What qualities do you look for in a friend?
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I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around become my friend. I can't drink alcohol and I am quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people. I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.
I don't look for a lot in my friends., if If anything, someone who is fun to be around may/can become my friend.
I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go wellfit in with party people.
I'd like to make friends connected with mypeople having similar hobbies as I do, like oil painting or drinking espresso.
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Even if I want to try using vocabulary that I've learned or studied up until now, I need to carefully consider whether it fits the sentence.
I think it is already very clear what you are trying to say. Those "mistakes" are relatively minor. Well done :)
I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, I want someone who is fun to be around to become my friend.
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Even if I want to try using vocabulary that I've learned or studied up until now, I need to carefully consider whether it fits the sentence.
I don't look for a lot in my friends., if If anything, someone who is fun to be around can become my friend.
I can'tdon’t drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I goget along well with party people.
I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or making espresso.
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Even if I want to try using vocabulary that I've learned or studied up until now, I need to carefully consider whether it fits the sentence.
I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around is enough to become my friend.
There should be some words here, and I think these ones work with this sentence
I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people.
I'd like to make friends connected withwho share my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.
“Connected” is an unnatural way to express this. Saying something like the share your hobbies would be a better way to say what you want
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Nice job!
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Even if I want to try using vocabulary that I've learned or studied up until now, I need to carefully consider whether it fits the sentence.
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