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voidKamen

March 25, 2024

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

And he said loudly to me "tried again". I replied without confidence "I couldn't do it that exceed my ability. He approached the wall and said, "as long as you do it to the best of your ability, you could make it". He expertly scaled the wall to give me a hint. In the end, I still didn't follow his lead. And I saw him was slowly leaving here with disappointment. Unlike him, I left here speedily with shame. I didn't think it was in my heart like it had never happened until a certain day.

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

And he said loudly to me "triedTry again".

I replied without confidence "I couldn't do it tha, it exceed my ability.

He approached the wall and said, "aAs long as you do it to the best of your abilityies, you could make it !".

He expertly scaled the wall to give me a hint.

In the end, I still didn't follow his lead.

And I saw him, he was slowly leaving here with disappointment.

Unlike him, I left here speedily with shame.

I didn't think it was in my heart, like it had never happened until a certain day.

You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

And he said loudly to me, "triedTry again"."

I replied without confidence, "I couldan't do it t. That exceeds my ability.ies."

He approached the wall and said, "aAs long as you do it to the best of your ability, you couldan make it"."

He expertly scaled the wall to give me a hintshow me.

In the end, I still didn't follow his lead.

And I saw him was slowly leaving here with disappointment.

Unlike him, I left here speedily within shame.

I didn't think it was in my heart like it had never happened until a certain day.

What are you trying to say with this one?

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voidKamen

March 27, 2024

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it means this matter about trying to scale the wall and fleeing this place.The meaning of this sentence is that I think I will gradually forget it with the time goes, it will leave nothing in my heart as if it never happened,but something happend to me on a certain day reminded me of it and left a deep impression on me.And this purpose of this sentence is to foreshadowing the latter text.

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shorter

March 27, 2024

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Oh so like, "This memory faded with time, almost as if never happened, but I'd kept it in my heart without realizing it, until a certain day." This is a lot of ideas to try to express with just one sentence and can make your sentence quite complicated. It might be good to break it up and explain in more detail.

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

And he said loudly to me "triedy again".

I replied without confidencetimidly, "I couldan't do it that, it exceeds my ability."

He approached the wall and said, "as long as you do it to the best of your abilityyour best, you couldwill make it".

He expertly scaled the wall to give me a hint.

In the end, I still didn't follow his lead.

And I sawwatched him was slowly leaving here with disappointment.

Unlike him, I left here speedilyquickly left, filled with shame.

I didn't think ithis was in my heart like it. This had never happened until a certain daybefore.

Not sure what this wants to say. Made a guess for the correction.

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voidKamen

March 27, 2024

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it means this matter about trying to scale the wall and fleeing this place.The meaning of this sentence is that I think I will gradually forget it with the time goes, it will leave nothing in my heart as if it never happened,but something happend to me on a certain day reminded me of it and left a deep impression on me.And this purpose of this sentence is to foreshadowing the latter text.

You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of

And he said loudly told me, "triedTry again".

I replied without confidence "I couldan't do itsomething that exceeds my ability.

Alternative:
I can't do something that's beyond my ability.

He approached the wall and said, "aAs long as you do it to the best of your ability, you could make it".

Alternative:
"As long as you do your best, ..."

He expertly scaled the wall to give me a hint.

In the end, I still didn't follow his lead.

And I saw him was slowly leaving here with disappointmentI watched with great disappointment as he slowly went away.

Unlike him, I left here speediwalked away from the wall quickly with shame.

I didn't think it was in my heart like it had never happened until a certain day.

Sorry, I didn't understand this.

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voidKamen

March 27, 2024

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it means this matter about trying to scale the wall and fleeing this place.The meaning of this sentence is that I think I will gradually forget it with the time goes, it will leave nothing in my heart as if it never happened,but something happend to me on a certain day reminded me of it and left a deep impression on me.And this purpose of this sentence is to foreshadowing the latter text.

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kapnCrunch

March 27, 2024

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Thanks for explaining the meaning of the sentence.

He expertly scaled the wall to give me a hint.


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He expertly scaled the wall to give me a hintshow me.

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You Can Do Anything You Can Dream Of


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And he said loudly to me "tried again".


And he said loudly told me, "triedTry again".

And he said loudly to me "triedy again".

And he said loudly to me, "triedTry again"."

And he said loudly to me "triedTry again".

I replied without confidence "I couldn't do it that exceed my ability.


I replied without confidence "I couldan't do itsomething that exceeds my ability.

Alternative: I can't do something that's beyond my ability.

I replied without confidencetimidly, "I couldan't do it that, it exceeds my ability."

I replied without confidence, "I couldan't do it t. That exceeds my ability.ies."

I replied without confidence "I couldn't do it tha, it exceed my ability.

He approached the wall and said, "as long as you do it to the best of your ability, you could make it".


He approached the wall and said, "aAs long as you do it to the best of your ability, you could make it".

Alternative: "As long as you do your best, ..."

He approached the wall and said, "as long as you do it to the best of your abilityyour best, you couldwill make it".

He approached the wall and said, "aAs long as you do it to the best of your ability, you couldan make it"."

He approached the wall and said, "aAs long as you do it to the best of your abilityies, you could make it !".

In the end, I still didn't follow his lead.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I saw him was slowly leaving here with disappointment.


And I saw him was slowly leaving here with disappointmentI watched with great disappointment as he slowly went away.

And I sawwatched him was slowly leaving here with disappointment.

And I saw him was slowly leaving here with disappointment.

And I saw him, he was slowly leaving here with disappointment.

Unlike him, I left here speedily with shame.


Unlike him, I left here speediwalked away from the wall quickly with shame.

Unlike him, I left here speedilyquickly left, filled with shame.

Unlike him, I left here speedily within shame.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't think it was in my heart like it had never happened until a certain day.


I didn't think it was in my heart like it had never happened until a certain day.

Sorry, I didn't understand this.

I didn't think ithis was in my heart like it. This had never happened until a certain daybefore.

Not sure what this wants to say. Made a guess for the correction.

I didn't think it was in my heart like it had never happened until a certain day.

What are you trying to say with this one?

I didn't think it was in my heart, like it had never happened until a certain day.

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