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Day 2: Anne of Green Gables

I'm reading the book Anne of Green Gables, currently I'm in the chapter twenty. Until now I can say that it's a beautiful book. I love how the scenarios are described, and the protagonist, Anne, is a beautiful character. She is strong and can deal with difficult situations, like in the chapter where Diana's little sister got a cold and couldn't breath well and, even worse, there wasn't a doctor in the town in that moment. So, Anne, who had experience of dealing with sick childs, managed to stay focus to help Diana's sister. But she also cries for little things, I think that makes her more realistic. We all are contradictory in some aspects.

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Day 2: Anne of Green Gables

We all are contradictory in some aspects.

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Day 2: Anne of Green Gables

We all are contradictory in some aspects.

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We all are contradictory in some aspects.

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Day 2: Anne of Green Gables


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I'm reading the book Anne of Green Gables, currently I'm in the chapter twenty.


I'm reading the book Anne of Green Gables, currently I'm in theon chapter twenty. I'm reading the book Anne of Green Gables, currently I'm on chapter twenty.

I'm reading the book Anne of Green Gables, and currently I'm in theon chapter twenty. I'm reading Anne of Green Gables, and currently I'm on chapter twenty.

Usually in English you don't have to specify "the book" because that's implied when you say "reading."

I'm reading the book Anne of Green Gables, and currently I'm ion the cChapter tTwenty. I'm reading the book Anne of Green Gables and currently I'm on Chapter Twenty.

I love this book, too.

Until now I can say that it's a beautiful book.


Until nowSo far, I can say that it's a beautiful book. So far, I can say that it's a beautiful book.

Until nowSo far I can say that it's a beautiful book. So far I can say that it's a beautiful book.

"Beautiful" isn't technically wrong here, but in English we don't usually describe a book as "beautiful." You could use "a moving/ heartwarming/ wonderful/ delightful/ touching book" or "an excellent/ emotional/ engaging book" instead, depending on what you want to express.

UntilEven now I can say that it's a beautiful book. Even now I can say that it's a beautiful book.

I love how the scenarios are described, and the protagonist, Anne, is a beautiful character.


I love how the scenarios are described, and the protagonist, Anne, is a beautiful character. I love how the scenarios are described, and the protagonist, Anne, is a beautiful character.

I wouldn't use "beautiful" here either; that word is usually used to describe appearance, but I think you want to describe her personality.

I love how the scenarios are described, and how the protagonist, Anne, is a beautiful character. I love how the scenarios are described, and how the protagonist, Anne, is a beautiful character.

She is strong and can deal with difficult situations, like in the chapter where Diana's little sister got a cold and couldn't breath well and, even worse, there wasn't a doctor in the town in that moment.


She is strong and can deal with difficult situations, like. For example, in thea chapter where Diana's little sister got a cold and couldn't breath well, and, even worse, there wasn't a doctor in the town inat that moment. She is strong and can deal with difficult situations. For example, in a chapter Diana's little sister got a cold and couldn't breath well, and even worse, there wasn't a doctor in town at that moment.

This would sound nicer if it wasn't so long

She is strong and can deal with difficult situations, like in the chapter where Diana's little sister got a cold and couldn't breath well and, e. Even worse, there wasn't a doctor in the town in that moment. She is strong and can deal with difficult situations, like in the chapter where Diana's little sister got a cold and couldn't breath well. Even worse, there wasn't a doctor in the town in that moment.

I think it sounds better in two seperate sentences

She is strong and can deal with difficult situations, like in the chapter where Diana's little sister got a cold and couldn't breath well and, even worse, there wasn't a doctor in the town inat that moment. She is strong and can deal with difficult situations, like in the chapter where Diana's little sister got a cold and couldn't breath well and, even worse, there wasn't a doctor in town at that moment.

So, Anne, who had experience of dealing with sick childs, managed to stay focus to help Diana's sister.


So, Anne, who had experience of dealing with sick childsren, managed to stay focus toed and help Diana's sister. So, Anne, who had experience dealing with sick children, managed to stay focused and help Diana's sister.

So, Anne, who had experience ofin dealing with sick childsren, managed to stay focused to help Diana's sister. So, Anne, who had experience in dealing with sick children, managed to stay focused to help Diana's sister.

So, Anne, who had experience of dealing with sick childsren, managed to stay focused to help Diana's sister. So, Anne, who had experience dealing with sick children, managed to stay focused to help Diana's sister.

The plural of "child" is "children." English can be annoying like this.

But she also cries for little things, I think that makes her more realistic.


But she also cries fover little things, and I think that makes her more realistic. But she also cries over little things and I think that makes her more realistic.

But she also cries fover little things, and I think that makes her more realistic. But she also cries over little things, and I think that makes her more realistic.

Butecause she also cries forat little things, I think that makes her more realistic. Because she also cries at little things, I think that makes her more realistic.

I agree.

We all are contradictory in some aspects.


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