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voidKamen

March 25, 2024

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

In this day's afternoon, I felt stereotype and the impulse of getting home came into my mind.it reminded me of an affair happened to me last week. "Such a close chance to success but I abandoned", I thought regretfully. The pictures kept coming to light in my mind. I hated my incompetence and envied his boldness. Suddenly I was awakened when the bell after class was activated. And I saw he was walking out the classroom, I followed him. Unsurprisingly, he came to the place where I had fled. I faced to him and said, "I want to try again". He nodded and we went to the wall together. I was hellbent on scaling the wall and stranded the top of wall just for tens of seconds. I told myself, "Just jump down, you will make it and escape from prison. The heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jump. When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like a extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption".

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

"Such a close chance to success but I abandoned", I thought regretfully.

The pictures kept coming to light in my mind.

I hated my incompetence and envied his boldness.

And I saw he was walking out the classroom, I followed him.

Unsurprisingly, he came to the place where I had fled.

I faced to him and said, "I want to try again".

He nodded and we went to the wall together.

I was hellbent on scaling the wall and stranded the top of wall just for tens of seconds.

I told myself, "Just jump down, you will make it and escape from prison.

The heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jump.

When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like a extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption".

Unsurprisingly, he came to the place where I had fled.

He nodded and we went to the wall together.

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March 27, 2024

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

I hated my incompetence and envied his boldness.

Unsurprisingly, he came to the place where I had fled.

He nodded and we went to the wall together.

I told myself, "Just jump down, you will make it and escape from prison.

The heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jump.

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voidKamen

March 27, 2024

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shorter

March 27, 2024

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I hated my incompetence and envied his boldness.

He nodded and we went to the wall together.

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voidKamen

March 27, 2024

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

The pictures kept coming to light in my mind.

He nodded and we went to the wall together.

I told myself, "Just jump down, you will make it and escape from prison.

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voidKamen

March 27, 2024

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of


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In this day's afternoon, I felt stereotype and the impulse of getting home came into my mind.it reminded me of an affair happened to me last week.


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"Such a close chance to success but I abandoned", I thought regretfully.


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The pictures kept coming to light in my mind.


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The pictures kept coming to light in my mind. The pictures kept coming to light in my mind.

You could also say: "The scenes flashed through my mind again".

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I hated my incompetence and envied his boldness.


I hated my incompetence and envied his boldness. I hated my incompetence and envied his boldness.

Since we don't know who "he" is in this text, you should reference the individually directly first. E.g., I envied the boldness of [my friend / the man I saw / my boss]

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Suddenly I was awakened when the bell after class was activated.


Suddenly, I was awakenedoke up when the bell after class was activatedrang. Suddenly, I woke up when the bell after class rang.

We say that bells "ring" or "sound."

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And I saw he was walking out the classroom, I followed him.


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Unsurprisingly, he came to the place where I had fled.


Unsurprisingly, he came to the place where I had fled before. Unsurprisingly, he came to the place where I had fled before.

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"Went" because you were following him, and you are both going somewhere.

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I faced to him and said, "I want to try again".


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He nodded and we went to the wall together.


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I was hellbent on scaling the wall and stranded the top of wall just for tens of seconds.


I was hell-bent on scaling the wall, and strandedood on the top of wall for just for tens of seconds. I was hell-bent on scaling the wall, and stood on the top of wall for just tens of seconds.

Stranded isn't the right word here, I think you mean stand on.

I was hell-bent on scaling the wall and stranddled the top of wall just for tens of seconds. I was hell-bent on scaling the wall and straddled the top of wall just for tens of seconds.

"Straddled" - meaning that you are sitting at the top of the wall with one leg on each side. I'm assuming that this is what you want to say. Or, you could say "stayed at the top of the wall"

I was hellbent on scaling the wall and was stranded on the top of the wall for just for tenths of a seconds. I was hellbent on scaling the wall and was stranded on the top of the wall for just tenths of a second.

I was hellbent on scaling the wall and stranded the top of wall just for tens of. So once I finally made it to the top of wall, I stood there for several seconds. I was hellbent on scaling the wall. So once I finally made it to the top of wall, I stood there for several seconds.

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When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like a extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption".


When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption"." When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption."

I don't know what hooky or extractor mean in this context. If it's a direct reference to this movie, that makes sense.

When my fooeet landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption". When my feet landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just like the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption".

I'm not sure what a "hooky" and "extractor" is...

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I am not familiar with the terms hooky and extractor used in this context

When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor just like. Similar to the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption". When my foot landed, I didn't feel like a hooky, I felt like an extractor. Similar to the protagonist of "The Shawshank Redemption".

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I told myself, "Just jump down, you will make it and escape from prison.


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The heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jump.


TheMy heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jump. My heart was beating violently, and I closed my eyes to jump.

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