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alexwong2164

Dec. 7, 2020

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The British Village in Izu City

Thanks to a British YouTuber he lives in Japan now.

Introduce this place to us.

Unlike other theme park will have big roller coaster.

This place give you the British “smell”.

I hope they offer foods like “fish & chips”.

For pachinko fans I hope they got “amusement”.

When I live in UK (90’s) I like to go “Amusement” shop.

To play the slot machine just like pachinko in Japan.

Lastly maybe a “bookies” too.

“Bookies” is place you can almost betting anything.

Like queen’s grandson name….

Am I getting in a wrong directions?

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Lastly maybe a “bookies” too.


Lastly maybYou may even have a “bookies” too. place bets. You may even have a “bookies” to place bets.

The British Village in Izu City


Thanks to a British YouTuber he lives in Japan now.


Thanks to a British YouTuber he, who now lives in Japan now., for introducing this place to us. Thanks to a British YouTuber, who now lives in Japan, for introducing this place to us.

Introduce this place to us.


Introduce this place to us.

I combined your two sentences into one. Thanks to a ....... is not a complete sentence.

Unlike other theme park will have big roller coaster.


Unlike other theme park willthat have big roller coaster., this place has a "British" feel. Unlike other theme park that have big roller coaster, this place has a "British" feel.

This place give you the British “smell”.


This place give you the British “smell”.

Again, I had to combine your sentences because the first one was not a complete one. A good way to tell if you have a complete sentence is to determine if there is a subject, a verb and an object. Also, places don't give you a "smell". Instead, they give you a "feel"

I hope they offer foods like “fish & chips”.


I hope they offer foods like “fish & chips”. I hope they offer food like “fish & chips”.

For pachinko fans I hope they got “amusement”.


For pachinko fans, I hope they got “amusement”.are amused. For pachinko fans, I hope they are amused.

When I live in UK (90’s) I like to go “Amusement” shop.


WIn the 90's, when I lived in UK (90’s) Ithe UK, I used to like to go to these “Amusement” shops. In the 90's, when I lived in the UK, I used to like to go to these “Amusement” shops.

To play the slot machine just like pachinko in Japan.


ToYou can play the slot machines just like pachinko machines in Japan. You can play slot machines just like pachinko machines in Japan.

“Bookies” is place you can almost betting anything.


“Bookies” is place you can almost betting anything.

Bookie is not a place, but a person.

Like queen’s grandson name….


Like the name of the queen’s grandson name…. Like the name of the queen’s grandson.

Which grandson? I'm not aware of anyone named Bookie.

Am I getting in a wrong directions?


Am I gettoing in a wrongoff in another directions? Am I going off in another direction?

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