A lLetter to mMy sSchool A Letter to My School

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

To wWhom  iIt mMay cConcern, To Whom  It May Concern,

To wWhom  iIt mMay cConcern, To Whom It May Concern,

We usually capitalize it like this in the US.

To whom  it may concern, To whom it may concern,

We have toI would like to propose that our school stop using products that are tested ion animals.The s Society is using any kind of product, even if they don not know what process it passed through . I would like to propose that our school stop using products that are tested on animals. Society is using any kind of product, even if they do not know what process it passed through.

Avoid contractions in formal writing. Also, make clear that you want to create this change in your school specifically.

We have to stop using products that are tested ion animals.The s Society is using any kind of product even if they don't know what process it passed through about the process through which it passed. We have to stop using products that are tested on animals. Society is using any kind of product even if they don't know about the process through which it passed.

We have to stop using products that are tested using animals.The s Society is using any kind of product even if they don't know what kind of process it passed through . We have to stop using products that are tested using animals. Society is using any kind of product even if they don't know what kind of process it passed through.

We haveneed to stop using products that are tested ion animals.The society is using People will use any kind of product even if they don't know what procesethical standards it phassed gone through . We need to stop using products that are tested on animals. People will use any kind of product even if they don't know what ethical standards it has gone through.

My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested ion animals . My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested on animals.

My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested ion animals . My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested on animals .

My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested ion animals . My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested on animals.

My objective with this letter is to make thegoal is to get schools to stop using products that are chemically tested ion animals . My goal is to get schools to stop using products that are chemically tested on animals .

FirstlyThe animals that are used to test the products in are kept in cages while areand fed of bad quality food . The animals that are used to test the products are kept in cages and fed bad quality food.

I would avoid using the "first..." introduction, because this seems to be your main point instead of one of a series of points.

Firstly, animals that are used to test the products in are kept in cages while arebeing fed of bad quality food . Firstly, animals that are used to test the products are kept in cages while being fed bad quality food.

Firstly, animals that are used to test the products in are kept in cages, while arebeing fed of bad quality food . Firstly, animals that are used to test products are kept in cages, while being fed bad quality food.

Firstly off, animals that are used to test the products infor product testing are mistreated. They are kept in cages whileand are fed of badpoor quality food . First off, animals that are used for product testing are mistreated. They are kept in cages and are fed poor quality food .

Many animals die  A after living their whole lives kept in cages being guinea pigs until they dieexperimented on. Many animals die after living their whole lives kept in cages being experimented on.

It is best to avoid the "guinea pig" metaphor when you're already talking about animals.

Many animals die  Aafter living their whole lives kept in cages while being guinea pigs until they die. Many animals die after living their whole lives kept in cages while being guinea pigs.

Many animals die  Aafter living their whole lives kept in cages, being guinea pigs until they die. Many animals die after living their whole lives in cages, being guinea pigs until they die.

Many animals die  Aftsuffer living their whole lives kept in cages being guinea pigs until they dieas test subjects. Many animals suffer living their whole lives in cages as test subjects.

With this letter I want to make sure our school doesn' not use thisese kinds of products, and we can make thisese businessess stop testing ion animals, so they can be   free av or have a normal lives. With this letter I want to make sure our school does not use these kinds of products, and we can make these businesses stop testing on animals, so they can be free or have normal lives.

With this letter I want to make sure our school doesn't use thisese kinds of products andso we can make thisese businessess stop testing ion animals so they can be   free av or have a normal lives. With this letter I want to make sure our school doesn't use these kinds of products so we can make these businesses stop testing on animals so they can be free or have normal lives.

With this letter I want to make sure our school doesn't use thisese kinds of products and w. We can make thisese businessess stop testing in animals so they can be   free av ornd have a normal lives. With this letter I want to make sure our school doesn't use these kinds of products. We can make these businesses stop testing animals so they can be free and have a normal lives.

With this letterI want to make sure that our school doesn't use thisese kinds of products and we can make thisforce businessess to stop testing ion animals so that they can be   free av ornd have a normal lives. I want to make sure that our school doesn't use these kinds of products and force businesses to stop testing on animals so that they can be free and have normal lives.

Have a nice day. Have a nice day.

I would say something like "Thank you for your consideration of my proposal" and then include how they can contact you to discuss your proposal.