I never met the requirement abouts to participate in these sports. I never met the requirements to participate in these sports.

I never met the requirement abouts for these sports. I never met the requirements for these sports.

I never met requirement aboutof these sports. I never met requirement of these sports.

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And, in my mind, scaling the wall was obviously involvrelated to the sports in my mind. And, in my mind, scaling the wall was obviously related to the sports.

[He] seemed to perceive my thought and said," It wa's disgraceful to give up if you even hadn't tried it"." [He] seemed to perceive my thought and said," It's disgraceful to give up if you even hadn't tried it."

Who is he? Before referring to he/her/them in your text or conversation, you need to introduce them. For example, "[The man] seemed... "[ My coach] seemed..." The man's quote was from in the moment, so use the present "It is" not "It was."

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FinallyIn the end, I failed. In the end, I failed.

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Title capitalization rules

yYou can do anything you can dream of You can do anything you can dream of

Titles usually capitalize the beginning of each word. Since yours is long, you can also choose not to put it in that format, but you should at least capitalize the first word.

yYou can do anything you can dream of. You can do anything you can dream of.

FI faced the wall, my mooind was conflict, which had the crave to the home and the fear to the walled. I feared the wall and wanted to go home. I faced the wall, my mind was conflicted. I feared the wall and wanted to go home.

This is far easier to understand

Faceding the wall, my mood was conflict, which had the crave to the home and the fear to the walled. Facing the wall, my mood was conflicted.

which had the crave to the home and the fear to the wall -> I can't tell what you are trying to express here

FHaving faced the wall, my mood was conflicted, which had themeant that I was craveing to thego home and thealso was fear toing the wall. Having faced the wall, my mood was conflicted, which meant that I was craving to go home and also was fearing the wall.

The first reason ofor the fear I havealready mentioned in the previous article, S. The second and even more important reason was theat my obesity of mine/weight made me think I can't believe I can do anything linked to sports, such as running, rope skipping, etc. The first reason for the fear I already mentioned in the previous article. The second and even more important reason was that my obesity/weight made me think I can't do anything linked to sports, such as running, rope skipping, etc.

Be careful about run-on sentences. It's more natural for someone (even clearly obese) to refer to their "weight" rather than their "obesity." "think I can't {believe I can do} X" this bracketed piece should be removed. Alternatively, you could say "made me believe I can't do X." Basically choose to use "think" or "believe," but not both.

The first reason of themy fear I havewas mentioned in themy previous article, S. The second and even more importantpressing was themy obesity of mine, which made me think I can't believe I can't do anything linkrelated to sports, such as running, rope skipping, etc. The first reason of my fear was mentioned in my previous article. The second and even more pressing was my obesity, which made me believe I can't do anything related to sports, such as running, rope skipping, etc.

The first reason of the fear I have mentioned in the previous article, Second and even more important was themy obesity of mine. It made me think I can't believe I canthat I couldn't do anything linkrelated to sports, such as running, rope skipping, etc. The first reason of the fear I have mentioned in the previous article, Second and even more important was my obesity. It made me think that I couldn't do anything related to sports, such as running, rope skipping, etc.

Consequently, I dipped my toes in pressinged my foot on the support point of the wall and gripped the handrail. Consequently, I pressed my foot on the support point of the wall and gripped the handrail.

No need for "dipped my toes in" here as it doesn't fit your text. We say that we dip our toes in something in either the literal sense: "At the pool, I dipped my toes in the water." Or in the figurative sense, "I dipped my toes into horseback riding." The figurative meaning is a direct reference to the literal meaning, because for example we might carefully dip our toes into water to check we are okay with the temperature before fully submerging into the water.

ConsequentlyTherefore, I dipped my toes in, pressing my foot on the support point of the wall and gripped the handrail. Therefore, I dipped my toes in, pressing my foot on the support point of the wall and gripped the handrail.

My eyes followed the ground and I wondered, "It wa's so high, could I succeed?/make it?" My eyes followed the ground and I wondered, "It's so high, could I succeed/make it?"

You're describing your thought in the moment, so the quote needs to be in present tense. We often use the word "make it" in the sense of succeed at something.

My eyes followed the ground and I wondered, "It was so high, could I succeed? My eyes followed the ground and I wondered, "It was so high, could I succeed?

wWhen I prepared for maddking further efforts, SI suddenly I felt terrified thatby hearding the sound of walking and stopped the action. When I prepared for making further efforts, I suddenly felt terrified by hearing the sound of walking and stopped.

when I was prepared for maddinging to make further efforts, SI suddenly I felt terrified thatbecause I heard the sound of walking and stopped themy actions. when I was preparing to make further efforts, I suddenly felt terrified because I heard the sound of walking and stopped my actions.