It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially as someone who doesn't like to go to parties and don't like to drink, which is the case for meor drink. It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially as someone who doesn't like to go to parties or drink.

It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially as someone who doesn't like to go to parties and don't like to drink, which is the case for me. It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially as someone who doesn't like to go to parties and drink, which is the case for me.

It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially asif you're someone who doesn't like to go to parties and doesn't like to drink, which is the case for me. It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially if you're someone who doesn't like to go to parties and doesn't like to drink, which is the case for me.

I like the double repetition of "doesn't... doesn't...". I feel that it makes the sentence sound more serious.

I only have three friends from my childhood that are still my close friendsI'm close with, and that's enough to me. I only have three friends from my childhood that I'm close with, and that's enough to me.

I only have three friends from my childhood thatwho are still my close friends, and that's enough to me. I only have three friends from my childhood who are still my close friends, and that's enough to me.

One of them is always busy and often can't hang out frequently. One of them is always busy and often can't hang out.

The other two rather be going out to drink, and I don't like being at places where people are commonusually wasted because I start feeling out of place. The other two rather be going out to drink, and I don't like being at places where people are usually wasted because I start feeling out of place.

The other two would rather be goingo out to drinking, and I don't like being at places where people are commonly wastedwasted all the time because I start feeling out of place. The other two would rather go out drinking, and I don't like being places where people are wasted all the time because I start feeling out of place.

"Commonly" isn't incorrect, but it sounds out of place because it's a bit more formal sounding word and "wasted" is a very casual word.

The other two rathprefer beto going out to drink, and I don't like being at places where people are commonly wasted, because I start feeling out of place. The other two prefer to go out to drink, and I don't like being at places where people are commonly wasted, because I start feeling out of place.

As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox;: I'll never meet introverts thatwho could potentially bond with me because they a're at theirlways at homes. As an introvert, I live in a paradox: I never meet introverts who could potentially bond with me because they're always at home.

I think saying "ironic" and "paradox" in the same sentence sounds kind of weird. I would do one or the other. So an alternate would be: "It's kind of ironic/Its actually ironic: I never meet introverts who could potentially bond with me because they're always at home."

As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox; I'll never meet introverts thatwho could potentially bond with me because they are at theirll at homes. As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox; I'll never meet introverts who could potentially bond with me because they are all at home.

The only solution areis the internet, even though it's very different from real life. The only solution is the internet, even though it's very different from real life.

The only solution areis the iInternet, even though it's very different from real life. The only solution is the Internet, even though it's very different from real life.

Technically, "Internet" is a proper noun in this case, so it should be capitalized according to textbooks. But this rule is pretty lax, so you'll often see it uncapitalized even in newspapers, etc.

The only solution areis the internet, even though it's very different from real life. The only solution is the internet, even though it's very different from real life.

I'm sorry if this text sounds confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages. I'm sorry if this text sounds confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages.

I'm sorry if this text sounds confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to putting your thoughts into words, even in your native languages. I'm sorry if this text sounds confusing; sometimes it's tricky putting your thoughts into words, even in your native language.

Use "your" twice or "our" twice, but don't mix them.

I'm sorry if this text sound confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages. I'm sorry if this text sound confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages.

"Native languages" is fine, but i would probably have said "native language" in the singular.