Many of my sentences are asthe same as the textbook. Many of my sentences are the same as the textbook.

Many of my sentences are as same as in a textbook. Many of my sentences are as same as in a textbook

This shouldn’t be separated from the next sentence.

I don't remember how to subscribe to the person on Instagram but it(clicking on the link in her bio) leads me to her yYoutTube channel. I don't remember how to subscribe to the person on Instagram but (clicking on the link in her bio) leads me to her YouTube channel.

I think there may be a piece of information missing?

I don't remember how to subscribefollowing theis person on Instagram but itI saw a post which leads me to her yYoutTube channel. I don't remember following this person on Instagram but I saw a post which lead me to her YouTube channel.

She is a multi-language learner and her video clips are about how to learn a foreign language with 4 tips. She is a multi-language learner and her video clips are about how to learn a foreign language with 4 tips.

She is a multi-language learner and heras a video clips are about how towith 4 tips for learning a foreign language with 4 tips. She is a multi-language learner and has a video with 4 tips for learning a foreign language.

The tips are: The tips are:

1. immerse yourself throught y YoutTube video s 2. use dreams to study body-language 3. read text quickly 4. talk out loud, all the time 1. immerse yourself through YouTube videos 2. use dreams to study body-language 3. read text quickly 4. talk out loud, all the time

1. iImmerse yourself throught y YoutTube video s 2. use dreams to study body-language 3. rRead text quickly 4. tTalk out loud, all the time 1. Immerse yourself through YouTube videos 2. use dreams to study body-language 3. Read text quickly 4. Talk out loud, all the time

I’m really not sure what is meant by point 2, so I’ve left it.

Based on her tips, I haven't haved enough time to think and to speak in English. Based on her tips, I haven't had enough time to think and speak in English.

Based on her tips, I haven't haved enough time to think and to speak in English. Based on her tips, I haven't had enough time to think and speak in English.

Not sure what exactly you mean by this.

ForTo improvinge my skills, I need to consider tense more strictly at first. To improve my skills, I need to consider tense more strictly at first.

ForIn order to improvinge my skills, I need to consider tense more strictly at firstthe first thing I need to do is pay more attention to tenses. In order to improve my skills, the first thing I need to do is pay more attention to tenses.

I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect, and present continuous. I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect and present continuous.

I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect, and present continuous., I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect and present continuous,

Shouldn’t be separated from the next sentence.

But I used them the wrong way when I spokeeak and wroite. But I use them the wrong way when I speak and write.

Matching tense to the previous sentence here here. If you want everything to be past tense I would change the previous sentence to be past tense

Bbut I usedoften use them in the wrong way when I spokeeak and wroite. but I often use them in the wrong way when I speak and write.

Next, I will try to make more charming sentences. Next, I will try to make more charming sentences.

Matching "I need to"

Next, IIn future, I will try to make more charming sentences. In future, I will try to make more charming sentences.

Not sure if this is exactly what you meant to say.

So they are not interesting. So they are not interesting.

S, so they are notn’t very interesting. , so they aren’t very interesting.

‘Not interesting’ seems a little too absolute.

With the aid of this site, I can reference others' sentences. With the aid of this site, I can reference others' sentences.

ForI will do my best so that I can speaking more fluent English, I will do my best. I will do my best so that I can speak more fluent English.

More natural this way

For speaking more fluent English, I will do my bestI will do my best to improve my English. I will do my best to improve my English.