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voidKamen

March 20, 2024

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you can do anything you can dream of

The life of my senior middle school often was oppressive,but sometimes something happened by accident.And it gave deeply the impression on me.(if you can use better expression to describe this sentence,please correct it,I would much appreciate it)


我的高中生活经常是压抑的,但是有时也会出现意外,它给我留下了深刻的印象。

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you can do anything that you conceivean dream of

Alternative:
you can do anything that you can imagine

The life of mMy senior middle school oftenlife was oppressive,but sften depressing. Sometimes something happened by accident.A and it gave deeply themade a lasting impression on me.(iIf you can usecome up with a better expression to describeuse in this sentence, please correct it,. I would much appreciate it)

you can do anything that you conceive

The life of my senior middle school was often was oppressive, but sometimes something would happened by accident.A and it gleave a deeply the impression on me.(i (If you can use a better expression to describe this sentence, please correct it,Ido. It would be much appreciate it)d.)

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you can do anything that you conceivimagine

"Conceive" sounds a bit off here--more natural to say "anything you imagine" or "anything you can dream of."

The life of my senior middle school often was opdepressive,ng, but sometimes something happened by accident.A and it gave deeply themade a lasting impression on me.(iIf you can usethink of a better expression to describeuse in this sentence, please correct it,. I would much appreciate it.

"Oppressive" is usually used to describe a government or political power that oppresses its citizens, meaning it takes away their rights and freedom. "Depressing" is more like really sad, miserable.

"Made a lasting impression" is a set phrase that makes sense to use here.

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voidKamen

March 21, 2024

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I think the meaning of anything that you conceive describe "in your potential mind, you can not do it or you have no enough ability to do it , but in fact, you can do it. So how should I correct it.

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lkw

March 22, 2024

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I think that "you can do anything you can dream of" does capture the meaning you're describing :)

The life of my senior middleMy high school oftenlife was often oppressive,but sometimes something happened by accident.And it gave deeply the (depressing?), but sometimes accidents happened, which left a deep impression on me.(i (If you can use better expression to describes in this sentence, please correct it,. I would muchgreatly appreciate it.)

My high school life was often oppressive (depressing?), but sometimes accidents happened, which left a deep impression on me. (If you can use better expressions in this sentence, please correct it. I would greatly appreciate it.)

you can do anything that you conceive


you can do anything that you conceivimagine

"Conceive" sounds a bit off here--more natural to say "anything you imagine" or "anything you can dream of."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

you can do anything that you conceivean dream of

Alternative: you can do anything that you can imagine

The life of my senior middle school often was oppressive,but sometimes something happened by accident.And it gave deeply the impression on me.(if you can use better expression to describe this sentence,please correct it,I would much appreciate it)


The life of my senior middleMy high school oftenlife was often oppressive,but sometimes something happened by accident.And it gave deeply the (depressing?), but sometimes accidents happened, which left a deep impression on me.(i (If you can use better expression to describes in this sentence, please correct it,. I would muchgreatly appreciate it.)

My high school life was often oppressive (depressing?), but sometimes accidents happened, which left a deep impression on me. (If you can use better expressions in this sentence, please correct it. I would greatly appreciate it.)

The life of my senior middle school often was opdepressive,ng, but sometimes something happened by accident.A and it gave deeply themade a lasting impression on me.(iIf you can usethink of a better expression to describeuse in this sentence, please correct it,. I would much appreciate it.

"Oppressive" is usually used to describe a government or political power that oppresses its citizens, meaning it takes away their rights and freedom. "Depressing" is more like really sad, miserable. "Made a lasting impression" is a set phrase that makes sense to use here.

The life of my senior middle school was often was oppressive, but sometimes something would happened by accident.A and it gleave a deeply the impression on me.(i (If you can use a better expression to describe this sentence, please correct it,Ido. It would be much appreciate it)d.)

The life of mMy senior middle school oftenlife was oppressive,but sften depressing. Sometimes something happened by accident.A and it gave deeply themade a lasting impression on me.(iIf you can usecome up with a better expression to describeuse in this sentence, please correct it,. I would much appreciate it)

you can do anything you can dream of


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