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galoarellano1987

Nov. 27, 2024

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My First Day After the Sugery

Today is my first fay after the sugery. I have differents feelings right now, for example I feel excited for return but I miss so much to my daughter.

I miss her voice saying me "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo". I miss all her antics, I think with the passing of days I will get used to it again. Only I need patience.

Beside, I miss to pick up my son Sebastian. In the end, the life is like that.

Now, I just wait to be the exit time for run to home and hug my childrens.

Thank you

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Only I need patience.


OI only I need patience. I only need patience.

Only II just need patience. I just need patience.

Beside, I miss to pick up my son Sebastian.


Beside, II also miss to pick uping my son Sebastian up (from...?). I also miss picking my son Sebastian up (from...?).

Besides, I miss to picking up my son, Sebastian. Besides, I miss picking up my son, Sebastian.

"Beside" is used for locations. "Besides" is for talking about an additional point.

In the end, the life is like that.


In the end, the life is like that.That's how my life is going right now. That's how my life is going right now.

In the end, the life is like that. In the end, life is like that.

Now, I just wait to be the exit time for run to home and hug my childrens.


Now, I just wait to be the exit time forhave to wait to run to home and hug my childrens. Now, I just have to wait to run to home and hug my children.

Now, I'm just waiting to be the exit time forleave so (that) I can run to home and hug my childrens. Now I'm just waiting to leave so (that) I can run home and hug my children.

You can use "that" here, but the sentence is still correct without it.

Thank you


Thank you. Thank you.

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My First Day After the Sugery


My First Day After the Surgery My First Day After Surgery

My First Day After the Surgery My First Day After the Surgery

Today is my first fay after the sugery.


Today is my first fday after the surgery. Today is my first day after surgery.

Today is my first fday after the surgery. Today is my first day after the surgery.

I have differents feelings right now, for example I feel excited for return but I miss so much to my daughter.


I have differents feelings right now, fnow. For example, I feel excited forto return but I miss so much tofrom it, but I also miss my daughter. a lot. I have differents feelings now. For example, I feel excited to return from it, but I also miss my daughter a lot.

I have differents feelings right now, f. For example, I feel excited forto return home but I miss so much to my daughter so much. I have different feelings right now. For example, I feel excited to return home but I miss my daughter so much.

I think this sounds better when you split the sentence.

I miss her voice saying me "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo".


I miss her voice sayingcalling out to me, "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo". I miss her calling out to me, "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo".

I miss her voice saycalling me, saying "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo". I miss her voice calling me, saying "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo".

I miss all her antics, I think with the passing of days I will get used to it again.


I also miss all her antics, but I think with the passing of days I wiime I'll get used to ithem again. I also miss all her antics, but I think with time I'll get used to them again.

Instead of antics, you could also use the word "shenanigans".

I miss all her antics,. I think that with the passing of days, I will get used to it/them again. I miss all her antics. I think that with the passing of days, I will get used to it/them again.

It = getting used to things again in a general sense Them = specifically getting used to her antics again

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