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Feb. 2, 2026

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My rotine today

I want to learn everyday spoken English, please consider this when correcting. Today is holiday where i living, but as i work homeoffice, my routine doesn't change much. I basically woke up, read my book while drunk my coffee and than I practiced yoga for 40 minutes. After that i have breakfast which was 1 piece of bread with eggs and cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food). So, i worked a little bit, and 11am i I did a workout in my house because the gym was closed. Than, i have my lunch e now i'm writtening this. Right aways, I'm going out to pedal about 30 minutes ou something like that and to enjoy the beautiful day.


Quero aprender inglês falado do dia a dia, por favor, leve isso em consideração ao corrigir. Hoje é feriado onde moro, mas como trabalho em casa, minha rotina não muda muito. Basicamente, acordei, li meu livro enquanto tomava café e depois pratiquei ioga por 40 minutos. Depois disso, tomei café da manhã, que consistiu em uma fatia de pão com ovos e queijo e dois pãezinhos de queijo (comida tradicional brasileira). Então, trabalhei um pouco e, às 11h, fiz um treino em casa porque a academia estava fechada. Depois, almocei e agora estou escrevendo isso. Daqui a pouco, vou sair para pedalar por uns 30 minutos e aproveitar o lindo dia

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My rotine today


My rotine tWhat I Did Today What I Did Today

Since "routine" means a recurring schedule (and today seems to be a bit different than most days), a better title would be "What I did Today," or maybe if this is answering a question, "What Did I Do Today?" Note: in titles we capitalize every "important" word, I would recommend looking up the rules to get a better understanding of it.

My rotine today My rotine today

My routine today

My routine today My routine today

I want to learn everyday spoken English, please consider this when correcting.


I want to learn everyday spoken English, so please consider thisat when you correct my writing. I want to learn everyday spoken English, so please consider that when you correct my writing.

Using the gerund form of "to correct" doesn't feel quite right in this sentence, since it causes the subject to be omitted.

I want to learn everyday spoken English, p. Please consider this when correcting. I want to learn everyday spoken English. Please consider this when correcting.

Very good, but these are 2 sentences

I want to learn everyday spoken English, so please consider this when correcting. I want to learn everyday spoken English, so please consider this when correcting.

it's better to add a conjunction to put the two phrases together

Today is holiday where i living, but as i work homeoffice, my routine doesn't change much.


Today is a holiday where iI livinge, but as iI work at homeoffice, my routine doesn't change much. Today is a holiday where I live, but as I work at home, my routine doesn't change much.

Today is a holiday where i(I am living, but as i work/I live), but since I work from (a homeoffice/home), my routine doesn't change much. Today is a holiday where (I am living/I live), but since I work from (a homeoffice/home), my routine doesn't change much.

Today is holiday where i'm living, but as i work homeofficfrom home, my routine doesn't change much. Today is holiday where i'm living, but as i work from home, my routine doesn't change much.

for remote work we often just say working from home

I basically woke up, read my book while drunk my coffee and than I practiced yoga for 40 minutes.


I bBasically I woke up, read my book while I druank my coffee and than I, then practiced yoga for 40 minutes. Basically I woke up, read my book while I drank my coffee, then practiced yoga for 40 minutes.

40 minutes seems really exact. In spoken English, we usually approximate stuff like this (unless the situation demands accuracy). It would sound way more natural to say "about 40 minutes," instead. Also, when listing actions we can omit the personal pronoun if the context makes it clear. eg., "I studied, passed, and celebrated."

I basically woake up, read my/a book while druinking my coffee and thaen I practiced yoga for 40 minutes. I basically wake up, read my/a book while drinking my coffee and then I practice yoga for 40 minutes.

I basically woke up, read my book while I druank my coffee and thaen I practiced yoga for 40 minutes. I basically woke up, read my book while I drank my coffee and then I practiced yoga for 40 minutes.

attention to conjugation

After that i have breakfast which was 1 piece of bread with eggs and cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food).


After that iI haved breakfast, which was 1a piece of bread with eggs and cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (a traditional bBrazilian food). After that I had breakfast, which was a piece of bread with eggs and cheese and two little "pães de queijo" (a traditional Brazilian food).

Keep an eye on those verb tenses. Also, using an indefinite article makes more sense in this case.

After that iI have breakfast which wasis (verb tenses must match) 1 piece of bread with eggs and, cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food). After that I have breakfast which is (verb tenses must match) 1 piece of bread with eggs, cheese and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food).

Sounds like a good breakfast!

After that i haved breakfast which was 1 piece of bread with eggs and cheese, and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food). After that i had breakfast which was 1 piece of bread with eggs and cheese, and two littles "pães de queijo" (traditional brazilian food).

So, i worked a little bit, and 11am i I did a workout in my house because the gym was closed.


So, i workeNext, I did a little bit, and of work, and then at 11am i I did a worked out in myat housme because the gym was closed. Next, I did a little bit of work, and then at 11am I worked out at home because the gym was closed.

Unfortunately, "so" doesn't work like that. I shuffled around the sentence a bit to make it sound more natural.

So, i worked a little bit, and then at 11am i I did a workout (in my house/at home) because the gym was closed. So, i worked a little bit, and then at 11am I did a workout (in my house/at home) because the gym was closed.

So, i worked a little bit, and then at 11am i I did a workout inat my house because the gym was closed. So, i worked a little bit, and then at 11am i I did a workout at my house because the gym was closed.

I added and then to add progression, otherwise I don't know if you worked before, during, or after doing a workout

Than, i have my lunch e now i'm writtening this.


Than, iNow, I'm haveing my lunch e now i'mwhile writtening this. Now, I'm having my lunch while writing this.

Now sounds better. Also, "than" is used to compare two things, "I am more tired than you," while "then" is used to express sequentiality: "I failed my midterm, then I cried myself to sleep." Write is an irregular verb, so the personal present continuous case is "I'm writing."

Than, ien I haved my lunch e now i'mwhile writtening this. Then I had my lunch now while writting this.

Thaen, i havate my lunch eand now i'm writtening this. Then, i ate my lunch and now i'm writing this.

Right aways, I'm going out to pedal about 30 minutes ou something like that and to enjoy the beautiful day.


Right awaysNext, I'm going out to pedal for about 30 minutes our something like that and toand enjoy the beautiful day. Next, I'm going out to pedal for about 30 minutes or something and enjoy the beautiful day.

I'm assuming you mean to say that you're immediately going to for a pedal (bike ride?), in which case "going to pedal" would work best. If the action is going to happen soon, but not necessarily IMMEDIATELY, then "will pedal" would work as well. The "or something" sounds really natural.

Right aways, I'mnow I'll be going out to pedalbiking for about 30 minutes our something like that and to enjoy the beautiful day. Right now I'll be going out biking for about 30 minutes or something like that and enjoy the beautiful day.

Right awaysfter, I'm going out to pedalbike about 30 minutes our something like that and to enjoy the beautiful day. Right after, I'm going out to bike about 30 minutes or something like that and to enjoy the beautiful day.

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