Should I studiey? Should I study?

"Should I keep studying?" might be even better.

Should I sStudiey? Should I Study?

Should I studiey? Should I study?

"Studie" is a typo.

For almost a year I've been wondering if I mustshould finish my cadegreer in telecommunications, electronics, and systems. For almost a year I've been wondering if I should finish my degree in telecommunications, electronics, and systems.

For almost a year I'’ve been wondering if I mustwhether I should finish my cadegreer in tTelecommunications, eElectronics, and sSystems. For almost a year I’ve been wondering whether I should finish my degree in Telecommunications, Electronics, and Systems.

"Must" sounds a bit too strong and obligatory. "Should" fits better when you're expressing doubt or contemplation. Also, in English, "degree" is a more common term for an academic qualification than "career" Proper nouns (like the names of fields or areas of study) are capitalized.

I had a girlfriend, and she got into a military collegeacademy. I had a girlfriend, and she got into a military academy.

I had a girlfriend, and she got into who entered a military college. I had a girlfriend who entered a military college

I removed the comma after "girlfriend" because it's unnecessary. Instead of "she got into," I used "who entered," which is a more formal and clear way of expressing the same idea.

We broke up between the months of November and December, but that beganstarted a fire in my stomach and put a question in my mind. We broke up between the months of November and December, but that started a fire in my stomach and put a question in my mind.

We broke up between the months of November and December, but that begantriggered a fire in my stomach and a question in my mind. We broke up between the months of November and December, but that triggered a fire in my stomach and a question in my mind.

We broke up between the months of November and December, but that began a fire in myexperience ignited stomachething within me and a question in my mind. We broke up between November and December, but that experience ignited something within me and a question in my mind.

The phrase "between the months of" is redundant "Began a fire in my stomach" is a metaphor that might be unclear.

I've always liked working out and I'm very capable of surviving and progressing in the(on my own) and living a military lifestyle. I've always liked working out and I'm very capable of surviving (on my own) and living a military lifestyle.

I've always liked working out and I'’m veryquite capable of survivadapting to and progressthriving in the military lifestyle. I've always liked working out and I’m quite capable of adapting to and thriving in the military lifestyle.

"Adapting to" sounds more natural than "surviving," and "thriving" carries a more positive connotation than "progressing."

The problem is that I'm 20 years old, and I only must tonly complete two more years more to finish my college. The problem is that I'm 20 years old, and I must only complete two more years to finish college.

Very small word order edits, but nicely done.

The problem is that I'm 20 years old, and I only must to complethave two years moreleft to finish my college. The problem is that I'm 20 years old, and I only have two years left to finish college.

The problem is that, I'’m 20 years old, and I only musthave two complete twomore years more to finish my college.degree The problem is, I’m 20 years old, and I only have two more years to finish my degree

"I only have" is the correct phrasing here. I also replaced "my college" with "my degree," which is the more appropriate term.

I don't know what to do, especially because I like my career, and I like programming and learning new things. I don't know what to do, especially because I like my career, and I like programming and learning new things.

I added "and" to connect the sentences more naturally.

However, I haven't found a way to tell this to any of my friends or family, they would just say:, "Are you crazy? However, I haven't found a way to tell this to any of my friends or family, they would just say, "Are you crazy?

However, I haven't found a way to tell this to any of my friends or family,; they would just say:, "Are you crazy? However, I haven't found a way to tell this to any of my friends or family; they would just say, "Are you crazy?

You musthave to finish college." You have to finish college."

Anyway, I just wrote this to improve my writing and I'm not looking for support. Anyway, I just wrote this to improve my writing and I'm not looking for support.

Thank you for reading. Thank you for reading.