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Jack

Dec. 23, 2021

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I am very sorry, Tim. I just saw your message because I was answering someone's call when your message came.
When your call came, I was on my way home, and I also forgot to turn on my phone camera.
This time, you tried introducing your home town in Chinese. You said your home town was in the countryside and was surrounded by fields.
You also introduced the town which was very near to you, and you said it was very shabby. I think this time, you spoke Chinese really well.
Because I didn't see your message in time, I was not well prepared for this call, and most of the time I was on my way during the call. That is why I feel very sorry.
Anyway, I am always happy to receive your calls.
I hope you stay happy and talk to you next time. Bye bye.

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Jack

Dec. 24, 2021

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When your call camed, I was on my way home, and I also forgot to turn on my phone camera.

How is your ability to answer a call related to your camera being turned on? Were you planning on doing a video chat?

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Jack

Dec. 24, 2021

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Because I didn't see your message in time, I was not well prepared for this call, and most of the time I was on my way during the call.

I don't quite understand what you mean by "and most of the time I was on my way during the call"

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Jack

Dec. 24, 2021

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Jack

Dec. 24, 2021

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This time,When you tried introducing your home town in Chinese: You said your hometown is in the countryside, and is surrounded by fields.

How does this connect to your above sentences? Also, use "is" instead of "was". "Was" is used to reference how something used to be, if his hometown is no-longer classified as being in the countryside than in that case "was" would be the right word.

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Trisha

Dec. 24, 2021

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When your call camed, I was on my way home, and I also forgot to turn on my phone camera.

How is your ability to answer a call related to your camera being turned on? Were you planning on doing a video chat?

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Trisha

Dec. 24, 2021

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Because I didn't see your message in time, I was not well prepared for this call, and most of the time I was on my way during the call.

I don't quite understand what you mean by "and most of the time I was on my way during the call"

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Trisha

Dec. 24, 2021

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Jack

Dec. 25, 2021

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A Reply Message.


A Reply To A Message. A Reply To A Message.

I am very sorry, Tim.


I just saw your message because I was answering someone's call when your message came.


I just saw your message because I was answering someone's call when I got your message came. I just saw your message because I was answering someone's call when I got your message.

can also say "when you texted me"

When your call came, I was on my way home, and I also forgot to turn on my phone camera.


When your call camed, I was on my way home, and I also forgot to turn on my phone camera. When you called, I was on my way home, and I forgot to turn on my phone camera.

How is your ability to answer a call related to your camera being turned on? Were you planning on doing a video chat?

This time, you tried introducing your home town in Chinese.


This time,When you tried introducing your home town in Chinese: You said your hometown is in the countryside, and is surrounded by fields. When you tried introducing your home town in Chinese: You said your hometown is in the countryside, and is surrounded by fields.

How does this connect to your above sentences? Also, use "is" instead of "was". "Was" is used to reference how something used to be, if his hometown is no-longer classified as being in the countryside than in that case "was" would be the right word.

You said your home town was in the countryside and was surrounded by fields.


You said your home town was in the countryside and was surrounded by fields.

You also introduced the town which was very near to you, and you said it was very shabby.


You also introduced me to theis town which was very nearclose to you, and you said it was very shabby. You introduced me to this town which was very close to you, and you said it was very shabby.

I think this time, you spoke Chinese really well.


I think this time, you spoke Chinese really well this time. I think you spoke Chinese really well this time.

Because I didn't see your message in time, I was not well prepared for this call, and most of the time I was on my way during the call.


Because I didn't see your message in time, I was not well prepared for this call, and most of the time I was on my way during the call. Because I didn't see your message in time, I was not well prepared for this call, and most of the time I was on my way during the call.

I don't quite understand what you mean by "and most of the time I was on my way during the call"

That is why I feel very sorry.


That is why I feel very sorry. That is why I feel very sorry.

Can also say "that is why I am really sorry"

Anyway, I am always happy to receive your calls.


I hope you stay happy and talk to you next time.


I hope you stay happy and talk to you next timesoon. I hope you stay happy and talk to you soon.

Bye bye.


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