June 27, 2020
YouTube video summary
I've recently watched a video where two police officers shot a guy in the back in a parking lot.
Now, this sounds like a common occurance, so I will say it again.
I've recently watched a video where two caucasian police officers shot a man in the back in a dark parking lot. Now, you might be wondering what his race was, so I'll give you more information.
I've recently watched a video where two caucasian police officers shot an African American guy in the back in a dark parking lot. Why did they shoot him?
Was he doing anything wrong?
It's hard to say.
The man was found sleeping in a driveway. The officers woke him up and asked a few questions, then they asked him to do a breath test, and he didn't cooperate. The officers tried to arrest him, but he resisted. They started to throw elbows and wrestled. A few minutes later, the man escaped from the two officers and ran away. They ran after him in the parking lot asking him to stop. He didn't stop. We already know what happened next. The reporter asked, after showing the clip, what would you do?
It's really hard to say.
YouTube video summary
I've recently watched a video where two police officers shoot a guy in the back inof a parking lot.
the past tense of "shoot" is "shot"
Now, this sounds like a frequent eventcommon occurrence, so I will staray it again.
sounds smoother
I've recently watched a video where two cCaucasian police officers shoot a man in the back inof a dark parking lot.
From http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/capital.html :
"Nationalities/Race: Capitalize the proper names of nationalities, races, tribes, etc.: French, Caucasian, Mataponi, Zulu. However, lowercase black, white."
Now, you might be wondering what his race was, so I'll give you more information.
I've recently watched a video where two cCaucasian police officers shoot an African American guy in the back inof a dark parking lot.
Why did they shoot him?
Was he doing anything wrong?
It's hard to say.
The man is found sleeping in a drivewayparking lot.
A driveway is the pathway leading to someone's house, but a parking lot is what you are talking about - a space, normally in public places, where cars can park.
The officers waoke him up and asked a few questions, then they asked him to do a breath test, andwhich he doesidn't want to do.
this event happened in the past, so you need to use past tense
The officers tryied to arrest him, but he resistsed.
They started to throw elbows and wrestlinged.
A few minutes later, the man escapesd from the two officers and runsan away.
They ruan after him in the parking lot, asking him to stop.
He doesidn't stop.
We already know what happens next.
The reporter asked, after showing the clip, what would you do?
It's really hard to say.
Feedback
Good post! I changed everything to past tense because it already happened. When you talk about anything in the past, use past tense. So, normally, you will also use past tense when writing a summary, since you're typically summarizing something that had previously occurred.
June 27, 2020
Thank you so much. I originally wrote it in the past and then I changed to the present tense. I thought it would be the right tense since I was describing the events from a video, you know, when you describe a movie. But I got what you said. Thanks again 😊
June 27, 2020
Now, this sounds like a frequent eventcommon occurrence, so I will staray it again.
Thank you😊
June 27, 2020
You're welcome! :)
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A few minutes later, the black man escapes from the two officers and run away. |
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I've recently watched a video where two caucasian police officers shoot a guy in the African American in a dark parking lot. |
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The man is found sleeping in a driveway. The man is found sleeping in a A driveway is the pathway leading to someone's house, but a parking lot is what you are talking about - a space, normally in public places, where cars can park. |
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I've recently watched a video where two caucasian police officers shoot a man in the back in a dark parking lot. I've recently watched a video where two From http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/capital.html : "Nationalities/Race: Capitalize the proper names of nationalities, races, tribes, etc.: French, Caucasian, Mataponi, Zulu. However, lowercase black, white." |
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Now, you might be wondering what his race was, so I'll give you more information. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The reporter asked, after showing the clip, what would you do? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I've recently watched a video where two police officers shot a guy in the back in a parking lot. |
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I've recently watched a video where two caucasian police officers shot a man in the back in a dark parking lot. |
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I've recently watched a video where two caucasian police officers shot an African American guy in the back in a dark parking lot. |
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The man was found sleeping in a driveway. |
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The officers woke him and asked a few questions, then they asked him to do a breath test, and he didn't want to. |
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The officers tried to arrest him, but he resisted. |
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They started to throw elbows and wrestled. |
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A few minutes later, the man escaped from the two officers and ran away. |
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They ran after him in the parking lot asking him to stop. |
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He didn't stop. |
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We already know what happened next. |
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The officers woke him and asked a few questions, then they asked him to do a breath test, and he refused it. |
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The officers woke him up and asked a few questions, then they asked him to do a breath test, and he didn't cooperate. |
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Now, this sounds like a common occurance, so I will say it again. |
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