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Just a Moment to Sit Back and Enjoy

As expected, the huge success obtained by the Spanish representative at the Eurovision Song Contest held in the Italian city of Turin on Saturday evening caused a great deal of controversy amongst those Spaniards who thought she and her performance wasn’t “politically correct” these days.

As you may not know about what I’m writing, I’ll provide you with some information on how the process to choose our Eurovision Festival representative works. This year, Spain opted to organise a music festival, Benidorm Fest, in which the artists taking part presented their best songs to win the ticket to Turin. Although the crowd favourites were the female singer-songwriter Rigoberta Bandini and the female Galician folk trio Tanxugueiras, the contest jury determined that the winner was the female singer and dancer Chanel. This decision was very controversial since her song, her performance and her appearance were the last thing the so-called progressives would be expecting to send to such an international music festival. I suppose, and this is just my humble point of view, they wanted to show at this festival how much we care for relevant issues like nationalism, Tanxugueiras, and feminism, Rigoberta Bandini. On the other hand, Chanel was just a female singer and dancer. You may be wondering what is wrong with her. Not only did Chanel’s outfit leave little to the imagination, or at least its bottom part, but she was also wearing a “chaquetilla”, the short and rigid jacket bullfighters wear. Her song was the perfect one expected to be presented at a music festival like Eurovision, or at least it was so in the past. Chanel dazzled the audience as well as the jury. So much so that she obtained a well-deserved third position after Ukraine, for obvious reasons, and the UK.

To my mind, there are better places to show your commitment with social issues and I’m not saying that Chanel wasn’t doing so in her own way. However, I think that, one in a while, we should allow us to sit back and enjoy by watching a group of bands and singers dancing and singing less crucial songs, especially keeping in mind the situation we’re living through.

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Just a Moment to Sit Back and Enjoy

This year, Spain opted to organise a music festival, Benidorm Fest, in which the artists taking part presented their best songs to win the ticket to Turin.

You may be wondering what is wrong with her.

Not only did Chanel’s outfit leave little to the imagination, or at least its bottom part, but she was also wearing a “chaquetilla”, the short and rigid jacket bullfighters wear.

Chanel dazzled the audience as well as the jury.

So much so that she obtained a well-deserved third position after Ukraine, for obvious reasons, and the UK.

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Just a Moment to Sit Back and Enjoy

This year, Spain opted to organise a music festival, Benidorm Fest, in which the artists taking part presented their best songs to win the ticket to Turin.

Although the crowd favourites were the female singer-songwriter Rigoberta Bandini and the female Galician folk trio Tanxugueiras, the contest jury determined that the winner was the female singer and dancer Chanel.

This decision was very controversial since her song, her performance and her appearance were the last thing the so-called progressives would be expecting to send to such an international music festival.

On the other hand, Chanel was just a female singer and dancer.

You may be wondering what is wrong with her.

Not only did Chanel’s outfit leave little to the imagination, or at least its bottom part, but she was also wearing a “chaquetilla”, the short and rigid jacket bullfighters wear.

Chanel dazzled the audience as well as the jury.

So much so that she obtained a well-deserved third position after Ukraine, for obvious reasons, and the UK.

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To my mind, there are better places to show your commitment withto social issues and I’m not saying that Chanel wasn’t doing sothat in her own way.

Or at least that's what I think you're saying :)

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Many thanks diggn for taking the time to read and correct my long post. I really appreciate it.

Just a Moment to Sit Back and Enjoy


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As expected, the huge success obtained by the Spanish representative at the Eurovision Song Contest held in the Italian city of Turin on Saturday evening caused a great deal of controversy amongst those Spaniards who thought she and her performance wasn’t “politically correct” these days.


As expected, the huge success obtainachieved by the Spanish representative at the Eurovision Song Contest held in the Italian city of Turin on Saturday evening caused a great deal of controversy amongst those Spaniards who thought she and her performance waseren’t “politically correct” these days. As expected, the huge success achieved by the Spanish representative at the Eurovision Song Contest held in the Italian city of Turin on Saturday evening caused a great deal of controversy amongst those Spaniards who thought she and her performance weren’t “politically correct” these days.

"obtained" isn't altogether wrong, but people usually achieve successes.

As expected, the huge success obtained byf the Spanish representative at the Eurovision Song Contest, held in the Italian city of Turin on Saturday evening, caused a great deal of controversy amongst those Spaniards who thought she and her performance wasn’t “politically correct” these days. As expected, the huge success of the Spanish representative at the Eurovision Song Contest, held in the Italian city of Turin on Saturday evening, caused a great deal of controversy amongst those Spaniards who thought she and her performance wasn’t “politically correct” these days.

As expected, the huge success obtained by the Spanish representative at the Eurovision Song Contest held in the Italian city of Turin on Saturday evening caused a great deal of controversy amongst those Spaniards who thought she and her performance wasn’eren't “politically correct” these days. As expected, the huge success obtained by the Spanish representative at the Eurovision Song Contest held in the Italian city of Turin on Saturday evening caused a great deal of controversy amongst those Spaniards who thought she and her performance weren't “politically correct”.

As you may not know about what I’m writing, I’ll provide you with some information on how the process to choose our Eurovision Festival representative works.


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This year, Spain opted to organise a music festival, Benidorm Fest, in which the artists taking part presented their best songs to win the ticket to Turin.


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Although the crowd favourites were the female singer-songwriter Rigoberta Bandini and the female Galician folk trio Tanxugueiras, the contest jury determined that the winner was the female singer and dancer Chanel.


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Although the crowd favourites were the female singer-songwriter, Rigoberta Bandini, and the female Galician folk trio, Tanxugueiras, the contest jury determined that the winner was thea different female singer and dancer, Chanel. Although the crowd favourites were the female singer-songwriter, Rigoberta Bandini, and the female Galician folk trio, Tanxugueiras, the contest jury determined that the winner was a different female singer and dancer, Chanel.

Although the crowd favourites were the female singer-songwriter Rigoberta Bandini and the female Galician folk trio Tanxugueiras, the contest jury determincided that the winner was the female singer and dancer Chanel. Although the crowd favourites were the female singer-songwriter Rigoberta Bandini and the female Galician folk trio Tanxugueiras, the contest jury decided that the winner was the female singer and dancer Chanel.

This decision was very controversial since her song, her performance and her appearance were the last thing the so-called progressives would be expecting to send to such an international music festival.


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I suppose, and this is just my humble point of view, they wanted to show at this festival how much we care for relevant issues like nationalism, Tanxugueiras, and feminism, Rigoberta Bandini.


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I suppose, and this is just my humble point of view, they wanted to show at this festival how much we care for relevant issues like nationalism, represented by Tanxugueiras, and feminism, Rigoberta Bandini. I suppose, and this is just my humble point of view, they wanted to show at this festival how much we care for relevant issues like nationalism, represented by Tanxugueiras, and feminism, Rigoberta Bandini.

I suppose, and this is just my humble point of view, they wanted to show at this festival how much we care for relevant issues like nationalism, Tanxugueiras, and feminism, Rigoberta Bandini. I suppose, and this is just my humble point of view, they wanted to show at this festival how much we care for relevant issues like nationalism, Tanxugueiras, and feminism.

On the other hand, Chanel was just a female singer and dancer.


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On the other hand,e point of view would be that Chanel was just a female singer and dancer. One point of view would be that Chanel was just a female singer and dancer.

You may be wondering what is wrong with her.


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Not only did Chanel’s outfit leave little to the imagination, or at least its bottom part, but she was also wearing a “chaquetilla”, the short and rigid jacket bullfighters wear.


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Not only did Chanel’s outfit leave little to the imagination, or at least its bottom part, but she was also wearing a “chaquetilla, the short and rigid jacket bullfighters wear. Not only did Chanel’s outfit leave little to the imagination, or at least its bottom part, but she was also wearing a “chaquetilla, the short and rigid jacket bullfighters wear.

Her song was the perfect one expected to be presented at a music festival like Eurovision, or at least it was so in the past.


Her song was the perfect one you would expected to be presented at a music festival like Eurovision, or at least it was so in the past. Her song was the perfect one you would expect to be presented at a music festival like Eurovision, or at least it was so in the past.

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Chanel dazzled the audience as well as the jury.


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Chanel dazzled the audience, as well as the jury. Chanel dazzled the audience, as well as the jury.

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So much so that she obtained a well-deserved third position after Ukraine, for obvious reasons, and the UK.


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To my mind, there are better places to show your commitment with social issues and I’m not saying that Chanel wasn’t doing so in her own way.


To my mind, there are better places to show your commitment withto social issues and I’m not saying that Chanel wasn’t doing sothat in her own way. To my mind, there are better places to show your commitment to social issues and I’m not saying that Chanel wasn’t doing that in her own way.

Or at least that's what I think you're saying :)

To my mind, there are better places to show your commitment withto social issues and I’m not saying that Chanel wasn’t doing so in her own way. To my mind, there are better places to show your commitment to social issues and I’m not saying that Chanel wasn’t doing so in her own way.

In my opinion, there are better places......may be better

However, I think that, one in a while, we should allow us to sit back and enjoy by watching a group of bands and singers dancing and singing less crucial songs, especially keeping in mind the situation we’re living through.


However, I think that, once in a while, we should allow uourselves to sit back and enjoy by watching a group of bands and singers dancing and singing less crucial songssongs without a message, especially keeping in mind the situation we’re living through. However, I think that once in a while, we should allow ourselves to sit back and enjoy by watching a group of bands and singers dancing and singing songs without a message, especially keeping in mind the situation we’re living through.

However, I think that, once in a while, we should allow uourselves to sit back and enjoy by watching a group of bands and singers dancing and singing less crucontroversial songs, especially keeping in mind the situation we’re living through. However, I think that, once in a while, we should allow ourselves to sit back and enjoy watching a group of bands and singers dancing and singing less controversial songs, especially keeping in mind the situation we’re living through.

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