月十五日。

我邀请了妹妹和我的朋友以及他们的家人。

星期四晚上,妹妹给我打电话。

她说她的小儿子生病了,他们不能来。

早上我女儿来到我们的卧室。

爸爸妈妈给我打电话。

我岳父母给我打电话。

我做了很多食物:沙拉,肉菜,蛋糕。

我女儿从学校回家,帮我做饭。

我丈夫给我送了漂亮的花。

晚上我的朋友和她的家人一起来了。

我们吃了非常好吃的晚饭,喝了好喝的酒。

生日快乐!

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valeriaswe

March 1, 2021

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我去超市买食物。


接着,我去超市买食物。 接着,我去超市买食物。

我的生日


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我的生日是五月十五日。


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我已经多次庆祝生日,但我仍然爱着我的生日。


我已经过了很多次庆祝生日,但我仍然爱着我的还是很喜欢过生日。 我已经过了很多次生日,但我仍然还是很喜欢过生日。

一切都是绿色的,外面有很多花。


一切都是绿色的,外面有很多花。 一切都是绿色的,外面有很多花。

May is a spring month and the weather is warm. 五月是春天,天气暖和。

去年是我的生日星期五的,这是庆祝我生日的完美日子。


去年我的生日星期五的,这是庆祝我生日的完美日子。 去年我的生日星期五是庆祝我生日的完美日子。

我通常邀请很多家人和很多朋友庆祝我的生日,可是去年是冠状病毒来的。


通常邀请很多我会邀请全家人和很多朋友庆祝我的生日,可是去年冠状病毒来 通常我会邀请全家人和很多朋友庆祝我的生日,可是去年冠状病毒来

我的妈妈没有能来,我的岳父母也没有能来。


我的妈妈没能来,我的岳父母也没能来。 我的妈妈没能来,我的岳父母也没能来。

我没有能邀请很多人。


我没能邀请很多人。 我没能邀请很多人。

我邀请了妹妹和我的朋友以及他们的家人。


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星期四晚上,妹妹给我打电话。


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她说她的小儿子生病了,他们不能来。


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我好难过,这么糟糕的生日!


我好难过,么糟糕的生日! 我好难过,么糟糕的生日!

早上我女儿来到我们的卧室。


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我的丈夫和女儿唱歌我“生日快乐”!


我的丈夫和女儿唱歌我给我唱“生日快乐”! 我的丈夫和女儿给我唱“生日快乐”!

因为我有空闲的一天,我没需要上班。


因为我有那是空闲的一天,我没因为我不需要上班。 那是空闲的一天,因为我不需要上班。

爸爸妈妈给我打电话。


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我岳父母给我打电话。


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我的朋友在Facebook上写生日快乐。


我的朋友在Facebook上祝我生日快乐。 我的朋友在Facebook上祝我生日快乐。

我喜欢生日礼物,可是今天我决定自己买礼物。


我喜欢生日礼物,是今我决定自己买礼物。 我喜欢生日礼物,是今我决定自己买礼物。

我上星期买的黑色钢琴在客厅。


我上星期买的黑色钢琴在客厅。 我上星期买的黑色钢琴在客厅。

我从早餐开始,然后弹钢琴。


早餐开始我的早晨,然后弹钢琴。 早餐开始我的早晨,然后弹钢琴。

我做了很多食物:沙拉,肉菜,蛋糕。


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我女儿从学校回家,帮我做饭。


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我丈夫给我送了漂亮的花。


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晚上我的朋友和她的家人一起来了。


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我们吃了非常好吃的晚饭,喝了好喝的酒。


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我们聊了几个小时,跳舞。


我们聊了几个小时,一起跳舞。 我们聊了几个小时,一起跳舞。

生日快乐!


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