Youth's regretsThe Regrets of Youth

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles. This correction sounds more natural in the US.

That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result, I spendt my whole adolescence talking with a reduced amount offew people and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom.

But tThe first part of this year, however, changed everything.

There I met a lot of people, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people,people I hadn't met before, and flirted with some girls,. In short, I lived.

The problem with that is now I'm in my latest 20's, and I think that I don't have too much time to recover thosee earlier losst time.

Dude, you're still very young.

That's why I'm planning to go abroad again ion a Wworking Hholiday so that I cand live mythe last years of my youth without religious "restraints" or judgement from my family.

Youth's rRegrets

It is common to capitalize each word in a title.

That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result I spend my whole adolescence talking with a reduced amountonly a limited number of people and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom.

(But /) However, the first part of this year changed everything.

There, I met a lot of people, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people, and flirted with some girls, I(― / ;)in short, I lived.

We use an em-dash or a semicolon to separate two sentences that are connected, but function independently.

The problem with that is I'm (already) in my latest 20's, and I don't think I don't have toohave much time left to recover those loss time(lost time / what time I lost).

That's why I'm planning to go abroad again during a Working Holiday and live my last years of youth without religious "restraints" or judgement from my family.

That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result I spend my whole adolescence talking with a reduced amount of peoplmost of my teenage years not talking to anyone and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom.

I hadgot a scholarship to study abroad.

There I met a lot of people, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people, and flirted with some girls,. In short I lived.

The problem with that is I'm in my latest 20's, and I don’t think I don't have too much time to recover thosehave much longer to make up for losst time.

Youth's rRegrets

Alternative Title: "The Regrets of Youth"
I like this one more, it sounds poetic, haha.

When I was a boy, I grew up in a religious and overprotective family.

That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and, as a result, I spend my whole adolescence talking with a reduclimited amount of people and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom.

"Limited" seems a better word than "reduce." I would use "restricted" but you had "restrictions" earlier, so to avoid repitition I put "limited."

But the first partbeginning of this year changed everything.

"Beginning" is a more conicse way of saying "first part."

I hareceived a scholarship to study abroad.

You use the verb "receive" to say that you get a scholarship.

There, I met a lot of peple, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people, and flirted with some girls,. In short, I lived.

The problem withis that is I'm in my latest 20's, and I think I don't have too much time to recover thoseany losst time.

That's why I'm planning to go abroad again induring/over a Wworking Hholiday and live my last years of youth without religius "restraints" or judgement from my family.