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A & B Talk14

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


B: Excuse me? Could you do me a favor?
A: Sure, how can I help you?
B: How do I get to the bathhouse? Uh~, sento?
A: Oh, yeah! Sento.
B: Do you know the way?
A: So do you know the name of that place?
B: Oh, forgot to say... wait a sec. Well, Yunoizumi Kenkou Center.
A: Oh, I know. It's a little different from a sento, but putting that aside... Anyways, well... How can I say directions...
B: Can you draw a map?
A: Oh, sorry. I'm rubbish at drawing, haha,
Well... It might be hard to explain, but if you'd like, I can show you.
B: Oh, that would be nice of you, thank you!
A; You’re welcome.
Right this way. Let’s go.
B: Yes, let’s go.
Anyways, back to what you were talking about before, like sento and Kenkou Center are different. What does that mean?
A: Oh, well... I'm no expert, so I don't know the strict difference, so this is just my gut feeling, a Sento is like having only a bath, while Kenkou center is like having a restaurant, karaoke, ping-pong, comic book room, and various other facilities. Japanese people generally call it a Kenkou center or land. I think there are more places called "Kenkou land" than "Kenkou center".
B: Are the two the same?
A: Probably.
B: Oh, I see. Then, what’s the difference between Kenkou center and Super Sento?
A: Hmm... well, I don’t know, haha.
Give me a minute. I'll google it.
B: Haha, I'm not much that curious, so there's no need to do that.
A: I'll look into it just in case it might be something to talk about, haha.
You can also put it in your knowledge.
Since you came all the way to Japan, so here's a present from me, haha.
I'm sure that will help you in the future. Child might say, "Dad! What's the difference between a Super Sento and a Kenkou Center?!" you will be able to answer it with your head held high.
B: Yeah, could be, haha.
A: Oh, I probably got it. Legally, they are the same, it's says. But in terms of rank, the order seems to be Kenkou land, Super Sento, and Sento, from best to worst.
B: Oh, I understand.
Anyways, Which do you prefer?
A: Well... I've never been to any of them, haha.
B: Why? You don’t like Sento?
A: Yeah, I didn't like taking baths with strangers in the first place. I’ve also heard a bad story about it.
B: What is it? I'm all ears.
A: A acquaintance used to work part-time at a place like that, and when he clean the bathtub after business hours, sometimes he saw there is poop floating in it.
B: Omg, really?
A: Yeah. These places have a lot of elderly people, you know, and maybe they can't stand it, haha.
B: That kinda disgusting.
A: Of course, I'm sure there are plenty of places that are clean, so not all of them have poop floating around.
B: Yeah, I know.
A: So it's important to do your research before going to such a place.
B: Okay. I'll do that.
A: Anyways, we're here.
B: Oh, thank you so much! You helped me a lot!
A: You"re welcome. Have a good day!
B: Yes! Take care!
A: You too!

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A & B Talk14

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

🙏

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️

B: Excuse me?

Could you do me a favor?

A: Sure, how can I help you?

B: How do I get to the bathhouse?

A: Oh, yeah!

Sento.

B: Oh, forgot to say... wait a sec.

A: Oh, I know.

B: Can you draw a map?

A: Oh, sorry.

Well...

It might be hard to explain, but if you'd like, I can show you.

B: Oh, that would be nice of you, thank you!

A; You’re welcome.

Right this way.

Let’s go.

B: Yes, let’s go.

What does that mean?

A: Oh, well...

Japanese people generally call it a Kenkou center or land.

I think there are more places called "Kenkou land" than "Kenkou center".

A: Probably.

B: Oh, I see.

Then, what’s the difference between Kenkou center and Super Sento?

A: Hmm... well, I don’t know, haha.

Give me a minute.

I'll google it.

A: I'll look into it just in case it might be something to talk about, haha.

I'm sure that will help you in the future.

What's the difference between a Super Sento and a Kenkou Center?!"

A: Oh, I probably got it.

But in terms of rank, the order seems to be Kenkou land, Super Sento, and Sento, from best to worst.

B: Oh, I understand.

A: Well...

I've never been to any of them, haha.

B: Why?

I'm all ears.

A: Yeah.

A: Of course, I'm sure there are plenty of places that are clean, so not all of them have poop floating around.

A: So it's important to do your research before going to such a place.

B: Okay.

I'll do that.

B: Oh, thank you so much!

Have a good day!

B: Yes!

Take care!

A: You too!

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July 14, 2022

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B: Excuse me?

Could you do me a favor?

A: Sure, how can I help you?

B: How do I get to the bathhouse?

A: Oh, yeah!

Sento.

B: Can you draw a map?

A: Oh, sorry.

Well...

It might be hard to explain, but if you'd like, I can show you.

B: Oh, that would be nice of you, thank you!

A; You’re welcome.

Right this way.

Let’s go.

B: Yes, let’s go.

What does that mean?

A: Oh, well...

Japanese people generally call it a Kenkou center or land.

I think there are more places called "Kenkou land" than "Kenkou center".

B: Are the two the same?

A: Probably.

B: Oh, I see.

A: Hmm... well, I don’t know, haha.

Give me a minute.

I'll google it.

I'm sure that will help you in the future.

B: Yeah, could be, haha.

A: Oh, I probably got it.

But in terms of rank, the order seems to be Kenkou land, Super Sento, and Sento, from best to worst.

B: Oh, I understand.

Anyways, Which do you prefer?

A: Well...

I've never been to any of them, haha.

B: Why?

A: Yeah, I didn't like taking baths with strangers in the first place.

I'm all ears.

A: Yeah.

These places have a lot of elderly people, you know, and maybe they can't stand it, haha.

A: Of course, I'm sure there are plenty of places that are clean, so not all of them have poop floating around.

B: Yeah, I know.

A: So it's important to do your research before going to such a place.

B: Okay.

I'll do that.

A: Anyways, we're here.

B: Oh, thank you so much!

You helped me a lot!

Have a good day!

B: Yes!

Take care!

A: You too!

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I'm rubbish at drawing, haha,


I'm rubbishbad at drawing, haha,! I'm bad at drawing, hah!

I'm rubbishterrible at drawing, haha, I'm terrible at drawing, haha,

"Rubbish" would probably be used more in the UK. In the US, we'd more often say it this way.

Well...


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


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B: Excuse me?


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A: Sure, how can I help you?


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B: How do I get to the bathhouse?


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Uh~, sento?


Uh~, sento? Uh, sento?

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Uh~, you mean the sento? Uh, you mean the sento?

or Uh ... you mean the sento?

A: Oh, yeah!


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Sento.


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B: Do you know the way?


B: Do you know the wayhow to get there? B: Do you know how to get there?

B: Do you know the wayhow to get there? B: Do you know how to get there?

Your sentence is correct but this is more often said in the US.

A: So do you know the name of that place?


A: SoMaybe, do you know the name of thate place? A: Maybe, do you know the name of the place?

A: So do you know the name of thate place? A: So do you know the name of the place?

B: Oh, forgot to say... wait a sec.


B: Oh,I forgot to saycheck... wait a sec. B: I forgot to check... wait a sec.

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Well, Yunoizumi Kenkou Center.


Well,It's Yunoizumi Kenkou Center. It's Yunoizumi Kenkou Center.

Well, Yunoizumi Kenkou Center. Yunoizumi Kenkou Center.

or It's Yunoizumi Kenkou Center.

A: Oh, I know.


A: Oh, I know that place. A: Oh, I know that place.

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It's a little different from a sento, but putting that aside... Anyways, well... How can I say directions...


It's a little different from a sento, but putting that aside... Anyways, well... How can I say directions... Let me see if I can figure out how to get there from here. It's a little different from a sento. Let me see if I can figure out how to get there from here.

It's a little different from a sento, but puttingbesides that aside... Anyways, well... How can I saywould you like directions ... It's a little different from a sento, but besides that ... Anyway, well... How would you like directions ...

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Can you draw a map?


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A: Oh, sorry.


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It might be hard to explain, but if you'd like, I can show you.


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B: Oh, that would be nice of you, thank you!


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A; You’re welcome.


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Right this way.


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Let’s go.


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B: Yes, let’s go.


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Anyways, back to what you were talking about before, like sento and Kenkou Center are different.


Anyways, back to what you were talking about before, like sentos and the Kenkou Center are different. Anyways, back to what you were talking about before, sentos and the Kenkou Center are different.

I'm not sure if sento is a particular place or note, but pluralize general concepts when comparing them: Do you prefer apple*s* or pear*s*? Cat*s* and dog*s* are different.

Anyways, back to what you were talking about before, like how sento and Kenkou Center are different. Anyway, back to what you were talking about before, like how sento and Kenkou Center are different.

I wonder if "anyways" is used more in the UK, too. It's used in the US in certain States but not all of them.

What does that mean?


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A: Oh, well...


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I'm no expert, so I don't know the strict difference, so this is just my gut feeling, a Sento is like having only a bath, while Kenkou center is like having a restaurant, karaoke, ping-pong, comic book room, and various other facilities.


I'm no expert, so and I don't know the strictactly difference, so this is just my gut feeling, a. Sento is like having onlys just have a bath, while the Kenkou center is like havinghas a restaurant, karaoke, ping-pong, a comic book room, and various other facilitieslots of other stuff. I'm no expert and I don't know the actly difference, so this is just my gut feeling. Sentos just have a bath, while the Kenkou center has a restaurant, karaoke, ping-pong, a comic book room, and lots of other stuff.

I'm no expert, so I don't know the strict difference, sodetails, but this is just my gut feeling, a. A Sento is like having only a bath, while Kenkou center is like having a restaurant, karaoke, ping-pong, a comic book room, and various other facilities. I'm no expert, so I don't know the details, but this is just my gut feeling. A Sento is like having only a bath, while Kenkou center is like having a restaurant, karaoke, ping-pong, a comic book room, and various other facilities.

Japanese people generally call it a Kenkou center or land.


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I think there are more places called "Kenkou land" than "Kenkou center".


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B: Are the two the same?


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B: Are the twoy both the same? B: Are they both the same?

Your sentence is okay. This is a US alternative which is said way more often than what you wrote.

A: Probably.


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B: Oh, I see.


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Then, what’s the difference between Kenkou center and Super Sento?


Then, what’s the difference between a Kenkou center and Super Sento? Then, what’s the difference between a Kenkou center and Super Sento?

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A: Hmm... well, I don’t know, haha.


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Give me a minute.


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I'll google it.


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B: Haha, I'm not much that curious, so there's no need to do that.


B: Haha, I'm not much that curious, so there's no need to do that. B: Haha, I'm not that curious, so there's no need to do that.

B: Haha, I'm not much that curious, so there's no need to do thatyou don't have to. B: Haha, I'm not that curious, so you don't have to.

The sentence I wrote has poor grammar but it's often said in the US.

A: I'll look into it just in case it might be something to talk about, haha.


A: I'll look into it just in case it might be something to talk about, hahacheck anyway, I'm interested myself now. A: I'll check anyway, I'm interested myself now.

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You can also put it in your knowledge.


You can also put it in your knowledgeIt might be fun to learn about. It might be fun to learn about.

You can also put it in your knowledgeMaybe it'll be useful to you, too. Maybe it'll be useful to you, too.

We'd never say what you wrote in the US.

Since you came all the way to Japan, so here's a present from me, haha.


Since you came all the way to Japan, so here's consider it a present from me, haha.! Since you came all the way to Japan consider it a present from me!

Since you came all the way to Japan, so here's a present from me, haha. Since you came all the way to Japan, here's a present from me, haha.

I'm sure that will help you in the future.


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Child might say, "Dad!


Child might say, "Dad!If your kids ask one day, If your kids ask one day,

ChildSomeone might say, "Dad! Someone might say, "Dad!

This sounds more natural in the US.

What's the difference between a Super Sento and a Kenkou Center?!"


"What's the difference between a Super Sento and a Kenkou Center?!" "What's the difference between a Super Sento and a Kenkou Center?!"

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you will be able to answer it with your head held high.


yYou will be able to answer it with your head held high.them! You will be able to answer them!

yYou wi'll be able to answer it with your head held higheasily. You'll be able to answer it easily.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yeah, could be, haha.


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B: Yeah, could maybe, haha. B: Yeah, maybe, haha.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Oh, I probably got it.


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Legally, they are the same, it's says.


Legally, they are the same, it's says. Legally, they are the same, it says.

Legally, they a're the same, it's says. Legally, they're the same.

This sounds more natural in the US.

But in terms of rank, the order seems to be Kenkou land, Super Sento, and Sento, from best to worst.


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B: Oh, I understand.


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Anyways, Which do you prefer?


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Anyways, Wwhich do you prefer? Anyway, which do you prefer?

or Which one do you want?

A: Well...


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I've never been to any of them, haha.


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B: Why?


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You don’t like Sento?


You don’t like Sentos? You don’t like Sentos?

You don’tDon't you like Sento? Don't you like Sento?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Yeah, I didn't like taking baths with strangers in the first place.


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A: Yeah, at first I didn't likewant to takinge baths with strangers in the first place. A: Yeah, at first I didn't want to take baths with strangers.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I’ve also heard a bad story about it.


I’ve also heard a bad story about ithem. I’ve also heard a bad story about them.

I’ve also heard a bad storysomething bad about it. I’ve also heard something bad about it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: What is it?


B: What is iLike what? B: Like what?

This sounds more natural in the US.

I'm all ears.


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A: A acquaintance used to work part-time at a place like that, and when he clean the bathtub after business hours, sometimes he saw there is poop floating in it.


A: An acquaintance used to work part-time at a place like that, and when he clean the bathtub after business hours, he sometimes he saw there is poop floating in it.! A: An acquaintance used to work part-time at a place like that, and when he clean the bathtub after business hours, he sometimes saw poop floating in it!

A: An acquaintance used to work part-time at a place like that, and when he cleaned the bathtubs after business hours, sometimes he saw there is poop floating in it. A: An acquaintance used to work part-time at a place like that, and when he cleaned the bathtubs after business hours, sometimes he saw poop floating in it.

へー!本当ですか。

B: Omg, really?


B: OmgWow, really? B: Wow, really?

"omg" is never used as a spoken interjection. You might hear these instead: how!?, really!?, what?!

B: Omgh my god, really? B: Oh my god, really?

I think you know this is what's said but I'm just making sure.

A: Yeah.


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These places have a lot of elderly people, you know, and maybe they can't stand it, haha.


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These places have a lot of elderly people, you 'know, and maybe they can't stanhold it, haha. These places have a lot of elderly people, y'know, and maybe they can't hold it, haha.

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B: That kinda disgusting.


B: Thats kinda disgusting. B: Thats kinda disgusting.

B: That's kinda disgusting. B: That's kinda disgusting.

A: Of course, I'm sure there are plenty of places that are clean, so not all of them have poop floating around.


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A: So it's important to do your research before going to such a place.


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B: Okay.


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I'll do that.


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A: Anyways, we're here.


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A: Anyways, we're here. A: Anyway, we're here.

B: Oh, thank you so much!


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You helped me a lot!


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You helped me a lot! You helped a lot!

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A: You"re welcome.


A: You"'re welcome. A: You're welcome.

A: You"re welcomeNo problem. A: No problem.

or Da nada. or It's nothing.

Have a good day!


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B: Yes!


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Take care!


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A: You too!


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