Jan. 30, 2020
Nexflix series "You"(No Spoiler)
I just finished watching season 1 and I have to say it's quite astonishing. I love how the main character is also a narrator himself which makes the series more intense and thrilling. it is so good that I binge watched and finished just in two days. It reminds me of Breaking Bad which is my all time favourite series. It portrays how we perceive love differently. The storyline is smooth and the characters' actings are mesmerising. Now I am planning to watch season 2 this week. It also receives position criticisms from viewers. Some even says it's even better than season 1. I highly recommend you to watch this show if you have free time.
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I love how the main character is also athe narrator himself which makes the series more intense and thrilling.
I love how the main character is also the narrator himself which makes the series more intense and thrilling.
Assuming the show has only one narrator.
it is so good that I binge watched it and finished it in just in two days.
it is so good that I binge watched it and finished it in just two days.
It portrays how we each perceive love differently (to each other). It portrays how we each perceive love differently (to each other).
Your grammar is perfect, I just added a bit more detail for disambiguation. It wasn't clear from what we perceive love differently.
The storyline is smoothcaptivating and the characteors' actingperformances are mesmerising.
The storyline is captivating and the actors' performances are mesmerising.
It's a bit vague as to what you mean by "smooth" - perhaps "captivating" is a better word to use when praising a story
It also receives position criticismve reviews from viewers.
It also receives positive reviews from viewers.
"Criticism" carries a negative connotation, radically when we're talking about entertainment media.
Some even says it's even better than season 1. I highly recommend you to watch this show if you have some free time.
Some even say it's even better than season 1. I highly recommend you to watch this show if you have some free time.
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Jan. 30, 2020
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Nexflix series "You" (No Spoilers) Nexflix series "You" (No Spoilers)
I just finished watching season 1 and I have to say it's quite astonishing.
I love how the main character is also athe narrator himself, which makes the series more intense and thrilling.
I love how the main character is also the narrator himself, which makes the series more intense and thrilling.
iIt is so good that I binge watched it and finished it in just in two days.
It is so good that I binge watched it and finished it in just two days.
It reminds me of Breaking Bad, which is my all time favourite series. It reminds me of Breaking Bad, which is my all time favourite series.
It portrays how we perceive love differently.
The storyline is smooth and the characters' actings are is mesmerising.
The storyline is smooth and the acting is mesmerising.
Now I am planning to watch season 2 this week.
It has also receivesd positionve(?) criticisms from viewers.
It has also received positive(?) criticism from viewers.
Some even says that it's even better than season 1. I highly recommend that you to watch this show if you have free time.
Some even say that it's even better than season 1. I highly recommend that you watch this show if you have free time.
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Nexflix series "You"(No Spoiler) Nexflix series "You" (No Spoilers) Nexflix series "You" (No Spoilers) |
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I just finished watching season 1 and I have to say it's quite astonishing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love how the main character is also a narrator himself which makes the series more intense and thrilling.
I love how the main character is also
I love how the main character is also Assuming the show has only one narrator. |
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it is so good that I binge watched and finished just in two days.
it is so good that I binge watched it and finished it in just |
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It reminds me of Breaking Bad which is my all time favourite series. It reminds me of Breaking Bad, which is my all time favourite series. It reminds me of Breaking Bad, which is my all time favourite series. |
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It portrays how we perceive love differently. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It portrays how we each perceive love differently (to each other). It portrays how we each perceive love differently (to each other). Your grammar is perfect, I just added a bit more detail for disambiguation. It wasn't clear from what we perceive love differently. |
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The storyline is smooth and the characters' acting are mesmerising. |
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Now I am planning to watch season 2 this week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It also receives position criticisms from viewers.
It has also receive
It also receives positi "Criticism" carries a negative connotation, radically when we're talking about entertainment media. |
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Some even says it's even better than season 1. I highly recommend you to watch this show if you have free time.
Some even say
Some even say |
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The storyline is smooth and the characters' actings are mesmerising.
The storyline is smooth and the
The storyline is It's a bit vague as to what you mean by "smooth" - perhaps "captivating" is a better word to use when praising a story |
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