An uUpdate oOn My Balcony Garden An Update On My Balcony Garden

There are many different styles of capitalization of titles. Words like “on” and “my” are not typically capitalized, but you can also capitalize every word.

I made a video ofabout my little garden yesterday. I made a video about my little garden yesterday.

A video "on" is fine and often the preferred preposition, but I think "about" fits better here.

If you notice any mistakes in the video, including the grammar, or and pronunciation, please let me know. If you notice any mistakes in the video, including the grammar and pronunciation, please let me know.

Grammar and pronunciation are aspects of the video, so listing them as equals with the video doesn’t really work, to me.

I ate the red strawberry last Sunday. I ate the red strawberry last Sunday.

That strawberry looked so good

It was fresh, of course, but also sweet, and full of flavor—I think it's the best strawberry I've had this year (this month? | in the past 12 months?). It was fresh, of course, but also sweet and full of flavor—I think it's the best strawberry I've had this year (this month? | in the past 12 months?).

If you mean the best you’ve had in 2026 (this year), during the first month of the year we would typically say “this month” or “in January.” But if you’re referring to the Chinese year, which hasn’t ended yet, I think it would be clearer to most readers if you said “in the past 12 months.” Instead of “full of flavor” you could say “flavorful.”

But sometimes I just forgot, and sometimes I was afraid it was too boring to keep talking about it. But sometimes I just forgot, and sometimes I was afraid it was too boring to keep talking about it.

But sometimes I just forgoet, and sometimes I was afraid it was too boring to keep talking about it. But sometimes I just forget, and sometimes I was afraid it was too boring to keep talking about it.

I wanted to keep you updated every week because facinglooking at these flowers and fruits brings me one of my happiest and most peaceful moments each day. I wanted to keep you updated every week because looking at these flowers and fruits brings me one of my happiest and most peaceful moments each day.

I agree with Liag’s comment about “facing.”

I wanted to keep you updated every week because facgrowing these flowers and fruits brings me onsome of my happiest and most peaceful moments. I wanted to keep you updated every week because growing these flowers and fruits brings me some of my happiest and most peaceful moments.

I wanted to keep you updated every week because [facing] these flowers and fruits brings me one of my happiest and most peaceful moments. I wanted to keep you updated every week because [facing] these flowers and fruits brings me one of my happiest and most peaceful moments.

"Facing" isn't used this way in English. I'm not sure what action you wanted to describe; here are some guesses: "looking at" "caring for" "cultivating" "enjoying."