July 30, 2025
You have to take cold waters
Ok, maybe you don't have to, but you should.
I just read an article about the topic and I'm going write here what I remember from it and try to relate it with my personal experience.
The two most important benefits from this habit are personal satisfaction and improving the inmune system.
This is not going to work for everyone, of course, but if feeling kind of sad or disoriented is totally recommend to hit straight to your cold bath. In fact, this is part of what's called "hydrotherapy" (please, google it if interested).
Cold showers work well for me. It's a sort of a ritual to take a cold shower before doing something hard/demanding, like public speaking. It's a kind of "source of confidence"; I'm scoring my first points in this challenging day and I'm eager for more now.
The part of the immune system is also true, I rarely catch a cold.
I'm wondering how many people are leveraging this, in my opinion, powerful habit.
Did you have the habit of taking cold showers regularly? If yes, how was it at the beginning?
You have to take cold watshowers
"take cold waters" isn't a phrase that makes sense. "waters" means like... seas, lakes and oceans. It's also a little bit of a more poetic term, not something that gets used everyday.
Replaced it with showers since that's what the rest of the post talks about.
I just read an article about the topic and I'm going write here what I remember from it and try to relate it withto my personal experience.
The two most important benefits from this habit are personal satisfaction and improvingements to the inmmune system.
"benefits are _noun_ and _verb_" sounds a little unnatural so I changed the second to a noun phrase.
This is not going to work for everyone, of course, but if you are feeling kind of sad or disoriented, it is totally recommend to hitead straight to your cold bath.
The part ofabout the immune system is also true, I rarely catch a cold.
Dido you have the habit of taking cold showers regularly?
I just read an article about the topic and I'm going write here what I remember from it and try to relate it withfrom my personal experience.
The two most important benefits from this habit are personal satisfaction and improving the inmmune system.
This is not going to work for everyone, of course, but if you (or someone) is feeling kind of sad or disoriented then it is totally recommended to hitgo straight to youra cold bath.
The part ofabout the immune system is also true, since I rarely catch a cold.
I'm wondering how many people are leveraging this, in my opinion, it is a powerful habit.
Dido you have the habit of taking cold showers regularly?
If yes, how was it atin the beginning?
you can also phrase this as, "how was it at first?"
July 30, 2025
Thanks! :)
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Titles are usually capitalized, and "cold waters" is a bit incorrect.
OkK, maybe you don't have to, but you should.
Technically both are used a lot, but OK is grammatically correct.
I just read an article about the topic, and I'm going write here what I remember from it here and try to relate it withto my personal experience.
The two most important benefits from this habit are personal satisfaction and improving the inmmune system.
small typo :)
This is of course not going to work for everyone, obut if cyourse, but if are feeling kind of sad or disoriented is totallyt's recommended to hitead straight to youra cold bath.
Some of these are stylistic preferences, others are actual grammatical corrections.
In fact, this is part of what's called "hydrotherapy" (please, google it if you are interested!).
Cold showers work well for me.
It's a sort of a ritual to take a cold shower before doing something hard/ or demanding, like public speaking.
It's a kind of "a source of confidence";. I'm scoring my first points in this challenging day and I'm, which makes me eager for more now.
The semicolon isn't technically wrong, but most of your sentences have been pretty long so it's good to vary with short sentences.
The part ofabout the immune system is also true, as I rarely catch a colds.
I'm wondering how many people are leveraging this, in my opinion, powerful habit.
Dido you have the habit of taking cold showers regularly?
If you say "did you", you're talking to people who used to do it and don't do it anymore. I don't think that's what you mean.
If yeso, how was it at the beginning?
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Good job! The one thing I kept noticing is that you kept using past tense where it would sound better to use the present tense.
July 30, 2025
Thank you for your professional feedback. Seems like you are an experienced writer.
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You have to take cold waters You Titles are usually capitalized, and "cold waters" is a bit incorrect. You have to take cold "take cold waters" isn't a phrase that makes sense. "waters" means like... seas, lakes and oceans. It's also a little bit of a more poetic term, not something that gets used everyday. Replaced it with showers since that's what the rest of the post talks about. |
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Ok, maybe you don't have to, but you should. O Technically both are used a lot, but OK is grammatically correct. |
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This is not going to work for everyone, of course, but if feeling kind of sad or disoriented is totally recommend to hit straight to your cold bath. This is of course not going to work for everyone, Some of these are stylistic preferences, others are actual grammatical corrections. This is not going to work for everyone, of course, but if you (or someone) is feeling kind of sad or disoriented then it is totally recommended to This is not going to work for everyone, of course, but if you are feeling kind of sad or disoriented, it is totally recommend to h |
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In fact, this is part of what's called "hydrotherapy" (please, google it if interested). In fact, this is part of what's called "hydrotherapy" (please, google it if you are interested!). |
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Cold showers work well for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a sort of a ritual to take a cold shower before doing something hard/demanding, like public speaking. It's a sort of |
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It's a kind of "source of confidence"; I'm scoring my first points in this challenging day and I'm eager for more now. It's a kind of The semicolon isn't technically wrong, but most of your sentences have been pretty long so it's good to vary with short sentences. |
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The part of the immune system is also true, I rarely catch a cold. The part The part The part |
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I'm wondering how many people are leveraging this, in my opinion, powerful habit. I I'm wondering how many people are leveraging this, in my opinion, it is a powerful habit. |
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Did you have the habit of taking cold showers regularly? D If you say "did you", you're talking to people who used to do it and don't do it anymore. I don't think that's what you mean. D D |
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If yes, how was it at the beginning? If If yes, how was it you can also phrase this as, "how was it at first?" |
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