MIY ROUTINAE MY ROUTINE

Everyday I wake up, with a lot of effort, and, it takes a lot of effort for me to wake up, so I go to the bathroom to wash my face with really cold water. Everyday, it takes a lot of effort for me to wake up, so I go to the bathroom to wash my face with really cold water.

This sounds more natural... also - using 'so' makes it clear that you wash your face with cold water ·because· you struggle to wake up in the morning...

Then I do some yoga exercises to stretch and, then I have breakfast with my husband. Then I do some yoga exercises to stretch, then I have breakfast with my husband.

It sounded like you ate breakfast whilst doing yoga.

Then I do some yoga exercises to stretch and I have breakfast with my husband. Then I do some yoga exercises to stretch and I have breakfast with my husband.

I usually have a piece of fruit such as a banana, a kiwi o ar peach and a. I also have toast with peanut butter and jam. I usually have a piece of fruit such as banana, kiwi or peach. I also have toast with peanut butter and jam.

Your having a piece, so the article isn't needed again. "A piece of a banana" doesn't feel natural. "A piece of banana" sounds better.

I usually have a piece of fruit such as a banana, a kiwi or a peach and asome toast with peanut butter and jam. I usually have a piece of fruit such as a banana, a kiwi or a peach and some toast with peanut butter and jam.

'toast' is uncountable, so you can have 'some toast' or 'a piece of toast' or '2 pieces of toast' etc.

However my husband prefers to eat something saladuch as bacon ofr a boiled egg with a coffee. However my husband prefers to eat something such as bacon or a boiled egg with coffee.

I don't think you mean salad here?

However my husband prefers to eat something saladvoury such as bacon ofr a boiled egg with a coffee. However my husband prefers to eat something savoury such as bacon or a boiled egg with a coffee.

'Salad' means lettuce, tomato, cucumber etc. or you can have a fruit salad. But I think here you wanted to say 'savoury', which is the opposite of 'sweet'.

After that we make our bed, I brush my theeth and I get myself dressed. After that we make our bed, I brush my teeth and get myself dressed.

After that we make our bed, I brush my theeth and I get dressed. After that we make our bed, I brush my teeth and I get dressed.

At this momento I look at my mobile for the first time in the day, since I don’t like to look at it just after I wake up. At this moment I look at my mobile for the first time in the day, since I don’t like to look at it just after I wake up.

At this momentOnly then do I look at my mobile for the first time in the day, since I don’t like to look at it just after I wake up. Only then do I look at my mobile, since I don’t like to look at it just after I wake up.

'moment' has no 'o' at the end, otherwise the sentence you wrote makes sense but sounds a little clumsy - my correction above, to me sounds more natural.

When I finish doing this I leftave home to go to work. When I finish doing this I leave home to go to work.

The writing was in present tense, so 'left' in past tense felt odd.

When I finish doing this, I leftave home to go to work. When I finish doing this, I leave home to go to work.