March 15, 2021
Cleaning the Entrance
This morning, I cleaned my entrance. There were leaves and sand because I hadn't clean there for a long time. Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper. I guess this is because the entrance is not well-ventilated and often gets moisture by dew condensation from the metal door. I removed the mold using mold killer. I have to clean up where easily gets moldy regularly from now on.
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Cleaning the Entrance to My House/Entryway Cleaning the Entrance to My House/Entryway
Usually in English if you are talking about a house entrance you call it an 'entryway' or the 'entrance to the house' :)
This morning, I cleaned my entrancthe entryway/entrance to the house.
This morning, I cleaned the entryway/entrance to the house.
There were leaves and sand because I hadn't clean there for a long time.
Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper.
I guess this is because the entrance is not well- ventilated and often gets moisture by dewecause of condensation from the metal door.
I guess this is because the entrance is not well ventilated and often gets moisture because of condensation from the metal door.
Don't think well ventilated needs a '-', 'by' can mean 'because of' but the second is less formal, and dew/condensation are the same so only needs one :)
I removed the mold using mold killer.
I have to clean up where it easily gets moldy regularly from now on. I have to clean up where it easily gets moldy regularly from now on.
I'd try 'I have to clean up where it gets moldy regularly from now on' having easily sounds wordy :)
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Nice job, very small errors! We have this problem in our entryway too :(
March 16, 2021
Thank you so much!
There were leaves and sand bBecause I hadven't cleaned there forin a long time, there were leaves and sand.
Because I haven't cleaned there in a long time, there were leaves and sand.
"There were leaves and sand because I haven't cleaned there in a long time." is also correct but less natural sounding.
Worst of all,The worst part was that there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper.
The worst part was that there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper.
"Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper." is correct too.
I guess this is because the entrance is non't well-ventilated and often gets moisture by dew condensation from the metal door.
I guess this is because the entrance isn't well-ventilated and often gets moisture from the metal door.
I removed the mold usingwith mold killer.
I removed the mold with mold killer.
I haveFrom now on, I need to clean up wthere easily area that gets moldy regularly from now oneasily on a regular basis.
From now on, I need to clean up the area that gets moldy easily on a regular basis.
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Cleaning the Entrance Cleaning the Entrance to My House/Entryway Cleaning the Entrance to My House/Entryway Usually in English if you are talking about a house entrance you call it an 'entryway' or the 'entrance to the house' :) |
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This morning, I cleaned my entrance.
This morning, I cleaned |
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There were leaves and sand because I hadn't clean there for a long time.
"There were leaves and sand because I haven't cleaned there in a long time." is also correct but less natural sounding. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper.
"Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper." is correct too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I guess this is because the entrance is not well-ventilated and often gets moisture by dew condensation from the metal door.
I guess this is because the entrance is
I guess this is because the entrance is not well Don't think well ventilated needs a '-', 'by' can mean 'because of' but the second is less formal, and dew/condensation are the same so only needs one :) |
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I removed the mold using mold killer.
I removed the mold This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have to clean up where easily gets moldy regularly from now on.
I have to clean up where it easily gets moldy regularly from now on. I have to clean up where it easily gets moldy regularly from now on. I'd try 'I have to clean up where it gets moldy regularly from now on' having easily sounds wordy :) |
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