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Group ABCDE has five members in total. We have cooperated very well; everyone was positive to devote to the group work. Within the first time of the team meeting, each person was passionate to share their ideas and suggestions, taking the initiative to accept the tasks. In result, it was very efficient to figure out the task allocation approach of the group report which everyone was in charge of two chapters and 400 words. We followed up the progress in every later meeting. Everyone accomplished their tasks on time. I acted as a convener and am responsible for creating chat groups and google docs, organizing four times meetings, adding templates etc. I am a very organized person, so I managed it well.

Since this is the first time I carried out academic group work, I have learned a lot from it. First, Before the meeting, A shared a project contract sample. B wrote and submitted the first draft of the group contract. Consequently, within the team meeting, focusing on the draft it is much easier to discuss the proper change about the group contract, so we completed this task five day earlier than the due date. Second, A, B and C cited a lot from different academic resources to support their perspectives. On the same note, put figures into the report to enhance understanding. More so, their language is very concise and coherence. Therefore, if next time I do group work, I would like to contribute more. Apart from this, I would pay more attention to my writing and citing skills.

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Group ABCDE has five members in total.

I am a very organized person, so I managed it well.

Since this is the first time I carried out academic group work, I have learned a lot from it.

B wrote and submitted the first draft of the group contract.

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Nov. 29, 2020

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I acted as a conventhe organizer and am responsible for creating chat groups and google docs, organizing four times meetings, adding templates etc.

convener is not a common word at all. I actually had to look it up in a dictionary and I'm college educated :)

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Everyone accomplished their tasks on time.

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On the same note, putThey also inserted figures into the report to enhance the understanding.

by figures, do you mean numbers?

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Group ABCDE has five members in total.


Group ABCDE has five members in total. Group ABCDE has five members.

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We have cooperated very well; everyone was positive to devote to the group work.


We have cooperated very well; and everyone wasseemed positive to devoting their time to the group work. We have cooperated very well and everyone seemed positive devoting their time to the group work.

We have cooperated very well; everyone was positive to devoted to the group work. We have cooperated very well; everyone was devoted to the group work.

Within the first time of the team meeting, each person was passionate to share their ideas and suggestions, taking the initiative to accept the tasks.


WithDuring the first time of the team meeting, each person was passionate to share their ideas and suggestions, takingand took the initiative to accept their tasks. During the first team meeting, each person was passionate to share their ideas and suggestions, and took the initiative to accept their tasks.

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In result, it was very efficient to figure out the task allocation approach of the group report which everyone was in charge of two chapters and 400 words.


In resulfact, it was very efficient to figure out the task allocation approach of the group report which evasy to allocate two chapters and 400 words per perysone was in charge of two chapters and 400 words.omplete the group report. In fact, it was very easy to allocate two chapters and 400 words per person to complete the group report.

InAs a result, it was verywe efficient toly figured out the task allocation and approach of the group report for which everyone was in charge of two chapters and 400 words. As a result, we efficiently figured out the task allocation and approach of the group report for which everyone was in charge of two chapters and 400 words.

We followed up the progress in every later meeting.


We followed up the progress in every laterupdated everyone on the progress of the report during all the subsequent meetings. We updated everyone on the progress of the report during all the subsequent meetings.

We followed up on the progress in every later meeting. We followed up on the progress in every meeting.

Everyone accomplished their tasks on time.


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I acted as a convener and am responsible for creating chat groups and google docs, organizing four times meetings, adding templates etc.


I acted as a convenn organizer and amwas responsible for creating chat groups and, sharing data using google docs, organizinitiating four times meetings, adding templates, etc. I acted as an organizer and was responsible for creating chat groups, sharing data using google docs, initiating four meetings, adding templates, etc.

I acted as a conventhe organizer and am responsible for creating chat groups and google docs, organizing four times meetings, adding templates etc. I acted as the organizer and am responsible for creating chat groups and google docs, organizing four times meetings, adding templates etc.

convener is not a common word at all. I actually had to look it up in a dictionary and I'm college educated :)

I am a very organized person, so I managed it well.


Since I am a very organized person, so I managed ithe group report well. Since I am a very organized person, I managed the group report well.

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Since this is the first time I carried out academic group work, I have learned a lot from it.


Since this is the first time I carriedy out an academic group workproject, I have learned a lot from it. Since this is the first time I carry out an academic group project, I have learned a lot from it.

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First, Before the meeting, A shared a project contract sample.


Firstor example, Bbefore the first meeting, A shared a project contract satemplate. For example, before the first meeting, A shared a project contract template.

First, Bbefore the meeting, A shared a project contract sample. First, before the meeting, A shared a project contract sample.

B wrote and submitted the first draft of the group contract.


B wroteedited it and submitted the first draft of the group contract. B edited it and submitted the first draft.

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Consequently, within the team meeting, focusing on the draft it is much easier to discuss the proper change about the group contract, so we completed this task five day earlier than the due date.


Consequently, withDuring the first team meeting, focusing on the draft it is muchit was easier to discussfocus on the properosed change about the group contract, so wes in the draft rather than starting from scratch. This gave allowed us to completed thise task five day earlier than the due date. During the first team meeting, it was easier to focus on the proposed changes in the draft rather than starting from scratch. This gave allowed us to complete the task five day earlier than the due date.

Consequently, within the team meeting, when focusing on the draft, it iwas much easier to discuss the proper change about the group contract, so we completed this task five days earlier than the due date. Consequently, within the team meeting, when focusing on the draft, it was much easier to discuss the proper change about the group contract, so we completed this task five days earlier than the due date.

Second, A, B and C cited a lot from different academic resources to support their perspectives.


Second,Another thing I learned was from A, B and C, who cited a lot from different academic resources to support their perspectives. Another thing I learned was from A, B and C, who cited from different academic resources to support their perspectives.

On the same note, put figures into the report to enhance understanding.


On the same note, putThey also inserted figures into the report to enhance the understanding. They also inserted figures into the report to enhance the understanding.

by figures, do you mean numbers?

On the same note, they put figures into the report to enhance their understanding. On the same note, they put figures into the report to enhance their understanding.

This still sounds awkward. I would say: On that note, they also put figures in the report to enhance their arguements.

More so, their language is very concise and coherence.


More so, their languagFurthermore, their writing style is very concise and coherencet. Furthermore, their writing style is very concise and coherent.

More soover, their language is very concise and coherence. Moreover, their language is very concise and coherence.

Therefore, if next time I do group work, I would like to contribute more.


Therefore, if next timeIf I do group work again, I would like to contribute more. as well as pay more attention to my writing and my citations. If I do group work again, I would like to contribute more as well as pay more attention to my writing and my citations.

Therefore, ifthe next time I do group work, I would like to contribute more. Therefore, the next time I do group work, I would like to contribute more.

Apart from this, I would pay more attention to my writing and citing skills.


Apart from this, I would pay more attention to my writing and citing skills.

I combined the last two sentences together

Apart from this, I would pay more attention to my writing and citingation skills. Apart from this, I would pay more attention to my writing and citation skills.

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