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I want to learn everyday spoken English, please consider this when correcting. Today is holiday where i living, but as i work homeoffice, my routine doesn't change much. I basically woke up, read my book while drunk my coffee and than I practiced yoga for 40 minutes. After that i have breakfast which was 1 piece of bread with eggs and cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food). So, i worked a little bit, and 11am i I did a workout in my house because the gym was closed. Than, i have my lunch e now i'm writtening this. Right aways, I'm going out to pedal about 30 minutes ou something like that and to enjoy the beautiful day.
Quero aprender inglês falado do dia a dia, por favor, leve isso em consideração ao corrigir. Hoje é feriado onde moro, mas como trabalho em casa, minha rotina não muda muito. Basicamente, acordei, li meu livro enquanto tomava café e depois pratiquei ioga por 40 minutos. Depois disso, tomei café da manhã, que consistiu em uma fatia de pão com ovos e queijo e dois pãezinhos de queijo (comida tradicional brasileira). Então, trabalhei um pouco e, às 11h, fiz um treino em casa porque a academia estava fechada. Depois, almocei e agora estou escrevendo isso. Daqui a pouco, vou sair para pedalar por uns 30 minutos e aproveitar o lindo dia
My rotine today
My routine today
I want to learn everyday spoken English, p. Please consider this when correcting.
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Today is a holiday where i(I am living, but as i work/I live), but since I work from (a homeoffice/home), my routine doesn't change much.
I basically woake up, read my/a book while druinking my coffee and thaen I practiced yoga for 40 minutes.
After that iI have breakfast which wasis (verb tenses must match) 1 piece of bread with eggs and, cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food).
Sounds like a good breakfast!
So, i worked a little bit, and then at 11am i I did a workout (in my house/at home) because the gym was closed.
Than, ien I haved my lunch e now i'mwhile writtening this.
Right aways, I'mnow I'll be going out to pedalbiking for about 30 minutes our something like that and to enjoy the beautiful day.
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Sounds like a good routine! Well written
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Since "routine" means a recurring schedule (and today seems to be a bit different than most days), a better title would be "What I did Today," or maybe if this is answering a question, "What Did I Do Today?" Note: in titles we capitalize every "important" word, I would recommend looking up the rules to get a better understanding of it.
I want to learn everyday spoken English, so please consider thisat when you correct my writing.
Using the gerund form of "to correct" doesn't feel quite right in this sentence, since it causes the subject to be omitted.
Today is a holiday where iI livinge, but as iI work at homeoffice, my routine doesn't change much.
I bBasically I woke up, read my book while I druank my coffee and than I, then practiced yoga for 40 minutes.
40 minutes seems really exact. In spoken English, we usually approximate stuff like this (unless the situation demands accuracy). It would sound way more natural to say "about 40 minutes," instead. Also, when listing actions we can omit the personal pronoun if the context makes it clear. eg., "I studied, passed, and celebrated."
After that iI haved breakfast, which was 1a piece of bread with eggs and cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (a traditional bBrazilian food).
Keep an eye on those verb tenses. Also, using an indefinite article makes more sense in this case.
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Unfortunately, "so" doesn't work like that. I shuffled around the sentence a bit to make it sound more natural.
Than, iNow, I'm haveing my lunch e now i'mwhile writtening this.
Now sounds better. Also, "than" is used to compare two things, "I am more tired than you," while "then" is used to express sequentiality: "I failed my midterm, then I cried myself to sleep." Write is an irregular verb, so the personal present continuous case is "I'm writing."
Right awaysNext, I'm going out to pedal for about 30 minutes our something like that and toand enjoy the beautiful day.
I'm assuming you mean to say that you're immediately going to for a pedal (bike ride?), in which case "going to pedal" would work best. If the action is going to happen soon, but not necessarily IMMEDIATELY, then "will pedal" would work as well. The "or something" sounds really natural.
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Looks good! Just remember your verb forms and that when we talk about a time, we use "at." So: "At night my cat prowls my apartment," instead of "night, my cat prowls my apartment." Keep it up!
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My rotine today
Since "routine" means a recurring schedule (and today seems to be a bit different than most days), a better title would be "What I did Today," or maybe if this is answering a question, "What Did I Do Today?" Note: in titles we capitalize every "important" word, I would recommend looking up the rules to get a better understanding of it. My rotine today My routine today |
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I want to learn everyday spoken English, please consider this when correcting. I want to learn everyday spoken English, so please consider th Using the gerund form of "to correct" doesn't feel quite right in this sentence, since it causes the subject to be omitted. I want to learn everyday spoken English Very good, but these are 2 sentences |
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Today is holiday where i living, but as i work homeoffice, my routine doesn't change much. Today is a holiday where Today is a holiday where |
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I basically woke up, read my book while drunk my coffee and than I practiced yoga for 40 minutes.
40 minutes seems really exact. In spoken English, we usually approximate stuff like this (unless the situation demands accuracy). It would sound way more natural to say "about 40 minutes," instead. Also, when listing actions we can omit the personal pronoun if the context makes it clear. eg., "I studied, passed, and celebrated." I basically w |
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After that i have breakfast which was 1 piece of bread with eggs and cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food). After that Keep an eye on those verb tenses. Also, using an indefinite article makes more sense in this case. After that Sounds like a good breakfast! |
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So, i worked a little bit, and 11am i I did a workout in my house because the gym was closed.
Unfortunately, "so" doesn't work like that. I shuffled around the sentence a bit to make it sound more natural. So, i worked a little bit, and then at 11am |
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Than, i have my lunch e now i'm writtening this.
Now sounds better. Also, "than" is used to compare two things, "I am more tired than you," while "then" is used to express sequentiality: "I failed my midterm, then I cried myself to sleep." Write is an irregular verb, so the personal present continuous case is "I'm writing." Th |
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Right aways, I'm going out to pedal about 30 minutes ou something like that and to enjoy the beautiful day.
I'm assuming you mean to say that you're immediately going to for a pedal (bike ride?), in which case "going to pedal" would work best. If the action is going to happen soon, but not necessarily IMMEDIATELY, then "will pedal" would work as well. The "or something" sounds really natural. Right |
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