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voidKamen

March 22, 2024

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you can do anything you can dream of

Suddenly he said "Would you like to leave here? I replied "sure, but how could I do it? He led me to an area that surrounded by trees. I have seen his motivation when I saw a high wall in front of trees. I was surprised that He intended to scale the wall. But at this moment, I hesitated whether should I take a risk cause we were dead if we were monitored by cameras in the dark. But I observed his face had no expressions and guessed he was experienced to scale the wall. (In fact, the wall is not real wall. you can consider it railing, I am used to use the word " wall" for it because it is also the wall of my heart.)

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you can do anything that you conceive

Suddenly he said "Would you like to leave here?

I replied "sSure, but how could I do it?

He led me to an area that was surrounded by trees.

I have seenthen saw his motivation when I saw a high wall in front of trees.

I was surprised that Hbecause he intended to scale the wall.

But at this moment, I hesitated whether should I take athe risk cause, we werould be dead if we were monitoredcaught by cameras in the dark.

But I observed his face, it had no expressions and I guessed that he was experienced toin scale the wall.

(In fact, the wall is not a real wall.

yYou can consider it railing, I am used to use the word " wall" for it because it is also the wall of my heart.)

yYou can do anything that you conceiveyou can dream of

Suddenly he said "Would you like to leave here?"

I replied "sure, but how could I do it?"

He led me to an area that was surrounded by trees.

I have seen his motivanoticed his intention when I saw a high wall in front of trees.

I was surprised that Hhe intended to scale the wall.

But aAt this moment, I hesitated whether should I take a risk because we werould be dead if we were monitored by cameras in the dark.

But I observed that his face had no expressions and guessed he was experienced toin scale theing walls.

(In fact, the wall iwas not real wall.

yYou can consider it a railing,. I am used to use the word " wall" for it because it is also the wall of my heart.)

you can do anything that you conceive

There's nothing wrong with this title but just curious why you use it?

Suddenly, he said, "Would you like to leave here?

I replied, "sSure, but how could I do it?"

He led me to an area that was surrounded by trees.

I have seenrealized his motivationes when I saw a high wall in front of the trees.

I'm guessing this is what you're trying to express?

I was surprised that Hhe intended to scale the wall.

But at this moment, I hesitated whether I should I take a risk because we werould be dead if we were monitored by cameras in the dark.

But I observed that his face had no expressions and guessed he was experienced toin scaleing the wall.

(In fact, the wall iwas not real wall.

consistent verb tense

yYou can consider it a railing,. I am used to use the word " wall" for it because it is also the wall of my heart.)

Suddenly he said "Would you like to leave here?"

I replied "sure, but how could I do it?"

"Sure, but how?" would be more natural.

I have seen his motivation when I saw a high wall in front ofbehind some trees.

a high wall in front of trees: How can you see the trees if a wall is in front of them.
a high wall behind some trees: I can see the wall through the trees.

Assuming your original text was correct, it might be better to describe it as a high wall with trees peeking out from behind it.

By "motivation", do you mean "intention?" As in:

> I realized his intentions when I saw a high wall behind the trees.

I was surprised that Hhe intended to scale the wall.

he/she/him/her do not get capitalized except at the start of the sentence.

But at this moment, I hesitated whether should I take a risk cause w. We were dead if we were monitored by cameras in the dark.

"'cause" is a casual contraction of "because" and you will tend to find it only in spoken English, not written English. When written, you must use the single-quote (') to indicate the contraction.

I put the period there just because it felt more natural to me as two sentences with the second sentence stating the reason for your hesitation as an implication.

But I observed his face had no expressions and guessed he was experienced tohad scaled the wall before.

When describing someone as "experienced" in something, the object should generally be an expertise like "writing," "crafting," "fishing," etc., but not specific actions like "scaling this wall". Though you might describe them as "an experienced wall climber."

Suddenly he said "Would you like to leave here?


Suddenly he said "Would you like to leave here?"

Suddenly, he said, "Would you like to leave here?

Suddenly he said "Would you like to leave here?"

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I replied "sure, but how could I do it?


I replied "sure, but how could I do it?"

"Sure, but how?" would be more natural.

I replied, "sSure, but how could I do it?"

I replied "sure, but how could I do it?"

I replied "sSure, but how could I do it?

He led me to an area that surrounded by trees.


He led me to an area that was surrounded by trees.

He led me to an area that was surrounded by trees.

He led me to an area that was surrounded by trees.

I have seen his motivation when I saw a high wall in front of trees.


I have seen his motivation when I saw a high wall in front ofbehind some trees.

a high wall in front of trees: How can you see the trees if a wall is in front of them. a high wall behind some trees: I can see the wall through the trees. Assuming your original text was correct, it might be better to describe it as a high wall with trees peeking out from behind it. By "motivation", do you mean "intention?" As in: > I realized his intentions when I saw a high wall behind the trees.

I have seenrealized his motivationes when I saw a high wall in front of the trees.

I'm guessing this is what you're trying to express?

I have seen his motivanoticed his intention when I saw a high wall in front of trees.

I have seenthen saw his motivation when I saw a high wall in front of trees.

I was surprised that He intended to scale the wall.


I was surprised that Hhe intended to scale the wall.

he/she/him/her do not get capitalized except at the start of the sentence.

I was surprised that Hhe intended to scale the wall.

I was surprised that Hhe intended to scale the wall.

I was surprised that Hbecause he intended to scale the wall.

But at this moment, I hesitated whether should I take a risk cause we were dead if we were monitored by cameras in the dark.


But at this moment, I hesitated whether should I take a risk cause w. We were dead if we were monitored by cameras in the dark.

"'cause" is a casual contraction of "because" and you will tend to find it only in spoken English, not written English. When written, you must use the single-quote (') to indicate the contraction. I put the period there just because it felt more natural to me as two sentences with the second sentence stating the reason for your hesitation as an implication.

But at this moment, I hesitated whether I should I take a risk because we werould be dead if we were monitored by cameras in the dark.

But aAt this moment, I hesitated whether should I take a risk because we werould be dead if we were monitored by cameras in the dark.

But at this moment, I hesitated whether should I take athe risk cause, we werould be dead if we were monitoredcaught by cameras in the dark.

But I observed his face had no expressions and guessed he was experienced to scale the wall.


But I observed his face had no expressions and guessed he was experienced tohad scaled the wall before.

When describing someone as "experienced" in something, the object should generally be an expertise like "writing," "crafting," "fishing," etc., but not specific actions like "scaling this wall". Though you might describe them as "an experienced wall climber."

But I observed that his face had no expressions and guessed he was experienced toin scaleing the wall.

But I observed that his face had no expressions and guessed he was experienced toin scale theing walls.

But I observed his face, it had no expressions and I guessed that he was experienced toin scale the wall.

(In fact, the wall is not real wall.


(In fact, the wall iwas not real wall.

consistent verb tense

(In fact, the wall iwas not real wall.

(In fact, the wall is not a real wall.

you can do anything that you conceive


you can do anything that you conceive

There's nothing wrong with this title but just curious why you use it?

yYou can do anything that you conceiveyou can dream of

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

you can consider it railing, I am used to use the word " wall" for it because it is also the wall of my heart.)


yYou can consider it a railing,. I am used to use the word " wall" for it because it is also the wall of my heart.)

yYou can consider it a railing,. I am used to use the word " wall" for it because it is also the wall of my heart.)

yYou can consider it railing, I am used to use the word " wall" for it because it is also the wall of my heart.)

you can do anything you can dream of


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