Oct. 13, 2020
When I was a kid, I loved zoos, and I still love them a lot. A zoo is a safe place for some animals such as deer. Deer are safe in zoos because they are not hunted by lions or humans. However, for some animals, a zoo can be a boring place. Lions, for instance, love to live in forests and they like to hunt other animals as well. In a zoo, they don't have the opportunity to hunt any animal. They are fed by zookeepers.
I am in favor of zoos as long as animals have a large space to move around and enjoy nature. On the other hand, when animals don't have sufficient space, I am against such zoos. This is because animals suffer in tight cages and become sick.
When I was a kid, I loved zoos, and I still love them a lot.
Deer are safe in a zoos because they are not hunted by lions or humans.
However, for someother animals, a zoo can be a boring place.
Lions, fFor instance, lions love to live in forests and they like tograsslands (or woodlands) and hunt other animals as well.
In a zoo, they don't have the opportunity to hunt any animal.
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I am in favor of zoos as long as animals have a large space to moveroam around and enjoy nature.
Although your sentence was grammatically correct, your English level is high enough that I will substitute better verbs for you whenever possible.
On the other hand, whenif animals don't have sufficientenough space, then I am against such zoos.
This is because animals suffer in tight cagspaces and becomethey can get sick.
When I was a kid, I loved zoos, and I still love them a lot.
A zoo is a safe place for some animals such as deer.
Deer are safe in zoos because they are not hunted by lions or humans.
You could also say "they're not hunted" or "they aren't hunted" instead of "They are not hunted".
Lions, for instance, love to live in forests and they like to hunt other animals as well.
You could also phrase the sentence as, "Lions, for instance, love to live in forests as well as hunt other animals".
In a zoo, they don't have the opportunity to hunt anyother animals.
They are fed by zookeepers.
You can use "they're" instead of "they are".
I am in favor of zoos as long as the animals have a large enough space to move around and enjoy nature.
You can say "I'm" instead of "I am".
On the other hand, when animals don't have sufficient space, I am against such zoos.
You can say "I'm" instead of "I am".
You could use "I'm against such zoos" if you phrased the sentence like, "I'm against such zoos where the animals don't have sufficient space".
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Great Job! Just a few corrections! I agree that zoos are a good place for animals as long as they have enough space to roam around and play in. They're also good for helping preserve endangered species.
Zoos!
When I was a kid, I loved zoos, and I still love them a lot.
A zoo is a safe place for some animals such as deer.
Deer are safe in zoos because they are not hunted by lions or humans.
However, for some animals, a zoo can be a boring place.
Lions, for instance, love to live in foreststhe savanna and they like to hunt other animals as well.
Lions don't really live in forests :)
In a zoo, they don't have the opportunity to hunt any animals.
They are fed by zookeepers.
I am in favor of zoos as long as animals have a large spacespace large enough to move around and enjoy nature.
On the other hand, when animals don't have sufficient space, I am against such zoos.
This is because animals suffer in tight cages and become sick.
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When I was a kid, I loved zoos, and I still love them a lot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A zoo is a safe place for some animals such as deer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Deer are safe in zoos because they are not hunted by lions or humans. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Deer are safe in zoos because they are not hunted by lions or humans. You could also say "they're not hunted" or "they aren't hunted" instead of "They are not hunted". Deer are safe in a zoo |
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However, for some animals, a zoo can be a boring place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! However, for |
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Lions, for instance, love to live in forests and they like to hunt other animals as well. Lions, for instance, love to live in Lions don't really live in forests :) Lions, for instance, love to live in forests and they like to hunt other animals as well. You could also phrase the sentence as, "Lions, for instance, love to live in forests as well as hunt other animals".
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In a zoo, they don't have the opportunity to hunt any animal. In a zoo, they don't have the opportunity to hunt any animals. In a zoo, they don't have the opportunity to hunt In a zoo, they don't have the opportunity to hunt |
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They are fed by zookeepers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They are fed by zookeepers. You can use "they're" instead of "they are".
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I am in favor of zoos as long as animals have a large space to move around and enjoy nature. I am in favor of zoos as long as animals have a I am in favor of zoos as long as the animals have a large enough space to move around and enjoy nature. You can say "I'm" instead of "I am". I am in favor of zoos as long as animals have a large space to Although your sentence was grammatically correct, your English level is high enough that I will substitute better verbs for you whenever possible. |
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On the other hand, when animals don't have sufficient space, I am against such zoos. This sentence has been marked as perfect! On the other hand, when animals don't have sufficient space, I am against You can say "I'm" instead of "I am". You could use "I'm against such zoos" if you phrased the sentence like, "I'm against such zoos where the animals don't have sufficient space". On the other hand, |
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