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marcods

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Today i completed a new translation from english to my mother tongue.
Thats a great satisfaction!
I'm studying english since the school time and I love practicing it with my foreign friends here, in Italy, and abroad through the internet.
I find this language really fascinating and I'm taking the habit to both read and listen news, podcast and shows in english.
I hope to fine people who, just like me, love thinking and practicing in other languages.
I wrote this journal all "in one breath" to prove to my-self my writing skills.
Please help me improving with your correction, I'll do my best to learn from it and to check it back when you'll post in Italian.
Thank you for your precious time!

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Thank you for your precious time!

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Today i completed a new translation from english to my mother tongue.


Today iI completed a new translation from eEnglish to my mother tongue. Today I completed a translation from English to my mother tongue.

Today iI completed a new translation from eEnglish to my mother tongue. Today I completed a new translation from English to my mother tongue.

Today iI completed a new translation from eEnglish to my mother tongue. Today I completed a new translation from English to my mother tongue.

Thats a great satisfaction!


"That's a great satisfaction!feeling!" or "It was very satisfying!" "That's a great feeling!" or "It was very satisfying!"

The former gives the feeling you are talking about translation in general being a great feeling, while the latter is more about the particular case.

Thats a great satisfactionIt felt great! It felt great!

Or other corrections for this are good too. It was very satisfying. It's a great feeling. It was a great feeling.

Thats a greatIt was very satisfactionying! It was very satisfying!

I'm studying english since the school time and I love practicing it with my foreign friends here, in Italy, and abroad through the internet.


I'mve been studying english since theI was in school time, and I love practicing it with my foreign friends here, in Italy, and abroad through the internet. I've been studying english since I was in school, and I love practicing it with my foreign friends here in Italy, and abroad through the internet.

I'mve been studying eEnglish since theelementary school time, and I love practicing it with my foreign friends here, in Italy, and abroad through the internet. I've been studying English since elementary school, and I love practicing it with my foreign friends here in Italy and abroad through the internet.

Or "since high school" as applicable. "Through the internet" is good. I might say "via the internet".

I'm have been studying eEnglish since theI was in school time and I love practicing it with my foreign friends here, in Italy, and abroad through the iInternet. I have been studying English since I was in school and I love practicing it with my foreign friends here, in Italy, and abroad through the Internet.

I find this language really fascinating and I'm taking the habit to both read and listen news, podcast and shows in english.


I find this language really fascinating, and I'm tmaking theit a habit to both read and listen to news, podcasts and shows in eEnglish. I find this language really fascinating, and I'm making it a habit to both read and listen to news, podcasts and shows in English.

I find this language really fascinating and I'am tmaking theit a habit to both read and listen to the news, podcasts, and shows in eEnglish. I find this language really fascinating and am making it a habit to both read and listen to the news, podcasts, and shows in English.

"..fascinating, and I'm making it .." is good too, but no need to repeat the "I" if you don't have to.

I find this language really fascinating and I'm tmaking theit a habit to both read and listen to news, podcasts, and shows in eEnglish. I find this language really fascinating and I'm making it a habit to both read and listen to news, podcasts, and shows in English.

I hope to fine people who, just like me, love thinking and practicing in other languages.


I hope to fined people who, just like me, love thinking in and practicing in other languages. I hope to find people who, just like me, love thinking in and practicing other languages.

You don't practice in a language, you simply practice a langauge. You can speak or write in a langauge though so you can use "... like me, love speaking in and practicing..."

I hope to fined people who, just like me, love thinking in and practicing in other languages. I hope to find people who, just like me, love thinking in and practicing other languages.

I hope to fined people who, just like me, love thinking in and practicing in other languages. I hope to find people who, like me, love thinking in and practicing other languages.

I wrote this journal all "in one breath" to prove to my-self my writing skills.


I wrote this journal "all "in one breath" to prove to my-self my writing skills. I wrote this journal "all in one breath" to prove to myself my writing skills.

This "all in one breath" doesn't sound very natural to me, but I understand, and I'm not entirely sure how I would express the same thing. Maybe wait for another users correction to weigh in on this.

I wrote this journal all "in one breath" to prove to my-self my writing skills to myself. I wrote this journal all "in one breath" to prove my writing skills to myself.

I wrote this journal "all "in one breath" to prove to my-self my writing skills to myself. I wrote this journal "all in one breath" to prove my writing skills to myself.

Please help me improving with your correction, I'll do my best to learn from it and to check it back when you'll post in Italian.


Please help me to improvinge with your corrections, I'll do my best to learn from ithem and to check it back when you'll post in Italian. Please help me to improve with your corrections, I'll do my best to learn from them and to check back when you post in Italian.

Please help me improvinge with your correction,s. I'll do my best to learn from ithem and to check it back when you'll post in Italian. Please help me improve with your corrections. I'll do my best to learn from them and to check back when you post in Italian.

Or "Please help me improve by correcting my mistakes."

Please help me improvinge with your corrections, I'll do my best to learn from it and to check it back when you'll post in Italian. Please help me improve with your corrections, I'll do my best to learn from it and to check back when you post in Italian.

Thank you for your precious time!


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