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Flan_girl

Dec. 30, 2020

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My Future

I don't usually have clear visions of how I want my future to be. However, I can think of some things I would enjoy.
I picture myself in a small house far away from the city. I like small places. However, I want my future house to feel like a home, not some modern house that seems like nobody lives there. I would like to have a small amount of belongings, only keeping what I really like and need. And lots of plants.
I love being alone and I enjoy being in silence, so I would prefer to be far away from the city. I would love to live surrounded by nature.

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Jan. 1, 2021

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My Future


I don't usually have clear visions of how I want my future to be.


I don't usually have a clear visions of howwhat I want my future to be. I don't usually have a clear vision of what I want my future to be.

However, I can think of some things I would enjoy.


However, I can think of somea few things I would enjoy. However, I can think of a few things I would enjoy.

I picture myself in a small house far away from the city.


I picture myself in a small house, far away from the city. I picture myself in a small house, far away from the city.

I like small places.


However, I want my future house to feel like a home, not some modern house that seems like nobody lives there.


HoweverAdditionally, I want my future house to feel like a home, not some modern house that seems likeappears as if nobody lives there. Additionally, I want my future house to feel like a home, not some modern house that appears as if nobody lives there.

What you had was fine. This is smoother.

I would like to have a small amount of belongings, only keeping what I really like and need.


I would like to have a small amount ofvery few belongings, only keeping only what I really like and need. I would like to have very few belongings, keeping only what I really like and need.

smoother

And lots of plants.


And lots of plants. And lots of plants.

This is ok to say, but usually you're not supposed to start a sentence with 'and' when you're writing.

I love being alone and I enjoy being in silence, so I would prefer to be far away from the city.


I would love to live surrounded by nature.


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