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ryoh

May 13, 2020

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YOU ARE TIME TRAVELING!

You may have wished you could do a time travel. But think about the stars you can see in the sky at night. They are so far away from here that it takes billions or trillions of years for light to reach the earth. So how they look are actually how they looked billions or trillions of years ago. That is maybe when the earth was made, or when dinosaurs were still there!

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You may have wished you could do a time traveltravel in time.

They are so far away from here that it takes billions or trillions of years for light to reach the eEarth.

So how they look are(right now) is actually how they looked billions or trillions of years ago.

You don't have to add "right now" but it does add more nuance to the text.

That is maybe when the eEarth was made, or when dinosaurs were still there!

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Good job on your text!

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ryoh

May 13, 2020

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“the Earth ”or “Earth” which is correct?

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alix

May 13, 2020

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Both are correct but "Earth" sounds more natural when writing.

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ryoh

May 13, 2020

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Thank you!

YOU ARE TIME TRAVELING!


You may have wished you could do a time travel.


You may have wished you could do a time traveltravel in time.

But think about the stars you can see in the sky at night.


They are so far away from here that it takes billions or trillions of years for light to reach the earth.


They are so far away from here that it takes billions or trillions of years for light to reach the eEarth.

So how they look are actually how they looked billions or trillions of years ago.


So how they look are(right now) is actually how they looked billions or trillions of years ago.

You don't have to add "right now" but it does add more nuance to the text.

That is maybe when the earth was made, or when dinosaurs were still there!


That is maybe when the eEarth was made, or when dinosaurs were still there!

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