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Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreigners coming to work in our city. They are hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries located in Southeast Asia.

Today, different from usual, a professional Japanese instructor looked around our lesson and gave us feedback. This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.

One of the feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a casual one. The reason is that some Japanese could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese. She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.

At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some books which will help teach Japanese.

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This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.

She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.

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She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.

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They are hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries located in Southeast Asia.


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This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.


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One of the feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a casual one.


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The reason is that some Japanese could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese.


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She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.


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At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some books which will help teach Japanese.


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