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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 6, 2021

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One of my favorite websites is YouTube.
There are tons of video clips that post every day.
I usually watch more than 3 clips one day.

My favorite contents are about astrology.
I like watching spaceship clips, new astrology result clips and so on.
With the clips, I can understand more about the space.

Next, I usually watch trip abroad clips.
I traveled more than one time a year, but it isn’t possible because of Covid 19.
Instead, I watch clips about traveling abroad.
I can see many beautiful sight seeing and learn tips during trip.

Lastly, I use the clips as if they are background musics.
During working at the office, I sometimes play the clip in the back window to listen to its music.
Like OST and Game music are easily possible to listen by the clips.

So, these are the thing what website I like and what I do.

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YouTube

One of my favorite websites is YouTube.

There are tons of video clips that are posted every day.

I usually watch more than 3 clips onevideos a day.

My favorite contents are is about astrology.

I like watching videos about spaceship clips, new astrology result clipsearch, and so on.

With the clips,atching these videos, I feel I can understand more about the space.

I suppose you could say ‘clips,’ but I’d say videos, so I’m going to continue changing it to videos haha

Next, I usually watch trip abroad clips.I also like watching videos about traveling abroad.

I traveleused to go abroad more than one timce a year, but it isn’t possible nowadays because of Covid 19.

ISo instead, I just watch clipvideos about traveling abroad.

I can see many beautiful sight seeings and learn tips during trip.by watching them.

Lastly, I use the clips as ifThe last kinds of videos I look up are music videos, and I use theym ares background musics.

DuringWhen I’m working at the office, I sometimes playopen the clipvideo in the back window to listen to itsthe music.

Like OST and Game music are easily possible to listen by the clipfrom games - those are usually my go-tos.

‘Easily possible to listen by the clips’ sounds kind of unnatural to me and I didn’t really get what you meant, so I took some liberty in changing the sentence here. By the way, the plural of ‘go-to’ is go-tos’

So yeah, these are the thing what website I like and what I do.I like to do with the website I like.

‘So yeah’ sounds pretty casual and friendly. It kind of has the nuance that you’ve finished what you were talking about

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My favorite stuff to watch on YouTube is stand-up comedy and anything in Japanese, because I’m trying to learn it. Good job with the English!

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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 7, 2021

402

Thanks for your help.

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One of my favorite website is YouTube.


There are tons of video clips that are posting every day.


I usually watch more than 3 clips one day.


I usually watch more than 3 clips onevideos a day.

My favorite contents are about astrology.


My favorite contents are is about astrology.

I like watching spaceship clips, new astrology result clips and so on.


I like watching videos about spaceship clips, new astrology result clipsearch, and so on.

With the clips, I can understand more about the space.


With the clips,atching these videos, I feel I can understand more about the space.

I suppose you could say ‘clips,’ but I’d say videos, so I’m going to continue changing it to videos haha

Next, I usually watch trip abroad clips.


Next, I usually watch trip abroad clips.I also like watching videos about traveling abroad.

I traveled more than one time a year but it isn’t possible because of Covid 19.


Instead, I watch clips about traveling abroad.


ISo instead, I just watch clipvideos about traveling abroad.

I can see many beautiful site seeing and learn tips during trip.


Lastly, I use the clips as if they are back ground musics.


During working at the office, I sometimes play the clip in the back window to listen to its music.


DuringWhen I’m working at the office, I sometimes playopen the clipvideo in the back window to listen to itsthe music.

Like OST and Game music are easily possible to listen by the clips.


Like OST and Game music are easily possible to listen by the clipfrom games - those are usually my go-tos.

‘Easily possible to listen by the clips’ sounds kind of unnatural to me and I didn’t really get what you meant, so I took some liberty in changing the sentence here. By the way, the plural of ‘go-to’ is go-tos’

So, these are the thing what website I like and what I do.


So yeah, these are the thing what website I like and what I do.I like to do with the website I like.

‘So yeah’ sounds pretty casual and friendly. It kind of has the nuance that you’ve finished what you were talking about

One of my favorite websites is YouTube.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are tons of video clips that post every day.


There are tons of video clips that are posted every day.

I traveled more than one time a year, but it isn’t possible because of Covid 19.


I traveleused to go abroad more than one timce a year, but it isn’t possible nowadays because of Covid 19.

I can see many beautiful sight seeing and learn tips during trip.


I can see many beautiful sight seeings and learn tips during trip.by watching them.

Lastly, I use the clips as if they are background musics.


Lastly, I use the clips as ifThe last kinds of videos I look up are music videos, and I use theym ares background musics.

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