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Daily Life: Part 8

lalala, I'm in the mood! Why do i look like so great? The answer is I have addicted to serious TV. Do you like serious TV? What type of TV is your favorite. Just let me know, pal. Since I began watching TV, I got enormous raw words that I had never seen to improve my explanation. I love that context in TV. Every sense, sentence, and plot is perfect! But someone says that not a good idea to enhance my English skills? Because they told me that I would waste so much time on the stories instead studying. I just want to listen more people who posts here. Just feel free to contact me! Put your ideas on the feedback sqaure.

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Daily Life: Part 8

Do you like serious TV?

Just let me know, pal.

Just feel free to contact me!

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Daily Life: Part 8


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lalala, I'm in the mood!


lLalala, I'm in thea great mood! Lalala, I'm in a great mood!

I have to tell you that when someone says "I'm in the mood" it means in the mood for sex, haha

Why do i look like so great?


Why do i look likeI sound so great? Why do I sound so great?

"Look great" always means about physical appearance - someone looking stylish or healthy. For being in a great mood, use "sound great."

The answer is I have addicted to serious TV.


The answer is I havethat I'm addicted to serious TV. The answer is that I'm addicted to serious TV.

What do you mean by "serious TV"? This wouldn't mean anything to me. Do you mean a certain genre, like drama series?

Do you like serious TV?


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What type of TV is your favorite.


What type of TV is your favorite.? What type of TV is your favorite?

This is a question

Just let me know, pal.


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Since I began watching TV, I got enormous raw words that I had never seen to improve my explanation.


Since I began watching TV, I got enormous raw've learned a ton of words that I had've never seen before to improve my explanationvocabulary. Since I began watching TV, I've learned a ton of words that I've never seen before to improve my vocabulary.

"Enormous" is used to describe the size of one thing, but here you want to use a descriptor that means many countable things (because words are countable, not one thing) => "a ton of" Did you mean "new" instead of "raw"? If so, no need to mention that since it is already understood by the next part "... that I've never seen before" Better to say "vocabulary," it's inherent that you can explain yourself better with an increased vocabulary

I love that context in TV.


I love thatving context in TV shows. I love having context in TV shows.

Every sense, sentence, and plot is perfect!


Every senseemotion/feeling, sentence, and plot is perfect! Every emotion/feeling, sentence, and plot is perfect!

"Sense" doesn't work here but I gave two alternatives

But someone says that not a good idea to enhance my English skills?


But someone saysid that noisn't a good ideaway to enhance my English skills?. But someone said that isn't a good way to enhance my English skills.

Although I know you are expressing your doubt/hesitation with the question mark, this isn't a question so it isn't correct to use one.

Because they told me that I would waste so much time on the stories instead studying.


Because tThey told me that I would waste stoo much time on the stories instead of studying. They told me that I would waste too much time on the stories instead of studying.

The "because" would stay if you combined this into the previous sentence, but to use this line as its own sentence means we delete the "because"

I just want to listen more people who posts here.


I just want to listenhear from more people who postson here. I want to hear from more people on here.

"Listen" tends to be for the auditory sense, for people who are literally speaking.

Just feel free to contact me!


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Put your ideas on the feedback sqaure.


Put your ideas oin the feedback sqaurebox. Put your ideas in the feedback box.

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