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If I could read the mind of people...

If I had the ability to read the mind of people, I think probably I wouldn't want to know his or her thoughts. People acts so selfish in these times, and I would probably be depressed to know about what he or she is thinking. If I could influence the minds of people and the thoughts of people, certainly that would be a different situation. I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate. I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than he found it, and to be aware of how his actions affect to others.

If the entire society could have this way of thinking, the world would be a better place.

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If I could read the mind of people...

If I could influence the minds of people and the thoughts of people, certainly that would be a different situation.

If the entire society could have this way of thinking, the world would be a better place.

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

If I could read the mind of people...


If I could read the mind of peoplepeople's minds... If I could read people's minds...

the " 's" " shows possession and comes off more natural. also since people are plural you would want the "minds" to be plural as well

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If I had the ability to read the mind of people, I think probably I wouldn't want to know his or her thoughts.


If I had the ability to read the mind of peoplepeople's minds, I think probably I wouldn't want to know his or hetheir thoughts. If I had the ability to read people's minds, I think probably I wouldn't want to know their thoughts.

since you are talking about more than one person (he or she) its more natural to say "their"

If I had the ability to read the mind of people, I think I probably I wouldn't want to know his or hetheir thoughts. If I had the ability to read the mind of people, I think I probably wouldn't want to know their thoughts.

There's absolutely nothing wrong with saying "His or Hers thoughts" but it's usually more common to use "their" as a neutral pronoun in this case. ;)

If I had the ability to read the mind of people, I thinkpeople's minds, I probably I wouldn't want to know his or hetheir thoughts. If I had the ability to read people's minds, I probably wouldn't want to know their thoughts.

People acts so selfish in these times, and I would probably be depressed to know about what he or she is thinking.


People acts so selfish in these times, and I would probably be depressed to know about what the or she isy're/they are thinking. People acts so selfish in these times, and I would probably be depressed to know what they're/they are thinking.

you don't need to put the word "about". and again since we are not talking about reading everyone's minds. and you would use "they're" or "they are"

People acts so selfishly in these times, and I would probably be depressed to know about what he or she is thinking. People act so selfishly in these times, and I would probably be depressed to know about what he or she is thinking.

Since you are describing an action (act) you need an adverb instead of an adjective, that's why "selfishly" is a better fit. :) Also, "people" is a plural noun so it's "people act" and not "people acts".

People acts so selfish in these times, and I would probably be depressed to knowing about what the or she isy are thinking. People act so selfish in these times, and I would probably be depressed knowing about what they are thinking.

People acts so selfish inly these times, anddays. So I would probably be depressed to know abfind out what he or she ispeople are thinking. People act so selfishly these days. So I would probably be depressed to find out what people are thinking.

If I could influence the minds of people and the thoughts of people, certainly that would be a different situation.


If I could influence the minds of people and the and thoughts of people, certainly that would be a different situation. If I could influence the minds and thoughts of people, certainly that would be a different situation.

saying the minds of people and thoughts of people is redundant. if you can bring them both together because it would be understood that people refers to them booth.

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If I could influence the minds of people and theand thoughts of people, certainly that would certainly be a different situation. If I could influence the minds and thoughts of people, that would certainly be a different situation.

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate.


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I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate. I would try to influence people to want to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate. I would try to influence people to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

I think "to wants" seems unnecessary. If you really want to keep this phrase, it should be "to want."

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate. I would try to influence people to want to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate. I would try to influence people to want to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than he found it, and to be aware of how his actions affect to others.


I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it, and to be aware of how histheir actions affect to others. I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it, and to be aware of how their actions affect others.

we dont know the gender of the person you are referring to and you are speak in general about people. if the gender is not known we would use the pronoun "they/their"

I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it, and to be aware of how histheir actions affect to others. I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it, and to be aware of how their actions affect others.

Again, there's nothing wrong with using "he/his" but since you are referring to ALL PEOPLE, the pronoun "they" works better.

I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than heow they found it, and to be aware of how his actions affect to others. I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than how they found it, and to be aware of how his actions affect others.

I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it, and to be aware of how histheir actions affect to others. I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it and to be aware of how their actions affect others.

If the entire society could have this way of thinking, the world would be a better place.


If the entire society could havethink this way of thinking, the world would be a better place. If society could think this way, the world would be a better place.

you could also say "if all of society could think this way" but what i put sounds more natural

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If the entire society could havehad this way of thinking, the world would be a better place. If the entire society had this way of thinking, the world would be a better place.

If the entire societyworld could have this way of thinking, the world would be a better place. If the world could have this way of thinking, the world would be a better place.

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