I really like to write poetry in my mother tongue and, so I decided to write a poem in English to improve my writing skills.

Your sentence isn't wrong, but it sounds more natural this way.

I tried to make it rhyme, and I did it in some parts, so here it is, p. Please enjoy.

Your cheeks are like clouds at the sunset,

Your bBeauty in the sSummer nNight

I tried to make it rhyme and Iit did it in some parts, so here it is, please enjoy.

“I did it in some parts” sounds a little awkward.

Your cheeks are like clouds atin the sunset,

Normally one would say either in the sunset or during sunset. In the sunset flows better.

But your blue eyes, that combine with the stars in the summer night,

“That” seems clunky here.

Your bBeauty in the sSummer nNight

All content words of a title should be capitalized.

I tried to make it rhyme and I did it in some parts, so here it is, p. Please enjoy.

Your cheeks are like clouds at the sunset,

But your blue eyes, that combine with the stars in the summer night,

Thanks for reading.