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DAEMONIC01

Jan. 19, 2026

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Day 01: I'm back...

When I started writing posts here I was so excited. I had a lot of things to talk about and the positive feedback always made me happy. I was motivated and eager to learn. But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write a post about, so I stopped. But in the meantime, I think I learned a lot and my English improved, so I decided to start over. That's it, I'm here.

Yesterday I finished reading a book from Andy Weir. It's the 'Martian', his first novel. It's a masterpiece if you ask me. I really like it's cynical style so I tried to master it somehow because I am too, but I can't express it well in English. I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep going to read to improve.

I'm working on a really big project anyway. It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis developed in Python. It'll be fully automatic, customizable and scalable. I've been working on it for 4 months, but I don't see the finish line yet. But it must be somewhere ahead of me, so I'll find it and cross it. Or go through it? I don't know, maybe both are good, maybe not. Tell me!

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Day 01: I'm back...

When I started writing posts here I was so excited.

I had a lot of things to talk about and the positive feedback always made me happy.

I was motivated and eager to learn.

But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write a post about, so I stopped.

But in the meantime, I think I learned a lot and my English improved, so I decided to start over.

That's it, I'm here.

Yesterday I finished reading a book from Andy Weir.

It's the 'Martian', his first novel.

It's a masterpiece if you ask me.

I really like it's cynical style so I tried to master it somehow because I am too, but I can't express it well in English.

I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep going to read to improve.

I'm working on a really big project anyway.

It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis developed in Python.

It'll be fully automatic, customizable and scalable.

I've been working on it for 4 months, but I don't see the finish line yet.

But it must be somewhere ahead of me, so I'll find it and cross it.

Or go through it?

I don't know, maybe both are good, maybe not.

Tell me!

Day 01: I'm bBack...

Proper capitalization in your title.

When I started writing posts here, I was so excited.

Add a comma after “here” to separate the introductory clause

I had a lot of things to talk about, and the positive feedback always made me happy.

Add a comma before “and” because the sentence has two independent clauses.

But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write a post about, so I stopped.

"to write about" Shorter and smoother phrasing.

But iIn the meantime, I think I learned a lot, and my English improved, so I decided to start over.

Remove second “But” to avoid repetition.

Yesterday, I finished reading a book fromby Andy Weir.

Add comma after “Yesterday” for clarity.
"by Andy Weir." Correct preposition when referring to authorship.

It's t'The 'Martian', his first novel.

Capitalize the book title correctly.

I really like it's cynical style, so I tried to master it somehow because I am too, but I can't express it well in English.

"its" Correct possessive form.
Add comma before “so” for clarity.

I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep going to reading to improve.

"keep reading" More natural phrasing.

I'm working on a really big project anyway.

You can also say, "Anyway, I’m working on a really big project."

It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis, developed in Python.

Add comma before “developed in Python” to separate descriptive clause.

I've been working on it for 4four months, but I don't see the finish line yet.

Spell out numbers under ten.

Feedback

Corrections are mostly about grammar consistency and punctuation. Good job, keep writing!

I can feel your excitement about your new hobbies. You can use it as your journal entry here. Also, honestly, I'm not really familiar with Python, so I don't think I should say something about that 😂

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DAEMONIC01

Jan. 19, 2026

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Thank you for your feedback!
Those commas are driving me crazy. I have to use them completely differently than in my native language. I can't get used to it.
Anyway, my plan is to write about my (new) hobbies every day or so. I hope they'll give me enough thoughts for a long journal.

When I started writing posts here I was so excited.


When I started writing posts here, I was so excited.

Add a comma after “here” to separate the introductory clause

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I had a lot of things to talk about and the positive feedback always made me happy.


I had a lot of things to talk about, and the positive feedback always made me happy.

Add a comma before “and” because the sentence has two independent clauses.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was motivated and eager to learn.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write a post about, so I stopped.


But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write a post about, so I stopped.

"to write about" Shorter and smoother phrasing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But in the meantime, I think I learned a lot and my English improved, so I decided to start over.


But iIn the meantime, I think I learned a lot, and my English improved, so I decided to start over.

Remove second “But” to avoid repetition.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's it, I'm here.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Day 01: I'm back...


Day 01: I'm bBack...

Proper capitalization in your title.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yesterday I finished reading a book from Andy Weir.


Yesterday, I finished reading a book fromby Andy Weir.

Add comma after “Yesterday” for clarity. "by Andy Weir." Correct preposition when referring to authorship.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's the 'Martian', his first novel.


It's t'The 'Martian', his first novel.

Capitalize the book title correctly.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a masterpiece if you ask me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I really like it's cynical style so I tried to master it somehow because I am too, but I can't express it well in English.


I really like it's cynical style, so I tried to master it somehow because I am too, but I can't express it well in English.

"its" Correct possessive form. Add comma before “so” for clarity.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep going to read to improve.


I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep going to reading to improve.

"keep reading" More natural phrasing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm working on a really big project anyway.


I'm working on a really big project anyway.

You can also say, "Anyway, I’m working on a really big project."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis developed in Python.


It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis, developed in Python.

Add comma before “developed in Python” to separate descriptive clause.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It'll be fully automatic, customizable and scalable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I've been working on it for 4 months, but I don't see the finish line yet.


I've been working on it for 4four months, but I don't see the finish line yet.

Spell out numbers under ten.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But it must be somewhere ahead of me, so I'll find it and cross it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or go through it?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't know, maybe both are good, maybe not.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Tell me!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Day 0: I'm back...


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