Nov. 3, 2020
In the last few years, l have had two ideals: one can buy an iPhone and another is able to wear a leather coat. The first ideal has come true because my Sum sang cellphone that has been used for three years went wrong. A couple years ago, I bought a leather coat at a low price from a private store and I thought I had realized one of my ideals, but it turned out that the leather coat was fake. I randomly bought two leather coats from a brand store on Tmall this morning and one is for spring or autumn, the other is for winter. I hope I won't buy fakes this time. For now it seems I don't want anything anymore and I am satisfied. Meanwhile, I think my ideal is so ridiculous because this kind of ideal has already come true for many people in their twenties. But for me it is a hard decision to make because I am always a thrifty man. However, I kind of got my wishes, though it looks ridiculous.
InFor the lpast few years, l have had two ideals: one canwishes: to buy an iPhone and another is able to wear a leather coat.
For the past few years, l have had two wishes: to buy an iPhone and a leather coat.
The first idealwish has come true, because my Sum sasomething has gone wrong with my Samsung cellphone that has been useI've had for three years went wrong.
The first wish has come true, because something has gone wrong with my Samsung cellphone that I've had for three years.
A couple of years ago, I bought a leather coat at a low price from a private store and, so I thought I had realized one of my idealsmy other wish had come true, but it turned out that the leather coat was fake.
A couple of years ago, I bought a leather coat at a low price from a private store, so I thought my other wish had come true, but it turned out that the leather coat was fake.
I randomlyThis morning, I bought two leather coats from a brand store on Tmall this morning and o. One is for spring or autumn, and the other is for winter.
This morning, I bought two leather coats from a store on Tmall. One is for spring or autumn, and the other is for winter.
It depends on what Tmall is. If it is a place, you would say "at" Tmall, but if it is an online store, then you "on" is correct. For instance, I bought something on Alibaba, but I bought something at the shopping center.
I hope I won't buythey are not fakes this time.
I hope they are not fakes this time.
For now it seems, I don't want anything anymore andelse, as I am satisfied.
For now, I don't want anything else, as I am satisfied.
Meanwhile, I think my ideal iswishes are so ridiculous, because this kind of idealmany people in their twenties hasve already come true for many people in their twentieshad this type of wish come true.
Meanwhile, I think my wishes are so ridiculous, because many people in their twenties have already had this type of wish come true.
But for me it is a, I have hard decision to maketo wait because I amhave always been a thrifty man.
But for me, I have had to wait because I have always been a thrifty man.
However, I kind of got my wishes, though it looksAlthough my wishes have come true, they still seem ridiculous.
Although my wishes have come true, they still seem ridiculous.
In the last few years, l have had two idegoals: one can buy an iPhone and another is able to wear a leather coat.
In the last few years, l have had two goals: buy an iPhone and wear a leather coat.
I apologize if I'm misunderstanding this sentence, but it sounds like you mean "goals" rather than "ideals". "Ideals" refer more to personal values which you value highly.
Also, when using ":", you can simplify following phrase.
The first idegoal has come true because my Sum saamsung cellphone that has been used for three years went wrongbroke.
The first goal has come true because my Samsung cellphone that has been used for three years broke.
A couple years ago, I bought a leather coat at a low price from a private store and I thought I had realizedmet one of my idegoals, but it turned out that the leather coat was fake.
A couple years ago, I bought a leather coat at a low price from a private store and I thought I had met one of my goals, but it turned out that the leather coat was fake.
I randomly bought two leather coats from a brand store on Tmall this morning and o. One is for spring or autumn, and the other is for winter.
I randomly bought two leather coats from a brand store on Tmall this morning. One is for spring or autumn, and the other is for winter.
Meanwhile, I think my idegoal is so ridiculous because this kind of idegoal has already come true for many people in their twenties.
Meanwhile, I think my goal is so ridiculous because this kind of goal has already come true for many people in their twenties.
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In the last few years, l have had two ideals: one can buy an iPhone and another is able to wear a leather coat.
In the last few years, l have had two I apologize if I'm misunderstanding this sentence, but it sounds like you mean "goals" rather than "ideals". "Ideals" refer more to personal values which you value highly. Also, when using ":", you can simplify following phrase.
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The first ideal has come true because my Sum sang cellphone that has been used for three years went wrong.
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A couple years ago, I bought a leather coat at a low price from a private store and I thought I had realized one of my ideals, but it turned out that the leather coat was fake.
A couple years ago, I bought a leather coat at a low price from a private store and I thought I had
A couple of years ago, I bought a leather coat at a low price from a private store |
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I randomly bought two leather coats from a brand store on Tmall this morning and one is for spring or autumn, the other is for winter.
I randomly bought two leather coats from a brand store on Tmall this morning
It depends on what Tmall is. If it is a place, you would say "at" Tmall, but if it is an online store, then you "on" is correct. For instance, I bought something on Alibaba, but I bought something at the shopping center. |
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I hope I won't buy fakes this time.
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For now it seems I don't want anything anymore and I am satisfied.
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Meanwhile, I think my ideal is so ridiculous because this kind of ideal has already come true for many people in their twenties.
Meanwhile, I think my
Meanwhile, I think my |
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But for me it is a hard decision to make because I am always a thrifty man.
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However, I kind of got my wishes, though it looks ridiculous.
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