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In this day's afternoon, I felt stereotype and the impulse of getting home came into my mind.it reminded me of an affair happened to me last week.

The picturvivid memories kept coming to light in my mind.

Suddenly I wasIt was then that I was suddenly awakened whenby the bell aftersignalling that class was activatedover.

And I sawI noticed that he was walking out the classroom, Iand had decided to followed him.

I faced to him and said, "I want to try again".

I was hellbent on scaling the wall and stranded the top of wall just for tens of. So once I finally made it to the top of wall, I stood there for several seconds.

TheWith my heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jumpand took a leap of faith.

When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just like. Similar to the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption".

In this day'This afternoon, I felt people stereotypeing me, and the impulse of gettoing home came into my mind.i It reminded me of an affairsomething happened to me last week.

"Such a close chance to success but I abandoned it,", I thought regretfully.

The pictures kept coming to light in my mind.

Suddenly, I was awakened when the bell after class was activatedafternoon bell rang.

And I saw he wasim walking out the classroom, so I followed him.

I faced to him and said, "I want to try again"."

I was hellbent on scaling the wall and was stranded on the top of the wall for just for tenths of a seconds.

When my fooeet landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just, like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption".

I am not familiar with the terms hooky and extractor used in this context

In this day's afternoon, I felt stereotype and the impulse of getting home came into my mind.it reminded me of an affairThis afternoon... I was reminded of an incident that happened to me last week.

"I felt stereotype and the impulse of getting home came into my mind" - I couldn't understand this part, can you tell me more about what you are trying to say? Then I could think of something to help you express it.

"Such a close chance to success but I abandoned", I thought regretfully.

"I was so close to success, but I let go of the opportunity", I thought regretfully.

The pictures kept coming to light in my mind.

You could also say: "The scenes flashed through my mind again".

Suddenly I was awakened when the bell after class was activatedrang to signal the end of class.

And I saw he wasim walking out of the classroom,. I followed him.

Unsurprisingly, he camewent to the place where I had fled.

"Went" because you were following him, and you are both going somewhere.

I faced to him and said, "I want to try again".

I was hell-bent on scaling the wall and stranddled the top of wall just for tens of seconds.

"Straddled" - meaning that you are sitting at the top of the wall with one leg on each side. I'm assuming that this is what you want to say. Or, you could say "stayed at the top of the wall"

TheMy heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jump.

When my fooeet landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption".

I'm not sure what a "hooky" and "extractor" is...

In this day'This afternoon, I felt stereotypeical and had the impulse of gettoing home came into my mind.i. It reminded me of an affairsomething that happened to me last week.

"Such a close chance tofor success, but I abandoned",gave up," I thought regretfully.

I hated my incompetence and envied his boldness.

Since we don't know who "he" is in this text, you should reference the individually directly first. E.g., I envied the boldness of [my friend / the man I saw / my boss]

Suddenly, I was awakenedoke up when the bell after class was activatedrang.

We say that bells "ring" or "sound."

And I saw he was walking out the classroom, and I followed him.

Unsurprisingly, he came to the place where I had fled before.

I faced to him and said, "I want to try again"."

I was hell-bent on scaling the wall, and strandedood on the top of wall for just for tens of seconds.

Stranded isn't the right word here, I think you mean stand on.

TheMy heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jump.

When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption"."

I don't know what hooky or extractor mean in this context. If it's a direct reference to this movie, that makes sense.