March 24, 2021
Yesterday i bought a box of neutral soap. i'm allergic and if my nose receives any perfume odor the show it's begin. Eyes, nose and throat are irritated.
When i approached to the box and felt the perfume i had to run away. Obviously the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti allergy pills.
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In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., needs to be capitalized in the title.
Yesterday i, I bought a box of neutralunscented soap.
Yesterday, I bought a box of unscented soap.
iI'm allergic to the scented kind and if my nose receives any perfume or odor, the show it's begins.
I'm allergic to the scented kind and if my nose receives any perfume or odor, the show begins.
EMy eyes, nose and throat arbecome irritated.
My eyes, nose and throat become irritated.
WSo when iI approached to the box and feltsmelled the perfume i, I had to run away.
So when I approached the box and smelled the perfume, I had to run away.
Obviously, the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti -allergy pills.
Obviously, the messenger made a mistake that could cost me a lot of tissues and anti-allergy pills.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Yesterday iI bought a box of neutralunscented soap.
Yesterday I bought a box of unscented soap.
i'mI have allergices and if my nose receives any perfume odoras soon as my nose gets the slightest hint of perfume; that's when the show it's begins.
I have allergies and as soon as my nose gets the slightest hint of perfume; that's when the show begins.
EMy eyes, nose and throat arll become irritated.
My eyes, nose and throat all become irritated.
When iI approached to the box and feltsmelled the perfume iI had to run away.
When I approached the box and smelled the perfume I had to run away.
Obviously the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti allergy pills.
Obviously the messenger made a mistake that could cost me a lot of tissues and allergy pills.
I haven't heard 'allergy pills' in conversation very often. Most of the time I hear 'allergy medication' or something more specific such as an antihistamine.
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Yesterday i bought a box of neutral soap.
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i'm allergic and if my nose receives any perfume odor the show it's begin.
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Eyes, nose and throat are irritated.
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When i approached to the box and felt the perfume i had to run away.
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Obviously the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti allergy pills.
Obviously the messenger made a mistake that I haven't heard 'allergy pills' in conversation very often. Most of the time I hear 'allergy medication' or something more specific such as an antihistamine.
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