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A Movie: Batman!

Querido Sasha:
Hola mi mejor amiga. ¿Qué tal?

Espero que tus vacaciones son buenas, y estés haciendo toda de las actividades que hablábamos antes de salir.

Me siento como no he hecho nada. Además, he siendo muy floja. ¿Hizo calor, no?

La semana pasada, decidí a cambiar esto. Vi una película nueva llamado “Batman”.

¡A mí me encantaba! ¡La acción, los actores, la música! Que fantástico. Ha olvido como bueno el cine es.

Especialmente, me gustaba el conclusion. Demasiados posibilidades para la película próxima.

Pero, lo vi con mi hermana mayor, y, ahora, ella no puede esperar hablando sobre motos y cómo son frescos.

Ya, por favor, visitarme pronto!

Te extraño.

Fran.


Dear Sasha:
Hello my best friend, what’s up?

I hope that your holidays are going good for you, and you are doing all of the things that we talked about before we left.

I feel like I have done nothing. Additionally, I have felt very lazy. It has been hot, no?

Last week I decided to change that. I saw a new movie, called “Batman”.

I absolutely loved it! The action, the actors, the music! Fantastic. I had forgotten how good the cinema was.

Especially, I loved the ending. Too many possibilities for the next movie.

But, I saw it with my older sister, and, now, she cannot stop talking about motorcycles and how cool they are.

Already, please, come visit me soon!

I miss you.

Fran.

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Kindred Spirit

¿Qué tal?

¡La acción, los actores, la música!

Te extraño.

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July 14, 2022

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A MovieUna película: Batman!

You could write the exclamation marks, but then you must also add the quotation marks to make clear that they're not part of the title.

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July 14, 2022

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Hola mi, mejor amiga mía.

This is more of a content thing: does it make sense to greet her again? You've already done it with "Querida Sasha:".
In vocatives like this one (which have to be separated with comma), it's more stylistic to put the possessive at the end: "Amigo mío", "Querida mía" and so on.

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

Pues “Una película: <Batman>”??? Correcto ??

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July 14, 2022

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Espero que tus vacaciones soean buenas,(,) y estés haciendo toda des las actividades de las que hablábamos antes de salirirnos.

Unlike in other romance languages, the verb "esperar" in Spanish is formed with the subjunctive mood; in fact, you did it correctly in the second subordinate clause.
It is not strange to see "hablar" being used as a transitive verb, being the direct object the subject of the conversation (mostly with pronouns, e.g. "Lo hablamos ayer."). However, this use is colloquial, so I changed it.
Instead of "hablábamos", you could also use "hablamos" depending on how you wanna portray the action.

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

Pues, to say ´best friend´ I could say amiga mía en lugar de mejor amiga ¿ Or did you mean it should have been: Querida Sasha: Amiga mía...

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July 14, 2022

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Me sSiento comoque no he hecho nada.

If you use it as a pronominal verb, the meaning changes.

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July 14, 2022

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¿Hizo calor, no?

Where? Where your friend is or where you are?

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July 14, 2022

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Queé fantástico.

There's a difference between the stressed "qué" and the unstressed "que".

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July 14, 2022

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Había olvidado coómo de/cuán bueno es el cine es.

Same thing with "cómo"/"como".

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

I wanted to say Ï hope you are doing all the activities that we spoke of before we left¨ So correcto: ...y estés haciendo todas las actividades de las que hablábamos antes de irnos And, in this context, does ´las´ Clarify the subject of the past discussion as the activities ?

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July 14, 2022

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Pero, loa vi con mi hermana mayor, y,(,) ahora, ella(,) no puede esperardejar de hablandor sobre motos y cómo son frescosde/cuán estupendas son .

"Ahora" can be written as a digression (with commas) or not (without), depends on your style.
You have traduced "cool" with the meaning of 'cold'. Other alternatives would be "guay" (colloq.) or "increíble".

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July 14, 2022

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Fran.

A dot is not used here.

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July 14, 2022

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¡Ya, por favor,; visiítarme pronto!

Remember (!) the imperative.

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

No entiendo, quería decir ¨I feel like I have done nothing¨, so pronominal verb (sentir) changes not reflexive if its meaning is accompanied by a metaphor or technique or hyperbole? Siento -> no he hecho nada.

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

I wanted to say it has been hot, no?

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July 14, 2022

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I'm not sure what you mean. Could you elaborate?

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July 14, 2022

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Kind of, "de las que" is what introduces the relative clause. "Que" is the main particle and, in this case, it goes with "de" because that's the preposition that the verb "hablar" uses ("Hablé de todos mis problemas, pero no me escuchó."). When that preposition is "a", "con", "de", "en" or "por", you can actually write it without the "las" part ("de que"). However, it is very common to include it, because, this way, it cannot be mistaken for something else.

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

De bueno = of good, if I am going to use como + adjective, must I always do cómo + de + adjective?

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

Gracias, pues ; Cool (colloquial) = guay Cool (formal) = increíble. And (conjugated poder) dejar de + infinitive = (to not/permit) action

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July 14, 2022

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You have to differentiate between "sentir" being used with the meaning of 'I think, my opinion is' and the meaning of 'I am experiencing a physical sensation'. Your sentence means (as I understand it) "I think I haven't done anything" → "Siento que no he hecho nada". If you write "me siento", then it's "Me siento como si no hubiese hecho nada", which means "I feel as if I had done nothing", i.e. I don't feel tired at all, I'm not experiencing the physical sensation of tiredness. An example with this meaning: "Me siento como si no hubiese hecho nada, podría correr diez kilómetros más sin problema.". Does this clarification help?

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July 14, 2022

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That's correct, my question is: where has it been hot? If you're friend is on her holidays, I guess she traveled somewhere, right? If this is the case, there are two different locations in your text: the one where you are and the one where your friend is. I'm only saying that it is not clear which one of the two you're refering two. This is just a question of content, not grammar.

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July 14, 2022

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I wouldn't raise "increíble" to the category of formal, it's just standard. "Dejar" is one of those verbs that has a trillion meanings, so I wouldn't categorise it so fast. Here it's "she cannot stop doing it", not with the meaning of actual permision/necessity; it could also be written as "she cannot stop doing it because of her enthusiasm", so strictly speaking, it means she doesn't wanna stop doing it.

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

Ok so imperative + attached object you stress the second last vowel. Thnx.

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July 14, 2022

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If you're talking about the degree/level of the adjective and want to use "cómo", you must include "de". But that happens in this context, I don't know what you mean by "always". As I've said previously, don't try to translate from one language to the other, "cómo de" is an inseparable structure, so it's not "of good". Consider this, I see the sentence "It happened because of the rain." and I say, so it is "because of" = "porque de"? Does this make sense?

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July 14, 2022

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The stress in the imperative doesn't change. This means that adding enclitics ("me, se, lo") can change the accent (capitalised to emphasise): viSIta = visit; if you add the "me" (visit me) → "viSÍtame", now the accent is necessary because it's the third to last syllable. Another example: esCRIbe = write; esCRÍbeme = write to me; esCRÍbenoslo = write it to us.

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

So the correct phrasing would be Una película: «Batman»

Kindred Spirit

July 14, 2022

Ok I understand count back <- 3 vowels from the end then add accent/stress. But if its both a direct+Indirect attached you do not count the indirect thank you

A Movie: Batman!


A MovieUna película: Batman! Una película: Batman

You could write the exclamation marks, but then you must also add the quotation marks to make clear that they're not part of the title.

Querido Sasha:


Queridoa Sasha: Querida Sasha:

If you are talking about a woman, you have to write the adjectives in femenine (so normally ended in "-a").

Hola mi mejor amiga.


Hola mi, mejor amiga mía. Hola, mejor amiga mía.

This is more of a content thing: does it make sense to greet her again? You've already done it with "Querida Sasha:". In vocatives like this one (which have to be separated with comma), it's more stylistic to put the possessive at the end: "Amigo mío", "Querida mía" and so on.

¿Qué tal?


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Espero que tus vacaciones son buenas, y estés haciendo toda de las actividades que hablábamos antes de salir.


Espero que tus vacaciones soean buenas,(,) y estés haciendo toda des las actividades de las que hablábamos antes de salirirnos. Espero que tus vacaciones sean buenas(,) y estés haciendo todas las actividades de las que hablábamos antes de irnos.

Unlike in other romance languages, the verb "esperar" in Spanish is formed with the subjunctive mood; in fact, you did it correctly in the second subordinate clause. It is not strange to see "hablar" being used as a transitive verb, being the direct object the subject of the conversation (mostly with pronouns, e.g. "Lo hablamos ayer."). However, this use is colloquial, so I changed it. Instead of "hablábamos", you could also use "hablamos" depending on how you wanna portray the action.

Me siento como no he hecho nada.


Me sSiento comoque no he hecho nada. Siento que no he hecho nada.

If you use it as a pronominal verb, the meaning changes.

Además, he siendo muy floja.


Además, he siendo muy flojvaga. Además, he sido muy vaga.

The adjective "flojo" is rather colloquial in this context, you can use "vaga", "perezosa", "holgazana".

¿Hizo calor, no?


¿Hizo calor, no? ¿Hizo calor, no?

Where? Where your friend is or where you are?

La semana pasada, decidí a cambiar esto.


La semana pasada, decidí a cambiar esto. La semana pasada, decidí cambiar esto.

Vi una película nueva llamado “Batman”.


Vi una película nueva llamado “a «Batman». Vi una película nueva llamada «Batman».

¡A mí me encantaba!


¡(A mí) me encantabaó! ¡(A mí) me encantó!

¡La acción, los actores, la música!


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Que fantástico.


Queé fantástico. Qué fantástico.

There's a difference between the stressed "qué" and the unstressed "que".

Ha olvido como bueno el cine es.


Había olvidado coómo de/cuán bueno es el cine es. Había olvidado cómo de/cuán bueno es el cine.

Same thing with "cómo"/"como".

Especialmente, me gustaba el conclusion.


Especialmente, me gustabaó el conclusionfinal. Especialmente, me gustó el final.

"Conclusión" and "final" can be used as synonyms in some contexts, but they don't mean the same.

Demasiados posibilidades para la película próxima.


Demasiadoas posibilidades para la película próxima. Demasiadas posibilidades para la película próxima.

Pero, lo vi con mi hermana mayor, y, ahora, ella no puede esperar hablando sobre motos y cómo son frescos.


Pero, loa vi con mi hermana mayor, y,(,) ahora, ella(,) no puede esperardejar de hablandor sobre motos y cómo son frescosde/cuán estupendas son . Pero la vi con mi hermana mayor y(,) ahora(,) no puede dejar de hablar sobre motos y cómo de/cuán estupendas son .

"Ahora" can be written as a digression (with commas) or not (without), depends on your style. You have traduced "cool" with the meaning of 'cold'. Other alternatives would be "guay" (colloq.) or "increíble".

Ya, por favor, visitarme pronto!


¡Ya, por favor,; visiítarme pronto! ¡Ya, por favor; visítame pronto!

Remember (!) the imperative.

Te extraño.


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Fran.


Fran. Fran

A dot is not used here.

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