Nov. 2, 2020
Journal 11/2/20
Generally, I don't buy clothes until they are damaged. A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip. A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I don't wear new clothing they will not go with me. Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy a new one. But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes. Overall, this is an official business trip. This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside. At ordinary times, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater. That is not very suitable on formal occasions. Because I have new clothes now so that those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wear, but they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away.
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Journal 11/2/20
Generally, I don't buy clothes until they areget damaged.
Generally, I don't buy clothes until they get damaged.
A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip.
A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I doidn't wear new clothing, they willould not go with me.
A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I didn't wear new clothing, they would not go with me.
Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy a new ones.
Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy new ones.
But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes.
OvAfter all, this is an official business trip.
After all, this is an official business trip.
This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside.
At oOrdinary timesily, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater.
Ordinarily, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater.
That is not very suitable onfor formal occasions.
That is not very suitable for formal occasions.
Because I have new clothes now so that, I don't wear those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wearvery often, but as they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away.
Because I have new clothes, I don't wear the old clothes very often, but as they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away.
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This is really good, nice job! I, too, have trouble throwing out clothes, even if I never wear them anymore.
Nov. 2, 2020
Thank you for your corrections, thank you very much. We should save, not waste.
Journal 11/2/20
Generally, I don't buy clothes until they are damaged.
A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip.
A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I don't wear new clothing they will not go with me.
Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am not usually not willing to buy a new ones.
Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am not usually willing to buy new ones.
'Ones' because clothes is plural.
But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes.
Overall, this is an official business trip.
This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside.
At ordinary timesUsually, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater, which is not very suitable on formal occasions.
Usually, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater, which is not very suitable on formal occasions.
There's nothing wrong grammatically with 'at ordinary times', but it's not a commonly use expression.
I've combined your next sentence to make it sound more natural.
That is not very suitable on formal occasions.
Because I have new clothes now so that, those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wearbe worn, but they are not worn out yet, and I can’t bear to throw them away.
Because I have new clothes now, those old clothes do not have many opportunities to be worn, but they are not worn out yet and I can’t bear to throw them away.
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Overall, really good job! I don't usually get new clothes until the old ones are completely worn out either :P
Nov. 2, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and I am happy to hear you have the same habits. We should save, not waste.
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Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy a new one.
Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am not usually 'Ones' because clothes is plural.
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This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At ordinary times, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater.
There's nothing wrong grammatically with 'at ordinary times', but it's not a commonly use expression. I've combined your next sentence to make it sound more natural.
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That is not very suitable on formal occasions.
That is not very suitable |
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Because I have new clothes now so that those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wear, but they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away.
Because I have new clothes now
Because I have new clothes |
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