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Journal 11/8/20

I'd like to recommend you guys a wearing method in the season between autumn and winter. People usually wear clothes in this period this way: 1, underwear+sweater+coat. 2, underwear+sweater. 3, underwear+coat. The first way is used on cold days. The following two ways are used on not too cold days. I used to wear it the second way, but it is not very suitable on formal occasions. I found a kind of thermal shirt recently and I am really into it because I think it is very useful to help your clothing in that period. Because it is a shirt, it suits perfectly on formal occasions. If the weather is cold, you can wear underwear plus a thermal shirt and if the weather is not too cold, you can just wear a thermal shirt. Furthermore, if it snows, you can plus a heavy coat, as for underwear, it depends. Of course, the color of the shirt is optional. In late autumn, choose a light color. In the early winter, choose dark ones. Thermal shirts can reduce the number of clothes and are suitable for different occasions. Besides this, they can save money because two clothes generally cost more than a single one. I don't know if my point is right. What is your view on the issue?

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Journal 11/8/20

2, underwear+sweater.

3, underwear+coat.

The first way is used on cold days.

Of course, the color of the shirt is optional.

In late autumn, choose a light color.

In the early winter, choose dark ones.

Thermal shirts can reduce the number of clothes and are suitable for different occasions.

I don't know if my point is right.

What is your view on the issue?

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I'd like to recommend you guys a wearing method in the season between autumn and winter.


I'd like to recommend to you guys a method of wearing methodclothes in the season between autumn and winter. I'd like to recommend to you guys a method of wearing clothes in the season between autumn and winter.

You can also say, "I'd like to recommend to you guys a method of wearing clothes during the season between autumn and winter".

People usually wear clothes in this period this way: 1, underwear+sweater+coat.


People usually wear clothes during this periodtime this way: 1, underwear+sweater+coat. People usually wear clothes during this time this way: 1, underwear+sweater+coat.

2, underwear+sweater.


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3, underwear+coat.


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The first way is used on cold days.


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The following two ways are used on not too cold days.


The following two ways are used on not -too -cold days. The following two ways are used on not-too-cold days.

I used to wear it the second way, but it is not very suitable on formal occasions.


I used to wear it the second way, but it is not very suitable on formal occasions. I used to wear the second way, but it is not very suitable on formal occasions.

I found a kind of thermal shirt recently and I am really into it because I think it is very useful to help your clothing in that period.


I found a kind of thermal shirt recently, and I am really into it because I think it is very useful to help your clothing during that period.time. I found a kind of thermal shirt recently, and I am really into it because I think it is very useful to help your clothing during that time.

Because it is a shirt, it suits perfectly on formal occasions.


Because it is a shirt, it suitworks perfectly onfor formal occasions. Because it is a shirt, it works perfectly for formal occasions.

If the weather is cold, you can wear underwear plus a thermal shirt and if the weather is not too cold, you can just wear a thermal shirt.


If the weather is cold, you can wear underwear plus a thermal shirt, and if the weather is not too cold, you can just wear a thermal shirt. If the weather is cold, you can wear underwear plus a thermal shirt, and if the weather is not too cold, you can just wear a thermal shirt.

Furthermore, if it snows, you can plus a heavy coat, as for underwear, it depends.


Furthermore, if it snows, you can plusadd a heavy coat,; as for underwear, it depends. Furthermore, if it snows, you can add a heavy coat; as for underwear, it depends.

Of course, the color of the shirt is optional.


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In late autumn, choose a light color.


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In the early winter, choose dark ones.


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Thermal shirts can reduce the number of clothes and are suitable for different occasions.


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Besides this, they can save money because two clothes generally cost more than a single one.


Besides this, they can save money because two pieces of clothesing generally cost more than a single onpiece. Besides this, they can save money because two pieces of clothing generally cost more than a single piece.

I don't know if my point is right.


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What is your view on the issue?


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