The Ying and Quan rivers run through my city and join here, dividing the city into three parts known as the Yingzhou, Yingquan and Yingdong districts. The Ying and Quan rivers run through my city and join here, dividing the city into three parts known as the Yingzhou, Yingquan and Yingdong districts.

The Ying and Quan rRivers run through my city and join here, dividing the city into three parts known as the Yingzhou, Yingquan and Yingdong districts. The Ying and Quan Rivers run through my city and join here, dividing the city into three parts known as the Yingzhou, Yingquan and Yingdong districts.

For river names specifically we usually preface them with "the" (the Nile, the Mississipi River, the Tennessee River)

Between the banks and the urban areas and between the banks and the rivers are large spaces about 100 meters in width which are greencovered with many different trees, flowers and shrubs. Between the banks and the urban areas and between the banks and the rivers are large spaces about 100 meters in width which are covered with many different trees, flowers and shrubs.

I wouldn't use the word "green" in this way. I Googled it and it seems like it CAN be used as a verb, but usually more in the sense of "going green" (becoming environmentally friendly).

Between the banks and the urban areas and between the banks and the rivers are large spacens about 100 meters in width which are greened with many different trees, flowers and shrubs. Between the banks and the urban areas and between the banks and the rivers are large spans about 100 meters in width which are green with many different trees, flowers and shrubs.

"space" is ok but "span" is more often used when you're talking about only one dimension (width)

The trees are mostly camphor, ginkgo, pine and sweet osmanthus, and the flowers Chinese rose, coreopsis, evening primrose, oleander and pink muhly. The trees are mostly camphor, ginkgo, pine and sweet osmanthus, and the flowers Chinese rose, coreopsis, evening primrose, oleander and pink muhly.

I'd actually combine these two sentences, since they both start with "the x are mostly" construction

The flowers are mostly Chinese rose, coreopsis, evening primrose, oleander and pink muhly.

A few weeks ago, a large part of the peonies on the north section of the Ying river wasere in full bloom, attracting a crowd of people to watch. A few weeks ago, a large part of the peonies on the north section of the Ying river were in full bloom, attracting a crowd of people to watch.

Peonies is plural --> were

A few weeks ago, a large part of the peonies oin the north section of the Ying rRiver was in full bloom, attracting a crowd of people to watchadmire them. A few weeks ago, a large part of the peonies in the north section of the Ying River was in full bloom, attracting a crowd of people to admire them.

I'd say "a large portion" or something but I'm not sure if "part" is wrong "watch" sounds a little odd, it's really only used for things that are animated or capable of autonomous movement

A wood on the south section of the Ying river can beis sometimes called the "green wonderland" of the city, and temptings citizens to sightsee and take pictures. A wood on the south section of the Ying river is sometimes called the "green wonderland" of the city, and tempts citizens to sightsee and take pictures.

"Can be called" sounds kind of odd, it sort of implies that it is possible that this nickname could be banned/not allowed. I think "is sometimes called" works better.

A wood oin the south section of the Ying rRiver canould be called the "green wonderland" of the city, tempting citizens to sightsee and take pictures. A wood in the south section of the Ying River could be called the "green wonderland" of the city, tempting citizens to sightsee and take pictures.

There are around six bridges across the Quan rRiver and each of them has a unique shape, which looks fascinating at night in colorful lights. There are around six bridges across the Quan River and each of them has a unique shape, which looks fascinating at night in colorful lights.

In the crook of the Ying and Quan rivers, there is a large park equipped with various modern workout facilities, as well as lakes, squares, and greenery areas. In the crook of the Ying and Quan rivers, there is a large park equipped with various modern workout facilities, as well as lakes, squares, and green areas.

Greenery = plants, in the sense of decorative plants or a mass of foliage. This is a noun, not an adjective. You COULD however say "areas of greenery". I also like your use of the word "crook" here!

In the crook of the Ying and Quan rRivers, there is a large park equipped with various modern workout facilities, as well as lakes,having lakes, public squares, and areas of greenery areas. In the crook of the Ying and Quan Rivers, there is a large park equipped with various modern workout facilities, as well as having lakes, public squares, and areas of greenery.

"equipped" being extended to "lakes" sounds weird - unless the lakes are man-made, no one put them there "squares" without some modifier is very vague, I'm not quite sure what to put though

Now, there are a lot of beautiful and lively places in my city, which attract people from other provinces to visit. Now, there are a lot of beautiful and lively places in my city, which attract people from other provinces to visit.

"Now" implies this is a new development, and it didn't used to be like this. If you mean this, then no worries. But if you just want a connecting word, I would go with "so" instead of "now".

Now, there are a lot of beautiful and lively places in my city, which attract people from other provinces to visit. Now there are a lot of beautiful and lively places in my city, which attract people from other provinces to visit.