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April 18, 2025

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Onigiri - Part 2 (122)

This is a continuation of my previous entry.

I bought an interesting onigiri when I was in New York City.

It was called "Nori Onigiri."

When I opened it, I was shocked by the color of the wakame seaweed.

The onigiri had shredded wakame seaweed mixed into the rice.

The color of the seaweed was shocking green, so it didn't look appetizing.

I showed my friend the onigiri, and she was also surprised by the color.

I assumed it contained some artificial color.

Now, I regret that I didn't take a picture of it.

I searched for the shop online, but I couldn't find the picture of the onigiri.

I found someone's blog where they explaining the food in the shop, Wasabi in London.

However, the Nori onigiri looked different from the one in New York.

Why I didn't take the picture😭

I just want to show everyone the color...


これは前回の投稿の続きです。

ニューヨークへ行った時、面白いおにぎりを買いました。

それは「のりおにぎり」といいます。

私は、それを開けた時、ワカメの色にびっくりしました。

そのおにぎりのごはんには、細切りのワカメが混ぜてありました。

そのワカメの色は明るいショッキンググリーンだったから、美味しそうに見えませんでした。

友達に見せたら、彼女もびっくりしていました。

絶対、人工着色料が含まれてる、って思いました。

今、その写真を撮らなかったことを後悔しています。

そのお店をオンラインで調べてみましたが、そのおにぎりの写真は見つかりません。

ロンドンのそのお店「わさび」の食べ物を説明してるブログを見つけました。

でも、そのおにぎりは、ニューヨークのやつと違います。

なんで、写真撮らなかったんだろ~😭

みんなに見せたいだけなんだけど。。。

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This is a continuation of my previous entry.

I bought an interesting onigiri when I was in New York City.

It was called "Nori Onigiri."

When I opened it, I was shocked by the color of the wakame seaweed.

The onigiri had shredded wakame seaweed mixed into the rice.

I showed my friend the onigiri, and she was also surprised by the color.

I assumed it contained some artificial color.

Now, I regret that I didn't take a picture of it.

I searched for the shop online, but I couldn't find the picture of the onigiri.

However, the Nori onigiri looked different from the one in New York.

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sachisachi

May 14, 2025

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Onigiri - Part 2 (122)

This is a continuation of my previous entry.

I bought an interesting onigiri when I was in New York City.

It was called "Nori Onigiri."

When I opened it, I was shocked by the color of the wakame seaweed.

The onigiri had shredded wakame seaweed mixed into the rice.

The color of the seaweed was shocking green, so it didn't look appetizing.

I showed my friend the onigiri, and she was also surprised by the color.

I assumed it contained some artificial color.

Now, I regret that I didn't take a picture of it.

I searched for the shop online, but I couldn't find the picture of the onigiri.

I found someone's blog where they explaining the food in the shop, Wasabi in London.

However, the Nori onigiri looked different from the one in New York.

Why I didn't take the picture😭 I just want to show everyone the color...

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sachisachi

May 3, 2025

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Onigiri - Part 2

This is a continuation of my previous entry.

I bought an interesting onigiri when I was in New York City.

It was called "Nori Onigiri."

When I opened it, I was shocked by the color of the wakame seaweed.

The onigiri had shredded wakame seaweed mixed into the rice.

I showed my friend the onigiri, and she was also surprised by the color.

I assumed it contained some artificial color.

Now, I regret that I didn't take a picture of it.

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sachisachi

April 21, 2025

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Onigiri - Part 2

This is a continuation of my previous entry.

I bought an interesting onigiri when I was in New York City.

It was called "Nori Onigiri."

When I opened it, I was shocked by the color of the wakame seaweed.

The onigiri had shredded wakame seaweed mixed into the rice.

I showed my friend the onigiri, and she was also surprised by the color.

I assumed it contained some artificial color.

Now, I regret that I didn't take a picture of it.

I searched for the shop online, but I couldn't find the picture of the onigiri.

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sachisachi

April 18, 2025

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Onigiri - Part 2

This is a continuation of my previous entry.

It was called "Nori Onigiri."

When I opened it, I was shocked by the color of the wakame seaweed.

The onigiri had shredded wakame seaweed mixed into the rice.

I showed my friend the onigiri, and she was also surprised by the color.

Now, I regret that I didn't take a picture of it.

However, the Nori onigiri looked different from the one in New York.

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sachisachi

April 20, 2025

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Onigiri - Part 2

This is a continuation of my previous entry.

When I opened it, I was shocked by the color of the wakame seaweed.

The onigiri had shredded wakame seaweed mixed into the rice.

The color of the seaweed was shocking green, so it didn't look appetizing.

I assumed it contained some artificial color.

Now, I regret that I didn't take a picture of it.

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sachisachi

April 18, 2025

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This is a continuation of my previous entry.


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I bought an interesting onigiri when I was in New York City.


I bought an interesting onigiri when I was in New York City.NOTE: If readers understand Japanese, then "onigiri" might work well. Some readers who do know Japanese might the prefer the term "rice ball." NOTE: If readers understand Japanese, then "onigiri" might work well. Some readers who do know Japanese might the prefer the term "rice ball."

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I think most Americans call it nigiri, and drop the 「お」. As far as how we pronounce it, oof, it's not at all correct! We say it a little bit like ニッギーリー, except the sound we use for 「ニ」 doesn't exist in Japanese, nor does the sound we use for 「リ」.

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It was called "Nori Onigiri."


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When I opened it, I was shocked by the color of the wakame seaweed.


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The onigiri had shredded wakame seaweed mixed into the rice.


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The color of the seaweed was shocking green, so it didn't look appetizing.


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The color of the seaweed was a shocking green, so it didn't look appetizing. The color of the seaweed was a shocking green, so it didn't look appetizing.

"shocking" is a weird word to use to describe a color. Some more natural sounding words could be: "a weird green" "an unusual green" "the wrong green" "a sickly green"

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The color of the seaweed was shockingbright green, so it didn't look appetizing. The color of the seaweed was bright green, so it didn't look appetizing.

"Shocking green" (ショッキンググリーン) isn't used in English. To describe a very bright, eye-catching green color, native English speakers would typically just say "bright green." Sometimes neon green, electric green, and vivid green are used too if you want to be very specific.

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I showed my friend the onigiri, and she was also surprised by the color.


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I assumed it contained some artificial color.


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"assumed" implies that you USED TO "assume it contained some artificial color," but now you don't. Where as "assume," means that you STILL "assume it contained some artificial color."

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Now, I regret that I didn't take a picture of it.


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I searched for the shop online, but I couldn't find the picture of the onigiri.


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I found someone's blog where they explaining the food in the shop, Wasabi in London.


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I found someone's blog where they explaininged the food in the shop, Wasabi in London. I found someone's blog where they explained the food in the shop, Wasabi in London.

Since the person already wrote the blog (in the past), then that person had already "explained the food in the shop", so it uses "explained". If you wanted to instead use "explaining," then you would say "I found someone's blog explaining the food in the shop." This is because "the blog" is doing the explaining (and is still doing so), so it would use "explaining." I'm confused by what you mean with "Wasabi in London." is that the name of the blog (then the sentence should be "I found someone's blog, Wasabi in London, where they explained the food in the shop.")? Or is that the name of the shop (then the sentence should be either "I found someone's blog where they explained the food in the shop (Wasabi in London)." or "I found someone's blog where they explained the food in the shop, which was called Wasabi in London."). English is weird, in that in this special case, it's unclear whether you are applying "Wasabi in London" to the "blog" or the "shop," but through my initial read, it sounded like "Wasabi in London" is the name of the blog.

I found someone's blog where they were explaining the food in the shop, Wasabi in London. I found someone's blog where they were explaining the food in the shop, Wasabi in London.

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However, the Nori onigiri looked different from the one in New York.


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Why I didn't take the picture😭 I just want to show everyone the color...


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Onigiri - Part 2


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