Oct. 22, 2025
Vivre au Danemark
Le plus grand problème au mon pays est le prix élevé du loyer. Chaque année, le prix d'un appartement devient plus élevé. Nouveau appartements sont en construction, mais beaucoup sont des appartements de luxe et très cher.
The biggest problem in my country is the price of rent. Every year, the price of an apartment rises. New apartments are constructed, but many are luxury apartments that are very expensive.
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Vivre au Danemark
Le plus grand problème audans mon pays est le prix élevé des loyers/du loyer.
Le plus grand problème dans mon pays est le prix élevé des loyers/du loyer.
DANS un pays
"au" already stands for [à+le], so "au mon" is impossible just like "on/to the my" would be impossible in English
"des loyers" would be a bit more natural, but "du loyer" isn't wrong in itself
Chaque année, le prix d'unes appartement devient plus élevés augmente.
Chaque année, le prix des appartements augmente.
Here I'd definitely go for the plural, you're talking about all of them
to rise, to increase = augmenter
NDe nouveaux appartements sont en constructionits, mais beaucoup sont des appartements de luxe equi sont très chers.
De nouveaux appartements sont construits, mais beaucoup sont des appartements de luxe qui sont très chers.
Indefinite quantity of something countable = des
"de" is used in front of [adj. + noun] in a text for euphonic reasons, although you'd mostly hear "DES nouveaux appartements" in everyday, spoken French
I'd use a simple passive to translate "sont construits"; "sont en construction" emphasizes they're "BEING built" in the very instant you're writing this text
that are = qui sont
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Well last time you were lacking space, we gave you Normandy (which bears many traces of its Old Norse past, including etymologies), I'm sorry, we have no more regions to give :-D
Oct. 26, 2025
Thanks for the corrections! I never knew about Normandy, maybe you guys could just loan it to us for a while haha
Oct. 26, 2025
Normandy was conceded to Rollo/Hrólfr to stop Viking raids in exchange of his conversion to Christianity and his pledge of allegiance to the King of France
If you start visiting us in drakkars once again, we might consider a loan (. ) . (. )
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Le plus grand problème au mon pays est le prix élevé du loyer.
Le plus grand problème DANS un pays "au" already stands for [à+le], so "au mon" is impossible just like "on/to the my" would be impossible in English "des loyers" would be a bit more natural, but "du loyer" isn't wrong in itself |
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Chaque année, le prix d'un appartement devient plus élevé.
Chaque année, le prix d Here I'd definitely go for the plural, you're talking about all of them to rise, to increase = augmenter |
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Nouveau appartements sont en construction, mais beaucoup sont des appartements de luxe et très cher.
Indefinite quantity of something countable = des "de" is used in front of [adj. + noun] in a text for euphonic reasons, although you'd mostly hear "DES nouveaux appartements" in everyday, spoken French I'd use a simple passive to translate "sont construits"; "sont en construction" emphasizes they're "BEING built" in the very instant you're writing this text that are = qui sont |
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