April 5, 2021
Review 2103
Through shrewd advertising and public health campaigns, many businesses are generating new habits among consumers and profitable for their companies. Controversies have erupted when the tactics have been used to sell questionable beauty creams or unhealthy food. However, the establishment of good habits is necessary to face fundamental public health problems. Some experts want to learn from industry on how to creat new behaviors that happen automatically.
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Through shrewd advertising and public health campaigns, many businesses are generating new habits among consumers andthat are profitable for their companies.
Through shrewd advertising and public health campaigns, many businesses are generating new habits among consumers that are profitable for their companies.
I believe this is the meaning you wanted to convey. My apologies if I misinterpreted the goal of the sentence.
Controversies have erupted when these tactics have been used to sell questionable beauty creams or unhealthy food. Controversies have erupted when these tactics have been used to sell questionable beauty creams or unhealthy food.
However, the establishment of good habits is necessary to face fundamental public health problems. However, the establishment of good habits is necessary to face fundamental public health problems.
I would suggest replacing "face" with "tackle" or "solve."
Some experts want to learn from industry ostudy industry in order to learn how to create new behaviors that happen automatically.
Some experts want to study industry in order to learn how to create new behaviors that happen automatically.
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Great sentences
April 5, 2021
Your correction is the same as my original idea. Thanks!
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Through shrewd advertising and public health campaigns, many businesses are generating new habits among consumers and profitable for their companies.
Through shrewd advertising and public health campaigns, many businesses are generating new habits among consumers I believe this is the meaning you wanted to convey. My apologies if I misinterpreted the goal of the sentence. |
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Controversies have erupted when the tactics have been used to sell questionable beauty creams or unhealthy food. Controversies have erupted when these tactics have been used to sell questionable beauty creams or unhealthy food. Controversies have erupted when these tactics have been used to sell questionable beauty creams or unhealthy food. |
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However, the establishment of good habits is necessary to face fundamental public health problems. However, the establishment of good habits is necessary to face fundamental public health problems. However, the establishment of good habits is necessary to face fundamental public health problems. I would suggest replacing "face" with "tackle" or "solve." |
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Some experts want to learn from industry on how to creat new behaviors that happen automatically.
Some experts want to |
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