An update on My Balcony Garden

Tammy

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An update on My Balcony Garden

I made a video of my little garden yesterday. You can watch it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/ARDwOuZlguo

If you notice any mistakes in the video, grammar, or pronunciation, please let me know.

Thanks in advance!

I ate the red strawberry last Sunday. It was fresh, of course, but also sweet, full of flavor—I think it's the best strawberry I've had this year. It might be simply because I grew it myself, haha.

Having a tiny garden is like watching life unfold in ways you can't fully control. I wanted to keep you updated every week because facing these flowers and fruits brings me one of my happiest and most peaceful moments. But sometimes I just forgot, and sometimes I was afraid it was too boring to keep talking about it.

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Toluwani

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An update on My Balcony Garden

I made a video of my little garden yesterday.

You can watch it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/ARDwOuZlguo

If you notice any mistakes in the video, grammar, or pronunciation, please let me know.

Thanks in advance!

I ate the red strawberry last Sunday.

It was fresh, of course, but also sweet, full of flavor—I think it's the best strawberry I've had this year.

It might be simply because I grew it myself, haha.

Having a tiny garden is like watching life unfold in ways you can't fully control.

But sometimes I just forgot, and sometimes I was afraid it was too boring to keep talking about it.

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You were the one that planted it, of course, it would be the most delicious.

For "fully red berry", I think "a very bright red strawberry" would be better or another way of saying it.

Liag

I wanted to keep you updated every week because [facing] these flowers and fruits brings me one of my happiest and most peaceful moments.

"Facing" isn't used this way in English. I'm not sure what action you wanted to describe, here are some guesses: "looking at" "caring for" "cultivating" "enjoying."

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The video shows just how successful you have been at growing your plants! They look so healthy.

I heard the extra ending "a" sound on two words: "anda" and "lasta." Those two ending sounds (d, t) may be the ones that require the most attention and effort to pronounce correctly. Pronouncing them correctly may be easier or harder, depending on the beginning sound of the next word.

In the text on the screen, "harvest" should be "harvested" (which is what I think you say) because the action was done in the past.

Nice!

An update on My Balcony Garden