Life is constitued ofcontains up and danwsowns, but you have alway to keepshould hold onto it and always try to grind because it's worth the cosit. Life contains up and downs, but you should hold onto it and always try to grind because it's worth it.

Life is constituted of ups and danwowns but you have always have to keep at it and always try to grind because it is worth the cost. Life is constituted of ups and downs but you always have to keep at it and always try to grind because it is worth the cost.

Moreover, if you have advice, feel free to tell it me! Moreover, if you have advice, feel free to tell me!

Or: tell it to me.

I justLast year, I practiced climbing once last year at theat my University, but I'm not practicing often haven't made it a habit. Last year, I practiced climbing once at my University, but I haven't made it a habit.

"the University" is unclear because this is the first time in your writing where you bring up a University, modifying it with "my" makes clarifies it

I just practiced climbing once last year at the University but I'm nodon't practicinge often now. I just practiced climbing once last year at the University but I'm don't practice often now.

or: but I'm not practicing anymore.

However, I listened to a report about an hospital in Portugal where patients can climb. However, I listened to a report about a hospital in Portugal where patients can climb.

However, I listened to a report about an hospital in Portugal where patients can climb. However, I listened to a report about a hospital in Portugal where patients can climb.

She has been climbed for 15 years and she's also a medicineworks in the medical field. She has climbed for 15 years and works in the medical field.

"medicine" is not an occupation

She has been climbed for 15 years and she's also a medicinedoctor. She has been climbed for 15 years and she's also a doctor.

She suggested this idea because climbing is really helpfull and have bags loads of mental and physical benefits. She suggested this idea because climbing is really helpful and has loads of mental and physical benefits.

She suggested this idea because climbing is really helpfull and haves bags of mental and physical benefits. She suggested this idea because climbing is really helpful and has bags of mental and physical benefits.

In the report, we heard a story about a dancer who did a surgery in orderunderwent surgery to improve his health because I think she hadof a health condition that made it difficulties to breathe. In the report, we heard a story about a dancer who underwent surgery to improve his health because of a health condition that made it difficult to breathe.

In the report, we heard a story about a dancer who dihad a surgery in order to improve hiser health because I think she had difficulties to breatheing. In the report, we heard a story about a dancer who had a surgery in order to improve her health because I think she had difficulties breathing.

A surgeon *does* a surgery. A patient *has* a surgery (or *undergoes* a surgery).

But, sSadly, the surgery had severy bade consequences and and she had to be in wa wheelchair. Sadly, the surgery had severe consequences and she had to be in a wheelchair.

Is the dancer a man or woman? You use different gendered pronouns, so it is unclear. Change the gender of the pronouns so it is consistent. You used "she" in this sentence, and "his" in the previous sentence.

But, sadly, the surgery had very bad consequences and and she had to be in wa wheelchair. But, sadly, the surgery had very bad consequences and she had to be in a wheelchair.

Since thisat day, she never has danced again. Since that day, she never has danced again.

There was also a man who fell because of his mate who let go the scaffauolding. There was also a man who fell because his mate let go the scaffolding.

There was also a man who fell because of his mate who let go the scaffauolding. There was also a man who fell because of his mate who let go the scaffolding.

Consequently, he had a head trauma because his skull bone was brokenfractured. Consequently, he had head trauma because his skull bone fractured.

Consequently, he had a head trauma because his skull bone was broken. Consequently, he had a head trauma because his skull bone was broken.

Grammatical okay, but more normal to say, "he broke his skull."

I found their storyies to be very touching. I found their stories to be very touching.

However, wWith the help of the hospital and the woman, they did climbing and the dancer was really happy because she could dance again, but now in a wallskilled doctors, they could return to climbing and dancing. With the help of skilled doctors, they could return to climbing and dancing.

However, with the help of the hospital and the woman, they did climbing and the dancer was really happy because she could dance again, but now ion a wall. However, with the help of the hospital and the woman, they did climbing and the dancer was really happy because she could dance again, but now on a wall.

The man had also improvinged his strength and becamewas now able to do a lot of things that he couldn't do before. The man had also improved his strength and was now able to do a lot of things that he couldn't do before.

The man had also improvinged his strength and became able to do a lot of things that he couldn't do before. The man had also improved his strength and became able to do a lot of things that he couldn't do before.

To conclude, I think climbing is an inspiring discipline and it can be considered as a metaphor of life because l. Life is not a straight path and sometimes, you can have to take difficult roads and to challenge yourself. To conclude, I think climbing is an inspiring discipline and it can be considered as a metaphor of life. Life is not a straight path and sometimes, you have to take difficult roads to challenge yourself.

To conclude, I think climbing is an inspiring discipline and it can be considered as a metaphor of life because life is not straight and sometimes, you can have to take difficult roads that challenge you (or "... difficult roads and to challenge yourself"). To conclude, I think climbing is an inspiring discipline and it can be considered as a metaphor of life because life is not straight and sometimes, you can have to take difficult roads that challenge you (or "... difficult roads and challenge yourself").