Talking aAbout My Family Talking About My Family

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Talking aAbout My Family Talking About My Family

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WeMy wife and I got married 5 years ago. My wife and I got married 5 years ago.

Since you talked about other people besides just your wife between the end of the last sentence and this one, restate that it was "my wife and I" who got married.

WeMy wife and I got married 5 years ago. My wife and I got married 5 years ago.

Because multiple people were introduced in the previous sentence, the subject of this sentence (My wife and I) should be made clear.

My wife gave birth to theour first baby in 2023 and to theour second baby in 2024. My wife gave birth to our first baby in 2023 and our second in 2024.

You don't need to say baby again for the second one since you already established that you're talking about babies.

My wife gave birth to theour first baby in 2023 and to theour second baby in 2024. My wife gave birth to our first baby in 2023 and our second baby in 2024.

Although married people tend to have no or fewerfewer or no babies these days, it's better for them to have more ones. Although married people tend to have fewer or no babies these days, it's better for them to have more.

I'm not sure if it is grammatical correct but "no or fewer" sounds unnatural to me.

Although married people these days tend to have no or fewer babies these dayfewer or no babies, it's better for them to have more ones. Although married people these days tend to have fewer or no babies, it's better for them to have more.

Your original word order does make sense, but this word order seems more natural.

Although married people these days tend to have no or fewer babies these dayfewer or no babies, it's better for them to have more ones. Although married people these days tend to have fewer or no babies, it's better for them to have more.

That's because my babies give usme infinite happiness beyond description. That's because my babies give me infinite happiness beyond description.

Or "That's because our babies give us infinite happiness beyond description." You need to be consistent with how many people you're referring to. Just yourself, or both you and your wife.

That's because myour babies give us infinite happiness beyond description. That's because our babies give us infinite happiness beyond description.

You could say "my babies", but then you would have to say "give me infinite happiness".

That's because myour babies give us infinite happiness beyond description. That's because our babies give us infinite happiness beyond description.

Anyone who has their own children might agree with me. Anyone who has their own children might agree with me.

Anyone who has their own children might agree with me. Anyone who has their own children might agree with me.

You could also simply say "anyone who has children might agree with me."

Anyone who has their own children might agree with me. Anyone who has their own children might agree with me.