Later i sit for computer and a little playing in game, her will be nameI played a game on the computer. It was called cs 2. Later I played a game on the computer. It was called cs 2.

Later iI siat forat my computer and a little playing inplayed some game, s... her will be name cs 2. Later I sat at my computer and played some games... her will be name cs 2.

pastence of sit I'm not sure what you meant with the second half of this sentence.

Then iI went onto the kithchen, that eatingand ate some tasty soup. Then I went to the kitchen, and ate some tasty soup.

Then iI went onto the kithchen, that eatingo drink a tasty soup. Then I went to the kithchen to drink a tasty soup.

drink soup, not eat, which kind of implies some chewing haha munching

Right now I want to sit forat my work place and startbeging watch learning an educational video. Right now I want to sit at my work place and begin watching an educational video.

Right now, I want to sit forat my work place and starting watch learning videos. Right now, I want to sit at my work place and watch learning videos.

Also not too sure what you are referring to here.

Then wantI’d like to rest and watch ona twitch tournament or yYoutTube. Then I’d like to rest and watch a twitch tournament or YouTube.

Then I want rest and watch on twitch tournaments or youtube. Then I want rest and watch twitch tournaments or youtube.

I waoke up early this morning. I woke up early this morning.

Use the past tense as you are speaking about an action already completed.

I wake up early in the morning. I wake up early in the morning.

This present tense makes this statement a general statement. You're saying that you usually wake up early. to refer to this morning specifically: "I woke up early this morning"

On tThe clock wasread 8.00 a.m, and iI went ton breakfast. The clock read 8.00 a.m, and I went to breakfast.

Always capitalize “i”

On tThe clock wasread 8.00 a.m, and i. when I went onfor breakfast. The clock read 8.00 a.m. when I went for breakfast.

"The clock read____" is a common way to say it. Or just " It was 8:00AM on the clock," or "the clock showed 8:00AM" i needs to be capitalized 'for' makes more sense than 'on'

Put isI put the kettle on the storve, that heit boiled. I put the kettle on the stove, that it boiled.

In English, nouns aren’t referred to as feminine (she) or masculine (he), but indefinite (it).

Put isI put the kettle on the storve, that he boil. I put the kettle on the stove.

since you mention that you waited for it to boil in your next sentece, it's a bit repetitive to mention it twice.

When kettle was boiled over, ithe water was boiling, I poured tea in my cup, then cooked sandwithches with cheese. When the water was boiling, I poured tea in my cup, then cooked sandwiches with cheese.

In English, when something “boils over” it generally is a bad thing as the water is going over the edges of the pot.

When kettle was boiled over, i I poured tea into my cup, then cooked sandwithches withI made grilled cheese. When kettle was boiled over, I poured tea into my cup, then I made grilled cheese.

I think grilled cheese is the dish you are referring to.

WIt was really delicious. It was really delicious.

WIt was really delicious. It was really delicious.

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